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fatjesus1993: Good luck on everything that is happening outside of your life as an author. I look forward to seeing you return and what you will continue or create at that time.

P.S keep a notebook with you to write down anything you may come up with that way you can continue to practice.

Nura Clans' First Young Master · C8
1 day ago
Good luck on everything that is happening outside of your life as an author. I look forward to seeing you return and what you will continue or create at that time.

P.S keep a notebook with you to write down anything you may come up with that way you can continue to practice. View More
Nura Clans' First Young Master · C8
2 days ago
Nine tailed fox View More
Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C0
1 week ago

cosmiccomment: why not eve? just give her a physical body and be done with it

The Chronicles of Elijah · C0
2 weeks ago

fatjesus1993: Xiaoyi Chen aka ISO would be a good choice.

I vote for Chen and if she won’t do than Moira Mactaggert.

Look them up and I believe you will find yourself pleased with them

The Chronicles of Elijah · C0
2 weeks ago
Xiaoyi Chen aka ISO would be a good choice.

I vote for Chen and if she won’t do than Moira Mactaggert.

Look them up and I believe you will find yourself pleased with them View More
The Chronicles of Elijah · C0
2 weeks ago

Shinkaio: Why does chose being another person

Against The Gods with an Anime System · C3
2 weeks ago

Kayox23: Read the Manga you will know

Against The Gods with an Anime System · C3
2 weeks ago

Kayox23: There are many characters who have the same personality and stronger than him like Byakuya from Bleach ..

Against The Gods with an Anime System · C3
2 weeks ago

Kayox23: If he picked Sinbad from Magi he can destroy all the realms in ATG with a thought i don't know why the majority of authors loves to choose Itachi

Against The Gods with an Anime System · C3
2 weeks ago

Weirdo: What?..

Harry Potter and Deathfalls · C38
2 weeks ago
I’m glad we are getting filled in on the background of this specific universe View More
The Strongest Samurai in a Naruto World · C7
2 weeks ago
Do what ever you would like it’s YOUR story. I will look forward to whatever will be coming next.

So thank you for your hard work, and I look forward to reading more. View More

HOT_potato: I will take into consideration what you have said and thank you for your opinion

Nura Clans' First Young Master · C0
2 weeks ago

fatjesus1993: 1. Yes

However only if the character could fit in the story. Bringing in yokai from other works of fiction would work, such as DXD, Natsume Yujinchou or bringing in monster girls from Monster Musume maybe or anyone else that would fit the bill.

For exorcists and normal humans you could do the same as well. Exorcists are pretty self explanatory like the yokai.

Normal humans would be characters from anime’s that take place in the modern world and that don’t have crazy sci-fi gadgets or mechs or magic.

Mainly no matter who you choose to join in the world of Nurahiyon, they must fit the kind of world it is. Normal humans, exorcists, and yokai(mythological creatures).

Since it’s japan and yokai act like yakuza, if you are to introduce yokai from other fiction, they could always be a faction that you can introduce as a whole. That rule over an area in Japan. Or if it’s solo they could have migrated here from another country. Since you could make up how yokai live there.

2. It was very good.

Nura Clans' First Young Master · C0
2 weeks ago
1. Yes

However only if the character could fit in the story. Bringing in yokai from other works of fiction would work, such as DXD, Natsume Yujinchou or bringing in monster girls from Monster Musume maybe or anyone else that would fit the bill.

For exorcists and normal humans you could do the same as well. Exorcists are pretty self explanatory like the yokai.

Normal humans would be characters from anime’s that take place in the modern world and that don’t have crazy sci-fi gadgets or mechs or magic.

Mainly no matter who you choose to join in the world of Nurahiyon, they must fit the kind of world it is. Normal humans, exorcists, and yokai(mythological creatures).

Since it’s japan and yokai act like yakuza, if you are to introduce yokai from other fiction, they could always be a faction that you can introduce as a whole. That rule over an area in Japan. Or if it’s solo they could have migrated here from another country. Since you could make up how yokai live there.

2. It was very good. View More
Nura Clans' First Young Master · C0
2 weeks ago

fatjesus1993: Also why can’t he continue to age? Wouldn’t it make more sense for him to stop aging after reaching maturity?

That way he would be looking like a 20-25 year old for eternity.

WTF I am in the Marvel Universe ! · C8
2 weeks ago
Also why can’t he continue to age? Wouldn’t it make more sense for him to stop aging after reaching maturity?

That way he would be looking like a 20-25 year old for eternity. View More

Tony_Wong: Thanks for the support. Will try to

WTF I am in the Marvel Universe ! · C8
2 weeks ago
Reading Status: C0
I’ll preface this by stating I haven’t read any of this book yet, at all. However I do have hopes for it based off of its synopsis.

I hope that the mc will choose the torture, why you ask?

Well that way once he somehow escapes he then will be able to jump dimensions with the help of some sort of god he helps escape with him. (That god will become his second enemy after the devil who gave him the ultimatum)

He will jump dimensions to gain powers, get a harem , or relax so that he can get rid of the devil. (That would be at the scale of a skirmish)

After he does this he will either get an ultimatum from that god. That will force him to give up everything and everyone he has and be allowed into the higher realm or something worse. And he has to go on to overcome more odds being more at the scale of a war rather than a skirmish.

Either leading to the end of the novel and some more little specials of them visiting more worlds or perhaps grander battles and an ending in the future.

But no matter how this novel goes I am greatly looking forward to reading it and finding out. View More
Killer of MC’s
2 weeks ago

fatjesus1993: Also not everyone knows shadow clones. They would never teach it in academy because it’s dangerous.

They only teach regular clone technique in academy. Along with a few other low lvl jutsu.

The Strongest Samurai in a Naruto World · C5
2 weeks ago
Also not everyone knows shadow clones. They would never teach it in academy because it’s dangerous.

They only teach regular clone technique in academy. Along with a few other low lvl jutsu. View More

animes_vitions: The **** do you mean Minato

The Strongest Samurai in a Naruto World · C5
2 weeks ago

animes_vitions: The **** do you mean Minato

The Strongest Samurai in a Naruto World · C5
2 weeks ago
I like the idea of the story however it’s very clunky.

The transitions aren’t smooth and key aspects of the story haven’t been explained to the reader.

I would like to see what this story would be like after being edited.

Other than that keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing you improve View More
Itas Adventure · C0
3 weeks ago
Way better than before, keep up the good work View More
My New Life in Danmachi World · C9
3 weeks ago
First View More
My New Life in Danmachi World · C9
3 weeks ago
Reading Status: C0
Well the author needs to change his name to cover the specific kink he is king of, because his current name is a bit to broad as it is........

If you like it you like it and if you don’t you don’t, but the author puts a lot of effort into his story.

Enjoy or be repulsed, however be warned you may just get sucked in to reading its entirety. I know from experience so if you read this and the synopsis and still decide to give it a try you have been warned.

Anyway the author is a very good writer and you might as well give it a try.

The worst you may get is a nightmare and a discovery of a new kink to add to your list. View More
The Broken Swordsman Of The Moon
3 weeks ago
I agree View More

Raze_: The sheer lack of character development is going to make me drop this novel if it continues in this manner.

My New Life in Danmachi World · C0
3 weeks ago

Raze_: The sheer lack of character development is going to make me drop this novel if it continues in this manner.

My New Life in Danmachi World · C0
3 weeks ago

fatjesus1993: Let’s be reborn into a HAREM universe, but even though I know that I would like to be able to hypnotize girls anyway......... wtf?

That’s a complete waste of a wish. The main mc was a giant perv and was still getting girls. What are you thinking.

The dual cultivation makes sense as a wish for this universe, if the MC is going to be op. However...... other than a system, the other wishes used don’t seem like they will get him there.

I also agree that your leveling system made no sense to me, which is why I usually vote for no levels just stats. I believe that is smoother and it works well if you plan on having the mc grind for improvements. It’s just another set of numbers that you need to keep track of otherwise.

Anyway I’m looking forward to seeing what will happen in your story. Good luck and keep up the hard work.

Reincarnating in highschool dxd with cheat · C2
4 weeks ago

DevilTriggered: I don't really understand how is his xp and stats working, but how much stats high demon have? Isn't he need to farm like eternity for 2 level up and I don't even now is it worth it, can he train by himself? Isn't he just shoot himself in a leg?

Reincarnating in highschool dxd with cheat · C2
4 weeks ago

LaZy_King19: please don't use hypnosis !!! it's not fun

Reincarnating in highschool dxd with cheat · C2
4 weeks ago
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