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Danny is always a solid choice but why not choose one of the Martell bastards to be a paramour too. Either Margery or Sansa I don’t see connecting well with the mc. However I am interested to see how you would make the relationships begin with my suggestion though since it would mean for the mc to go to Dorne and Essos. View More
Game of Thrones: The Lion-Blooded Witcher · C4
3 weeks ago

Masud37: yellow

Star Wars New Order · C12
3 weeks ago

Lumore: Different color

Star Wars New Order · C12
3 weeks ago
Assassin bug would be the best since his clan doesn’t thrive in cqc so having a summons that would help and or allow him to improve his own I see as the right solution. Assassin bugs would allow him to excel in a field where his bugs would still play a key role and would only help make him a master in. View More
Reincarnated as Shino Aburame in Naruto · C0
3 weeks ago
Reading Status: C31
This story has an OC in it, however as you read further it is still mainly a Bell focused novel. Which makes it impractical to read seeing as 90% of this book seems to be copy and pasted. I would not recommend reading this book. View More
danmachi:new adventure
1 month ago
Reading Status: C16
It’s like a robot is writing this... everything is very disconnected and it’s hard to get invested into the story. Would like to see a rewrite when the authors ability improves. View More
Shikamaru Nara
1 month ago

_SupremeBeing_: I don't think it was a good thing to say about the god, just say that he's a reincarnation..

Otaku in fairy tail · C7
3 months ago

Valhalla123: I don't like when they talk about past life

Otaku in fairy tail · C7
3 months ago

fatjesus1993: Good luck on everything that is happening outside of your life as an author. I look forward to seeing you return and what you will continue or create at that time.

P.S keep a notebook with you to write down anything you may come up with that way you can continue to practice.

Dropped..,. · C0
4 months ago
Good luck on everything that is happening outside of your life as an author. I look forward to seeing you return and what you will continue or create at that time.

P.S keep a notebook with you to write down anything you may come up with that way you can continue to practice. View More
Dropped..,. · C0
4 months ago
Nine tailed fox View More
Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C0
4 months ago

cosmiccomment: why not eve? just give her a physical body and be done with it

The Chronicles of Elijah · C0
4 months ago

fatjesus1993: Xiaoyi Chen aka ISO would be a good choice.

I vote for Chen and if she won’t do than Moira Mactaggert.

Look them up and I believe you will find yourself pleased with them

The Chronicles of Elijah · C0
4 months ago
Xiaoyi Chen aka ISO would be a good choice.

I vote for Chen and if she won’t do than Moira Mactaggert.

Look them up and I believe you will find yourself pleased with them View More
The Chronicles of Elijah · C0
4 months ago

Shinkaio: Why does chose being another person

Against The Gods with an Anime System · C3
4 months ago

Kayox23: Read the Manga you will know

Against The Gods with an Anime System · C3
4 months ago

Kayox23: There are many characters who have the same personality and stronger than him like Byakuya from Bleach ..

Against The Gods with an Anime System · C3
4 months ago

Kayox23: If he picked Sinbad from Magi he can destroy all the realms in ATG with a thought i don't know why the majority of authors loves to choose Itachi

Against The Gods with an Anime System · C3
4 months ago

Weirdo: What?..

Harry Potter and Deathfalls ( Hiatus ) · C38
4 months ago
I’m glad we are getting filled in on the background of this specific universe View More
The Strongest Samurai in a Naruto World · C7
4 months ago
Do what ever you would like it’s YOUR story. I will look forward to whatever will be coming next.

So thank you for your hard work, and I look forward to reading more. View More

HOT_potato: I will take into consideration what you have said and thank you for your opinion

Dropped..,. · C0
4 months ago

fatjesus1993: 1. Yes

However only if the character could fit in the story. Bringing in yokai from other works of fiction would work, such as DXD, Natsume Yujinchou or bringing in monster girls from Monster Musume maybe or anyone else that would fit the bill.

For exorcists and normal humans you could do the same as well. Exorcists are pretty self explanatory like the yokai.

Normal humans would be characters from anime’s that take place in the modern world and that don’t have crazy sci-fi gadgets or mechs or magic.

Mainly no matter who you choose to join in the world of Nurahiyon, they must fit the kind of world it is. Normal humans, exorcists, and yokai(mythological creatures).

Since it’s japan and yokai act like yakuza, if you are to introduce yokai from other fiction, they could always be a faction that you can introduce as a whole. That rule over an area in Japan. Or if it’s solo they could have migrated here from another country. Since you could make up how yokai live there.

2. It was very good.

Dropped..,. · C0
4 months ago
1. Yes

However only if the character could fit in the story. Bringing in yokai from other works of fiction would work, such as DXD, Natsume Yujinchou or bringing in monster girls from Monster Musume maybe or anyone else that would fit the bill.

For exorcists and normal humans you could do the same as well. Exorcists are pretty self explanatory like the yokai.

Normal humans would be characters from anime’s that take place in the modern world and that don’t have crazy sci-fi gadgets or mechs or magic.

Mainly no matter who you choose to join in the world of Nurahiyon, they must fit the kind of world it is. Normal humans, exorcists, and yokai(mythological creatures).

Since it’s japan and yokai act like yakuza, if you are to introduce yokai from other fiction, they could always be a faction that you can introduce as a whole. That rule over an area in Japan. Or if it’s solo they could have migrated here from another country. Since you could make up how yokai live there.

2. It was very good. View More
Dropped..,. · C0
4 months ago

fatjesus1993: Also why can’t he continue to age? Wouldn’t it make more sense for him to stop aging after reaching maturity?

That way he would be looking like a 20-25 year old for eternity.

WTF I am in the Marvel Universe ! · C8
4 months ago
Also why can’t he continue to age? Wouldn’t it make more sense for him to stop aging after reaching maturity?

That way he would be looking like a 20-25 year old for eternity. View More

Tony_Wong: Thanks for the support. Will try to

WTF I am in the Marvel Universe ! · C8
4 months ago
Reading Status: C0
I’ll preface this by stating I haven’t read any of this book yet, at all. However I do have hopes for it based off of its synopsis.

I hope that the mc will choose the torture, why you ask?

Well that way once he somehow escapes he then will be able to jump dimensions with the help of some sort of god he helps escape with him. (That god will become his second enemy after the devil who gave him the ultimatum)

He will jump dimensions to gain powers, get a harem , or relax so that he can get rid of the devil. (That would be at the scale of a skirmish)

After he does this he will either get an ultimatum from that god. That will force him to give up everything and everyone he has and be allowed into the higher realm or something worse. And he has to go on to overcome more odds being more at the scale of a war rather than a skirmish.

Either leading to the end of the novel and some more little specials of them visiting more worlds or perhaps grander battles and an ending in the future.

But no matter how this novel goes I am greatly looking forward to reading it and finding out. View More
Killer of MC’s
4 months ago

fatjesus1993: Also not everyone knows shadow clones. They would never teach it in academy because it’s dangerous.

They only teach regular clone technique in academy. Along with a few other low lvl jutsu.

The Strongest Samurai in a Naruto World · C5
5 months ago
Also not everyone knows shadow clones. They would never teach it in academy because it’s dangerous.

They only teach regular clone technique in academy. Along with a few other low lvl jutsu. View More

Sorria: The **** do you mean Minato

The Strongest Samurai in a Naruto World · C5
5 months ago

Sorria: The **** do you mean Minato

The Strongest Samurai in a Naruto World · C5
5 months ago
I like the idea of the story however it’s very clunky.

The transitions aren’t smooth and key aspects of the story haven’t been explained to the reader.

I would like to see what this story would be like after being edited.

Other than that keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing you improve View More
Itas Adventure · C0
5 months ago
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