Lighting_Breeze

9mth

Posted

Top quality webnovel original novel. World building is the best.

Lighting_Breeze

11mth

Commented

When be first came to the world or after some years? Three paragraphs and already we see contradictiory stuff written 😒

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Lighting_Breeze

1yr

Commented

Wouldn't expect to read about EU driving cycles here... WTLP

The salesperson immediately gave the introduction, "The hybrid powertrain at the heart of the Bentayga Odyssean Edition delivers Bentley's hallmark combination of exhilarating power in tandem with an impossibly refined ride. Its pairing of an advanced E Motor with a 3.0 litre twin-turbocharged V6 petrol engine can deliver a combined 456 bhp (462 PS) and 516 lb.ft (700 Nm) of torque. You can drive for at least 28 miles (45 km) on electric power only (WLTP) – a significant increase compared to the previous model."

Hundred Times Income Multiplier System

Urban · Alan_Wafula

Lighting_Breeze

1yr

Commented

Who can sleep on such a situation?!?

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The Extra's Survival

Fantasy · Mohitkumar

Lighting_Breeze

1yr

Commented

Stupid logic

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Lord of the Truth

War · TruthTeller

Lighting_Breeze

1yr

Posted

This is a really good story, with an interesting concept and MC and side characters. The big flaw it has is that some arcs go on for so much longer than I would like. I wanna see progression, real progression for example skipping to the future when arrived at the castle was nice. However returning to the past and spending 20 chapters was boring. Some past recalling would be cool 4 or 5 chapters would be acceptable. Reading a whole bunch of chapters like that was not.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

Lighting_Breeze

1yr

Posted

There are no low reviews and this novel definitely isn't so unbelievably good to justify this so I guess my review will also be removed, so I'll be short. It's not bad, but it's definitely not novel and not well thought. Mc often acts like an idiot and for no apparent reason everything goes well..there's no real tension. Also there are tons of chapters that don't contribute anything to the plot. Anyways as I said it's not bad, compared to the average novel in this platform.

Rise of The Anti God

Eastern · Resurgent

Lighting_Breeze

2yr

Commented

This is ridiculous 😬

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After reincarnating, I became a second generation villain

Eastern · abinn

Lighting_Breeze

2yr

Commented

Bye bye good English 😅

I became mindless monster who killed and killed and killed...

Martial Arts System

Action · Alekzi

Lighting_Breeze

2yr

Replied to JESTER_EMPIRE

Unfortunately a large harem

My Wife Is A General Who Killed Tens Of Thousands On The Battlefield

Eastern · My Daughter is too Cute

Lighting_Breeze

2yr

Posted

It's not perfect, but it's definitely a notch or two above most junk here. Recommended. Small issues consist of the inconsistencies that arise from the author's changes of mind while writing the novel and Japanese anime influences.

The Author's POV

Fantasy · Entrail_JI

Lighting_Breeze

2yr

Commented

Even though, instead of, since. Editor be more careful 😳

Since Skyheart City was not a big city, those who managed to emerge victorious in this competition were naturally no ordinary people.

Unable to Cultivate, I Can Only Raise Soul Pets

Games · Summer Harp

Lighting_Breeze

2yr

Commented

Just saying, but if someone knows French, English and Latin he can definitely understand some Spanish. If on top of that he is a genius he can even kind of communicate. If he has a ridiculous ability that makes him a quick thinker with eldetic memory then most likely be would be able to infer more than 60% of basic Spanish. Btw this is supposed to be 16th century (or whatever) Spanish, so it would be harder. But on the other hand closer to Latin

Words Leonel couldn't understand drifted from the hidden entrance. It became obvious quickly that he didn't have much time. All those who saw him come out of the hidden staircase were already dead. But, it was only a matter of time before they started looking for false walls.

Dimensional Descent

Fantasy · Awespec

Lighting_Breeze

2yr

Replied to CrimsonWolfAuthor

Thanks for the answer.. Yep I realised afterwards.. The misconception arose because you said that the death god was ashamed for the skills after Khan insulted them and most importantly bcs for me it doesn't make much sense that there is a pool from which heroes can choose, instead of being given skills that correspond to their God.. Imagine a hero of the God of fire having divine abilities related to water .. Anyway I get that supposedly the golds allied and they could have shared their abilities. And more importantly that you wanted to showcase how these super op abilities were not chosen

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Hero of Darkness

Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor

Lighting_Breeze

2yr

Commented

A swordsman fighting to the death and killing with a slap 😰

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Hero of Darkness

Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor

Lighting_Breeze

2yr

Commented

So stupid logic .. Maths and logic of the author are sooooooo bad

"Impossible!" shouted Malcolm in denial as never in his wildest dream did he imagine someone like Kahn being able to kill 6 giant minotaurs. Even a group of 30 won't be able to take them out together in a fight.

Hero of Darkness

Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor

Lighting_Breeze

2yr

Commented

Oh so not only author is bad at counting, but also gods 😳

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Hero of Darkness

Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor

Lighting_Breeze

2yr

Commented

What kind of maths are these? There are 8 heroes who picked 16 skills.There are 50 skills. And all except 3 were picked more than twice? 🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯 Hope this is not a system kind of world, with stats, or I guess even checking the numbers would drive me crazy