aswalzz

3yr

Commented

hmmmm. . its better if he command him to kill himself. . sighh

ch 74 [Uchiha Madara!]

The System: Civilian Shinobi

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aswalzz

3yr

Commented

great story but all i read is mc status. . can author just write what skill, level, mc stat etc that change in a simple way rather than write all of them then repeat it again n again. . just write mc full status at the end of the chapter ulif u want to satisfy yourself to write mc full status. .

ch 0 8 Chapter 8: Zombie Paladin!

Reincarnated as Issei with a Gamer System(DROPPED)

Anime & Comics · ShaggyJoestar69

aswalzz

3yr

Commented

wow. . mc x sasuke, clap3

ch 31 Anchor Vatican

Naruto: The Outsider {Dropped}

Anime & Comics · Nechrom

aswalzz

3yr

Commented

15 days without update. . please dont drop this author san. .

ch 42 Tsunade’s Training

Reborn as strongest In Naruto world

Anime & Comics · Crook_Shank

aswalzz

3yr

Commented

author please decide what mc be called in this story. . hatake yeruashi or erase? please slect one of them instead of using both. .i got irritated reading this. .n 1 more, please fix grammar. . there are too many typo or missing letter. .

ch 25 Chapter 25

Naruto: Time control

Anime & Comics · Gunitlo

aswalzz

3yr

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yeah that was some cool badass moment for mc. . but i think he should not do like that. . bcoz ur is already saved, n the kingdom destroyed is his fault. . furthermore he is leading happy life with his harem. . mc is so petty. . dont he realize at tht time gray is just a kid. . he is also a person who are transmigrated n mc also is a lawyer. .so he should have a better brain to make decision. . i can accept that he want to forgot his past, but. . .sighh. . whatever. .

ch 118 Settle The Past 2

Chairman of The Magic Council

Anime & Comics · akikan40

aswalzz

3yr

Commented

sigh. . ripping clothes? duh. . everytime they do hot activity they rip clothes? or rather mc ripped her clothe. . i cannot imagine how many clothe are ripped already. .

ch 218 No longer necessary

Dark Rebirth (An ATG Fanfic)

Book&Literature · Evil_Dragon

aswalzz

3yr

Commented

yeah,u are right author. . your ninja romantic harem comedy is totally shit. .

ch 16 My Ninja Romantic Comedy Is Wrong, As I Expected

The Legend of the Kyubi

Anime & Comics · GenoXX

aswalzz

3yr

Commented

thats y weak woman is a burden at the same time she will make u in paradise. .

ch 30 Iron Blood Wyvern

Isekai Absolute Copy and Online Shopping

Fantasy · wintermist1994

aswalzz

3yr

Commented

keep it up author

ch 129 125. A New Mission

Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife

aswalzz

3yr

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one of the most hated trait of mc, arriving late in action. .

ch 107 105. Attack On Uchiha Part-5

Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife

aswalzz

3yr

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well, i dont care for your mistake about foreshadowing but i dont agree your statement about human habit to repeat mistake. . we learn from our mistake, thats y we get more mature. . but if u repeat it, the it is a waste for god to give u a brain. .

ch 91 89. Shikkotsu Forest Part-1

Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife

aswalzz

3yr

Commented

habit to repeat mistake? .then that was stupid,. if u repeating mistake becme habit then just bash your head and feed your brain to the dog. .

ch 91 89. Shikkotsu Forest Part-1

Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife

aswalzz

3yr

Commented

thank u author. . u are so handsome. . i apologize for my word. . i thought kushina and minato die same in canon story. . i dont care about the sin or whatever. . i just dont want them to die, they are so pitiful. .their son had just born, and they die. . im sad when i watch in anime naruto true parent. .

ch 74 74. A New Jinchuruki

Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife

aswalzz

3yr

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damn u author. . in the end this is the same as the canon. . fak u

ch 73 73. The Unknown Assailant

Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife

aswalzz

3yr

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damn u author. .. u spoil this story. . i thought he will save minato and kushina. . damn u

ch 72 72. Nine-Tails attack Part-2

Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife

aswalzz

3yr

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hmmmm. . mc is so stupid that i have an urge to beat him. . y dont use the 'cheat' skill in naruto world jutsu. . **** him . . please realize the ultimate cheat clone technique. .

ch 61 Medical Ninjutsu Training Part-1

Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife

aswalzz

3yr

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one fact author write for medical is true in real world. . hahahaha. . every doctor i meet, i dont even understand what they write on the paper. . but im confuse how the worker in farmacy can understand the calighrapy writing of doctor. . hahahahahaaha. . maybe they also write like doctor. . so every medical student have their own calighrapy. . hahaha

ch 26 26. Fuinjutsu Training

Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife

aswalzz

3yr

Commented

damn u author. . u keep nerfing mc then buff him a bit but keep nerfing him for longer time. .

ch 60 Otsuki Kaguya

Reincarnated In Naruto [Naruto Fan-Fic]

Anime & Comics · Heaven_Sage

aswalzz

3yr

Commented

i thought mc is a bit like sasuke. . in the end he is just a boy who is controlled by a girl. . i mean ino in this story is annoying same as sakura in the anime. . she keep tobi here, tobi there. . i dont mean to critic author, but i as a man who annoyed when woman soo clingy to me dont like this girl (ino) in this story. . i dont like when mc had no voice over his opinion. . btw, this is a good story

ch 33 [The Dungeon: Remnants of the massacre!! Part -1]

The System: Civilian Shinobi

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