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Interesting novel that is simultaneously horribly bad and quite interesting. The core idea is interesting and the pace of development quite rapid. The novel is engaging and despite all its weaknesses i've read more than 1k chapters at this point and will continue to read. That being said, here is an short list of SOME major weaknesses: 1. Horrifically bad writing/editing that reaches the level of pig English at times. Forget about grammar, sentence structure, correct word usage... half the time you will have only the vaguest idea what the author wants to say and need to rewrite whole passages in your head to make it legible. 2. Author and MC are extreme white knights. Every woman in the novel is hyper powerful, hyper beautiful and every time they speak their voice is like angelic chorus caressing the MC's soul. Thats almost a quote btw. Yeah. Males barely exist in this novel and if there are any they are either forgettable side characters or loathsome villain bastards. Its not obvious at the start but this gets increasingly clearer with the novel's progression. 3. Power structure is an endless climb with new hyper powerful mega elite never before heard of levels being created every 50 chapters. MC is also getting earth shattering unique opportunities to advance every 50 chapters but despite that all his girlfriends are always as powerful or more powerful than him btw. As i said, novel is objectively horrible on many levels but like nicotine, just can't seem to kick it so far.
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