Leoff

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Thanks a lot to the translator. But the whole chapter is just a squeeze of stupid misunderstandings. Waste of time, an attempt by the author to increase the volume. Remove all these surprises and explanations a thousand times and a normal novel will become, in 500 chapters...

ch 4202 How Did Things Turn Out This Way?

War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens

Eastern · Feng Qing Yang

Leoff

1yr

Replied to EyeOfSilver

True, if you take the absolute majority. The problem is that some people take everything literally.

Everything had been settled when it came to Harry and the day passed. Everyone was gathered for the end of year feast, with the Great Hall decorated in Blue to celebrate Ravenclaws winning of the House cup again, and Slytherin being a close second. My housemates we're celebrating in a lively manner, but here came Dumbledore to rain on their parades. And yup, just enough points for Gryffindor to swoop in from third place and win it all. This caused my house to become half depressed and half angry at Harry and his friends, Slytherin became even more unhappy since they not only lost, but now the cup went to their rival house, and Hufflepuff was just siting looking a bit out of it, but nothing had changed for them so they didn't really care. With only one house really celebrating the end of the year, the feast ended and students went to the Hogwarts Express once again.

Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey

Leoff

1yr

Posted

The author is not aware that 6 billion players can drown any quest and any boss with saliva, and he is trying to tell us that they hung out there in one location. Also with the type of game, army recruitment. Damn, it just doesn’t fit in my head, how you can write such guano and not even blush. 10,000 active players, you can’t breathe, you can’t fart, so that no one is around. And this is even without NPC The world of 6 billion should be updated every minute, locations should be endless and edgeless, and also updated once a minute. You went to a concert or a football match, in each location there are 100 times more people, I don’t even want to imagine that. And the cities? It's only the players, but also the NPC and the army of players, well, fuck. Such writers cannot be without gigantism where it is not fucking needed, or come up with a plausible reason and possibility. There is also a problem with mathematics, in each chapter someone cannot multiply a number by 10,000. Always different answers are obtained. We are told in each chapter 90% of the time how cool and unattainable this whole, x10000 system is, and in the next chapter someone is already catching up. It seems to you that it cannot be worse, and you are at the very bottom, but then someone knocks from below. This idiocy hardly falls into the category of "wet dream of a schoolboy" and approaches the category of "I'm 30 autistic and I dream of feeding you shit, mimicking a writer." To all the defenders of this garbage, I want to say that it's very nice that you can find a plot where even the author did not foresee it. They save on your brain, you get dumber while reading this. I warned you.

Tribe: I Become Invincible With My 10,000x Bonus From The Start

Fantasy · Strange Human

Leoff

1yr

Commented

Why doesn't he multiply his ego by 10,000 and win the game in half a day? For 10 chapters, he has already told his entire story. The rest of the chapters are needed so that he walks around and boasts to others, and also solves his petty insults from the last time? Pitiful little man.

ch 11 Virus Sample, Hidden Quest

Tribe: I Become Invincible With My 10,000x Bonus From The Start

Fantasy · Strange Human

Leoff

1yr

Commented

I hope the author is aware that in order for a billion players to use 1 location, like this foggy forest, this forest must be dimensionless? And in general, the author or translator can use a calculator, the numbers are always different ... At the very beginning there were 500,000 points for the lord's task, now 300,000. Greedy little man.

ch 10 Kill the Boss. World-famous.

Tribe: I Become Invincible With My 10,000x Bonus From The Start

Fantasy · Strange Human

Leoff

1yr

Posted

A tale about an asshole who basically makes trouble wherever he goes. Good that he received from other people, remembers selectively. His serious behavior looks like a mentally retarded. It's even funnier that the author makes him look like a good guy when he solves problems. And the fact that he created 95% of these problems himself, the author tactfully (no) is silent.

Gourmet of Another World

Eastern · Li Hongtian

Leoff

1yr

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First, where is his guard, who was appointed by his master for 100 years? Second, why is he so dumb? Joanna must know the names of those who were in charge of the academy and generally strong people when the kingdom was still intact. Does it bother anyone that the names will be the same as those that are there during their training? It annoys me alone how the author simply ignores common sense? And his stupid questions - "Hmm, it's strange why this or that one seems familiar to me?" And how did he behave in the world of illusion? And this is the best genius that has been chosen in the entire existence of their universe? Then if they are destroyed, the loss will be small)

ch 1061 Meeting with the Superior Gods

Astral Pet Store

Eastern · Ancient Xi

Leoff

1yr

Replied to Leoff

I read a little further, to paraphrase, he's just a nerd who rides on luck. The author forgets that his plot armor is simply present in every word. No skills, only pittance from the author. Cretin and idiot, ashamed to read ...

Astral Pet Store

Eastern · Ancient Xi

Leoff

1yr

Posted

I admit - the story is interesting, easy to read. But here is chapter 1018, and there the author subtly (no) hints that Su Ping is "the most prominent chosen one of all" universes "". Oh my god, he's an idiot, complete and total, what kind of universe is there if this is the best thing for its entire existence?)

Astral Pet Store

Eastern · Ancient Xi

Leoff

1yr

Replied to Forrest_Forbush

Before google translate, it was funny.

Hogwarts Castle was a large, seven-story lofty building supported by magic. It had a hundred and forty-two (142) staircases throughout its many towers and turrets and deep dungeons. The castle was built in the late Early Middle Ages (c. 993) by a wizard architect and the four most celebrated wizards of the age: Godric Gryffindor, Helga Hufflepuff, Rowena Ravenclaw, and Salazar Slytherin.

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

Leoff

1yr

Commented

Man, for example, I'm just toxic, I very rarely use comments just to thank the author for his work. Most often this is constructive criticism or stupid sarcasm. I see the comment function for just that. For frankly stupid stories - frankly stupid sarcasm. For interesting ones, I really try to look for errors in the logic of the narrative or those things that the author simply forgets about. You have an interesting story and I really like it. Thanks for the work you've done! I hope you don't give up because of bad reviews, they are not worth it. Focus on the good reviews, with such a cool fic there are many more I'm sure.

ch 272 Announcement

I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)

Movies · AlienWarlord

Leoff

1yr

Commented

And what he is afraid of dying, obviously, no matter what the villains come up with, the author will "fix" him.

So using the medical knowledge that he knows, the one that he had to learn to use his Quirk to such high levels. He slowly controls the iron sand and heats it using electricity, he does so till the iron sand is sizzling, then he puts it on his back, burning his wound shut. Tears come out of his eyes, but he has covered himself with iron sand now so no one can see him wallow in pain.

My Hero Academia: Reborn as Denki Kaminari (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · HolyJoker

Leoff

1yr

Commented

Better to die like his brother, like a dog? Two paragraphs ago it said he was an adult? Does not look like it...

But in reality, he was trying to tell the exam proctors to continue and that they don't need to get immediate medical attention. Because he knows what will happen once he is pulled out of here, he will lose terribly. That fate, one of a loser is something that Kaminari will never accept. Because as soon as he does, he will never be able to stop losing, that is the sad reality of the situation, as once someone is okay with something, the high standard that he has put on himself will be lowered.

My Hero Academia: Reborn as Denki Kaminari (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · HolyJoker

Leoff

1yr

Commented

Honestly, the way he talks so loudly at the beginning of each of his sentences is a way to make people pay attention to him and express dominance. While he does that intentionally or instinctively is kinda unknown. Some people train to do it and some are born with it. To me, that is a useless thing, as I never wanted to be in a leadership position. Though I did know a guy who was sparingly good of raising his voice in a situation to make everyone listen to him.

My Hero Academia: Reborn as Denki Kaminari (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · HolyJoker

Leoff

1yr

Commented

Of course, it's disgusting to say this, I want to think people are better than this. Then you look around, sometimes at yourself, and it becomes clear - no, it’s not better ...

Plus Momo is pretty enough for me to enjoy spending the rest of my life with. Even if I never get around to truly loving her. Her physical appearance would still be enough and her personality isn't that bad either. True love is something eternal if Momo burned her face off, would I still love her with her ugly appearance? The answer is no.