Yurie - Profile

I quite like the story. It is a nice power fantasy with a clear power scale and progress climbing it. The downsides dragging it down are more numerous though. The writing is clearly made by somebody that has English as a second language. There are always a few minor mistakes in each chapter, though nothing that detracts from understanding. The story pacing is a bit odd. You have the author set something up as important, only to go do a side quest for 15 chapters before getting back to it. I think the school combined with a life at the side suffers a lot from this. Where we get into the school and what will happen next, only to suddenly have a massive battle arc in the middle. The characters have thought put into them. The problem is that they might be a bit too pure or extreme. The complexity of a character is only there for the main cast. The antagonists and side characters feels very straightforward, having one main defining feature and nothing else. The world is also strange. You would not expect to have a country with tech similar to earth and then go to large cities in another country where that has no impact apart from a translator they sell. An example from earth would be synthetic clothes and coca cola, you find them where people are living in mud huts.