hanck

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10mth

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It is the most important question with that divine gold. Maybe it is "creating" gold or materializing your divinity and this is "gold". With technology, one can get to synthesize metals like gold, but in a natural way, it is only born or created with the "birth" and "death" of a star... Said in a simple and poetic way, there is more background and reactions (reactions of chemical gaseous metallurgical substances and all with the help and trigger of high gravity and temperature). But eh, being a world where concepts and laws materialize, changing or altering reality. The "gold" is something as valuable as the "representation" of the "birth" of the world or the "destruction" of stars and planets.

ch 427 The Divine Gold

Last Egg: Reincarnated as a Dragon in a Game

Fantasy · AnonymUser

hanck

10mth

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...it seems to me that if she doesn't hurry she will obtain all the fragments of the first flame and absorb all the authority of the "first flame". I just hope that Exilen reaches the authority of "god of the first flame" with another fragment or by being stronger because if not...

ch 158 [Bonus chapter] Goddess of the First Flame

hanck

1yr

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all the supposed "information" collected from the system (myths, monsters, magic, ki, etc, etc of the protagonist) of the protagonist and its emphasis on his intelligence, etc, etc. However, here is the first inconsistency, the leeches. what do I mean? Those negate leeches without eyes (outside of what the main character is, a supposed red leech with eyes) should be guided by temperature and vibration to perceive their environment. what do I mean? the protagonist, being like another leech does not have enough temperature and "warm blood" (in fact, being a leech its temperature should be low and almost imperceptible due to its biological stricture, in a technological temperature sensor it would be "blue" and in "bibration "Even if it is "pursued" by another leech, it is not a large enough body to be called "prey"). Technically it should be just as "tightened" with the other leeches as it is to be attacked just like that. it is more likely to be approached by the pieces of meat from the rabbit or, being a "monster leech" perhaps by the two-headed wolf (if instead of temperature or vibration it is by "mana/qi/ki/spiritual perception").

As I watched the wolf go I felt a bite on my tail and looked back scared, I realized that there was what looked like another leech biting me on the tail and trying to pull it from me, this leech unlike me who is red was black and had no eyes.

Will of chaos

Fantasy · Pendragon_DNT

hanck

1yr

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ok this has left me somewhat out of square. I don't know if it's related to being a primal and about Aiden's true origin, but if it is... this is already talking about major scales. But if he talks about his "identity" as an ancient dragon... It can be quite a troublesome misunderstanding and bring false hope. Although I doubt that it is this theory and, really mind she suspects that he is a primal and, perhaps also the origin of him.

"Even if I can't check what happened to you, I'm glad that you seem to be fine, Aiden. Once you wake up, I hope we can sit down and talk. If what I think is true, then you are her son… If it's true…" she turned her head, facing the window. Silently, as tears started to flow down on her wrinkled face, she wept, mourning someone she thought she lost forever.