Cromir

24d

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well written, lot of character interactions, not a power trip.

Is it Wrong to Put Skyrim in Danmachi

Anime & Comics · One_Fall_Leaf

Cromir

11mth

Commented

Thank you. Both endings were pure diamonds.

ch 137 GOOD ENDING (NOT CANON(???))

One Piece: Injustice Corrected

Anime & Comics · AgentMonke

Cromir

1yr

Commented

I think it would be better with single reincarnation instead of chain of them. Instead of starting from begining start from an major event. Tell the mc background with many small flashbacks to the past. use flashbacks also guide readers to understand how MC came to conclusions in whatever situation he is in. occasionaly. I think this was how this was writen before and for me it worked lot better than this newly written start.

ch 77 the cycle begins again(test)

Cromir

1yr

Commented

How do Marines know who imprisoned Croc? I dont recall anyone telling their name while reporting it. Dont think marines have power to force rulers of Alabasta to tell anything if they dont want to. Dead men tell no tales. Many questions i cant recall them being answered. If i missed the explanation from previous chapters, I ask your forgivness for my short memory.

Master4thWall Note: Didn't think people would suggest killing Croc and his team, when a Vice-Admiral renowned enough to surprise Hashirama was here. What's his answer gonna be when they ask why he killed imprisoned enemies? Even if he made a believable answer, he will still be pulled to the base, which might not be a good development for his sister's recruitment.

In One Piece, as Hashirama Senju

Anime & Comics · Master4thWall

Cromir

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter. Awesome work so far.

ch 41 Crushing the opposition

Blood And Iron GoT)

TV · Chill_ean_GUY

Cromir

1yr

Commented

I have no love for murderers and even less for characters who let them go free from punishment. For me enjoyment of this fanfic dropped to near 0. Will check couple new chapters after this but might stop reading if i dont find any enjoyment from them.

ch 65 Chapter 64

BNHA: Singularity

Anime & Comics · Einlion

Cromir

1yr

Commented

Thank god.

Exhaling through his nose, Izuku replied, "I really didn't want to do this..." before punching Toga in the gut. The latter was one of the more popular 'waifus' in the Boku no Hero Academia community, but he didn't have the option to try and reform her. She was a mass murderer and well above the age to be tried as an adult. Her circumstances were undeniably tragic, but that wouldn't bring back all the people she had killed...

BNHA: Singularity

Anime & Comics · Einlion

Cromir

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter. Would be interesting to see what would happen if Severus didnt participate in the turnament. If going by original book words there is certain ambiguity to what was stated about the binding of magic contract. Imo the person who puts the named paper in the goblet signs it instead of the person whos name is writen and would suffer the consequences.

ch 64 64) Saving a maiden

Transmigrated into Severus Snape with Golden Trio back in Time

Book&Literature · Jerry153

Cromir

1yr

Commented

1v1 with an older lady should be enough. imo first experience could be with more conservative lady. second run to be eregon getting humbled. multiple encounters. Then girls.

ch 52 temp chap

GoT: Break the Wheel

Book&Literature · Pretending_Author

Cromir

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter. Imo fight scene lasted 2 long and i did get annoyed by the "unreadable" text.

ch 24 Chapter 22: Machia

Danmachi: Reborn with EMIYA's Powers

Anime & Comics · Feniurme

Cromir

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter

Extra chapter, 10 comments in THIS paragraph or 10 reviews regardless of rating (cumulative)considering those in the previous chapter

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TV · Chill_ean_GUY

Cromir

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter. As a wife candidate. must be a highborn with some political benefit. possibility of an OC. hope she wont be an targaryen.

ch 17 Celebrations

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TV · Chill_ean_GUY

Cromir

1yr

Replied to Chill_ean_GUY

looking at the brittish rule over india with warying means about 200 years. both sides need to adapt not only prussians but also locals. ruling can be biliteral with Tyrells in some aspects. or just an puppet state. your not wrong saying that it would have its own challenges but there is an possibility to have it work for Hohen. you prolly had main storyline writen already. so not expecting anything but great writing to continue. 👍

ch 0 9 The battle of trident

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TV · Chill_ean_GUY

Cromir

1yr

Commented

Thanks for chap. I think it would be waste to not keep Reach even if there is a potential religious uprising. Hohen has 100000 or so men. how are his men going to adapt life in new world if they are sent to wasteland without a chance to make families and have children of their own. some might as well leave the Prussian army to join other forces for that reason, fanatics or not.

ch 0 9 The battle of trident

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TV · Chill_ean_GUY

Cromir

1yr

Commented

ofc we want. as long as it does not effect future chapters in quality or quantity. stay well

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TV · Chill_ean_GUY

Cromir

1yr

Commented

multiple Veelas in bedroom.

the next attack happens in chapter 40 which gives the readers 3 days to guess what creature will attack next (please guess once)

The Slytherin Magus

Book&Literature · _Ink_

Cromir

1yr

Commented

How can you fit 800 men in there?

The crew for such a ship was made of the best sailors available, experienced and strong! Eight hundred men between sailors, soldiers, and cleaning staff.

Game of Thrones: Dovahkiin

TV · Caio_Bernardo

Cromir

1yr

Commented

For me Tsunade is the only one to have possible mindset to get atleast 1 eye implanted after battle with Hanzo. If implanted she would prolly hide the fact until she feels it would not effect her standing in eyes of other leaders of Konoha.

And any theories of what might happen if Tsunade, or let's Mikoto or Kushina do pop in one of these bad boys? (Rinnegan.)

Filthy Gamer in Narutoverse

Anime & Comics · FanHarem

Cromir

2yr

Replied to Cromir

maybe it was just the sudden appearance of the beastman party and their words that threw me out of the loop.

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IIIShameIII

Anime & Comics · IIIShameIII

Cromir

2yr

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like later part of the chapter had so many scene changes and pov? changes. it made it bit hard for me to understand the overall picture that you were trying to paint. no grammar issues.

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Anime & Comics · IIIShameIII

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