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5d

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i wonder why not resigned and go to other company. I dont believe that there's no option here. the aithor's writing plot has a potential. but it is not a cup of tea for those logical and detailed oriented readers. I admit i like the "romance" between the main characters but i dont find the situation and even the characters decision aligned with each other. it seems cliche that it looks like the part is from another story plots that was combined and rumbled making it a mess somehow. or it is a bit childish? Well enjoy reading!

In that instant, Long Xue got up and curiously asked: "You are really let this opportunity to go to Yeyi?"

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why would she afraid? she's an international. model haven't she? it wont controlled by a single company and can have other from outside .

Wang Hui's plan was clear if Lee Xuiye wanted to save her career, she would come to him and compromised as per his accord or if she didn't want to save, then indirectly benefits went to his beloved daughter Wang Yeyi.

Cool CEO and his Model Wife

Urban · Dlchelwani

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5d

Commented

author, how unstable your characters were. lol

Song Zhilan saw a determination in Mo Lingtan eyes. She knew no one could change his decision if he had made once. Even, Song Zhilan didn't like his decision, she never forced him for anything. For her, it was their life and as an elder, she only wanted them to be happy.

Cool CEO and his Model Wife

Urban · Dlchelwani

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5d

Commented

some part has too many redundant worda in the paragraph. its a bit bumpy to read.

ch 0 7 "Then, Ohhh…My God….Lingtan, don't tell me, you like men…Huh?"

Cool CEO and his Model Wife

Urban · Dlchelwani

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5d

Commented

bit the elder wang acknowledge it. so it wasnt a big deal if the father wont agree

Qi Zhu hesitantly replied "President Wang hasn't announced the cancellation of the engagement. It seems that he doesn't have any intention to cancel the engagement and even he called Miss Lee in his office today, I think Wang Family is exerting pressure on Miss Lee for this engagement".

Cool CEO and his Model Wife

Urban · Dlchelwani

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12d

Commented

its also against the law to tolerate a wrong doings lol. nepotism in tolerating the wrong is unaaceptable lol

She said softly, "I will think about it carefully, aunt. I also hope Shen Qiang could realize her mistakes."

Matchmade To Mr CEO

Urban · Southern Dreams

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12d

Commented

i really dont understand the logic of fl's wrecking herself lol. is it really real in the system?

ch 290 Chapter 291: Ruining Her Reputation and Dignity

Mr Gu's First Doting Marriage

Urban · Feng Family's Seventh Child

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13d

Replied to marsa

i dont if shes still the fl or the villainess. whats the real score of this stupidity

ch 288 Chapter 289: Plot Twist

Mr Gu's First Doting Marriage

Urban · Feng Family's Seventh Child

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13d

Commented

this is too dramatic and childish. i dont if xia yangtang is stupid or what lol. constantly falling in traps making a fool out of herself

ch 288 Chapter 289: Plot Twist

Mr Gu's First Doting Marriage

Urban · Feng Family's Seventh Child

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15d

Commented

i really hate this kind of fl. very stupid

Jiang Yuzhu looked at Shen Qiang, wavering slightly. After all, they had grown up together. In her previous memories, Shen Qiang was always the younger sister, cheerfully following her around.

Matchmade To Mr CEO

Urban · Southern Dreams

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16d

Commented

huh?

ch 283 Chapter 284: Red Carpet Accident

Mr Gu's First Doting Marriage

Urban · Feng Family's Seventh Child

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16d

Commented

the romance plot is good .i like how the couple is really good to each other. but the conflicts and troubles or problems and scandal is a bit tangled making the plot hmmm i dont know if its poor. sorry author. i guess they can express each other without too much scheming. it is not in normal lives that you show love by always in a conflict? im not sure

ch 296 Chapter 296: Special Conditioning_1

Matchmade To Mr CEO

Urban · Southern Dreams

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16d

Commented

what a stupid girl. always entering in every problem and scandal. she have not solved the first problem previously

A hint of coldness flashed in Jiang Yuzhu's eyes. She said, "Don't worry. I know how to handle it."

Matchmade To Mr CEO

Urban · Southern Dreams

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22d

Commented

hmm to be honest , i really love the interaction of jingchuan and yuzhu. its really good. but author, if you notice your throwing a lot of stress and problem to yuzhu and it seems that there is no solution or the problem is not yet solve then you throw another problem. i fear that instead the character grows, she will die early of the stress and she will pull another character to die early lol

ch 284 Chapter 284: Great Tolerance _1

Matchmade To Mr CEO

Urban · Southern Dreams

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23d

Commented

huh? didnt he make the coffee himself. ? and isnt it a bit unhygenic

He wasn't tasting it because Dunice didn't trust him but because she was once poisoned by a staff member in the office and since then he volunteered to always taste all the food she's going to be eating at the office.