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Didn't Hansoo boast that he would become the Demon King? I don't see anything of that sort...
He is nice to thiefs, even gives them tips, he saves their lives, gifts them a bunch of crystals and basically shows them the secret to become a transcendent.
He doesn't act like a Demon King at all... but more like a Hero :( View More
Reincarnator · C318
15 hours ago
Well, okay, granted, getting killed for attempted rape alone is a bit harsh.

But the girl didn't order his death as far as I remember. And the girl shouldn't be taken responsible for other peoples actions.

And just due to the death of this guy he got the chance to take over this body. So he should be thankful instead?! 🤔 View More

Teas: Whether it's morally right or not, he was killed due to the girl's efforts to rouse her white knights.

I think most people would throw morality out the window to save their life, and take revenge over someone who tried to (or in this case did) kill them.

All in all, it makes sense for him to take revenge. Not saying he is right to do so, but his motivation to take revenge is not far-fetched.

Warlock of the Magus World · C1
1 day ago

Daya17: Hmm

Dual Cultivation · C1
1 day ago
I wouldn't be completely against writing a story. But I feel like it isn't something for me. I have difficulties to write my ideas down in words so that they tell a story. In school when writing an essay I always got a 4 (1 is best, 6 is worst). Maybe one day I will try...

And if I would write something about vampires, then it wouldn't be from Twilight. I don't know much about Twilight and hate it for that what I know. It would be more or less an original with inspiration from True Blood, Hellsing and two other original stories about vampires I read on RoyalRoad ^_^

Or it might be a fanfiction about Naruto or Harry Potter. That are the two fandoms I am most familiar with.

Or another work/fandom I am familiar with 🤔 View More

Thefirst12: Smart. Maybe you should write a twilight story to, I will be the first to read it.
And author your story is still very good just the chapters are really short and you take a lot of time to publish a chapter but do what you want I dont judge.

Becoming Immortal · C13
1 day ago

DaoistMasterJohn: Sigh. For me personally the story had potential, but in the end it isn't for me. There are too many things that annoy me.

For one thing that he simply left his family for years, even though he said 3 months. And as a result his son died such a meaningless death. The MC knew that chosen as a sacrifice couldn't be anything good, but he kept it to himself, congratulations. If he had simply returned after 3 months or warned his family...

And then, all his time training, didn't do anything. He lost in mind arts, which he trained for years! And he was turned before he could max his powers, or gain more children for that matter. So much plot for nothing. It feels forced. To hurry his transformation, nerf the MC and let a tragedy befall him.

The MC should have simply dragged the woman to his home after his initial 2 months of training to continue it there. And the female vampire could have been friendly. Or if not, then the moment the venom destroyed the chains around his core, the venom could have been burned with his fire power, letting him stay a human without those restrains. Letting him become stronger and stronger before his transformation some day.

Becoming Immortal · C13
1 day ago

DaoistMasterJohn: Ah, don't mind my previous message. I found it. Thanks to google reverse image search :)
The minotaur sure seems to have a small one... 😅

Becoming Immortal · C1
1 day ago
Sigh. For me personally the story had potential, but in the end it isn't for me. There are too many things that annoy me.

For one thing that he simply left his family for years, even though he said 3 months. And as a result his son died such a meaningless death. The MC knew that chosen as a sacrifice couldn't be anything good, but he kept it to himself, congratulations. If he had simply returned after 3 months or warned his family...

And then, all his time training, didn't do anything. He lost in mind arts, which he trained for years! And he was turned before he could max his powers, or gain more children for that matter. So much plot for nothing. It feels forced. To hurry his transformation, nerf the MC and let a tragedy befall him.

The MC should have simply dragged the woman to his home after his initial 2 months of training to continue it there. And the female vampire could have been friendly. Or if not, then the moment the venom destroyed the chains around his core, the venom could have been burned with his fire power, letting him stay a human without those restrains. Letting him become stronger and stronger before his transformation some day. View More
Becoming Immortal · C13
1 day ago
Urgh, I hate Twilight. Twisting vampires to something else altogether -.-' View More

SpareTire: Twilight vampires don't get stronger or weaker over time. The first year of their life is their newborn phase when they still have their human blood inside their body which makes them much stronger than other vampires, but after that year the venom will have consumed all the blood bringing them down to a normal vampires strength

Becoming Immortal · C11
1 day ago

SnowLove: The transformation was disappointing for me as, it felt a lot like plot armor, oh my I’m getting attacked and think I’m about to die but oh well, let me just power up and bam he is free really *face palm*, it’s fine though as I still enjoyed it thank you for the chapter

Becoming Immortal · C9
1 day ago

ErozothDraeor: really? he is looking for vampires and his "mind played tricks on him"?

Becoming Immortal · C8
1 day ago

SnowLove: Hey man I don’t he would be that dumb to just write off something he sees as imagination, this is especially dumb because he has express the ability to understand that he’s living in a supernatural world, but then write something so easy to see it’s supernatural as nothing, that’s just dumb, unless that girl had a power that hides her so she goes unnoticed but even then if you notice her once then she should be present already, or another power that erases her ever appearing within someones mind but then what if the she can’t control it so no one ever remember her, ten how was she able to survive as a baby or did her power manifest later in life, but it also looks like she could be immortal/vampire, but yeah I’m just annoyed that the main characters being a dumb-buttocks when the super natural exist.

Becoming Immortal · C8
1 day ago

leylinn: sigh, lol the good old 'only my imagination' while in a setting where there are supernatural powers...

Becoming Immortal · C8
1 day ago
Yeah, I hate Twilight, but I gave this fanfiction a chance because it plays 4000 years before canon and features a cool MC. So, not bad until now. View More

Dogtooth_Katakuri: Oh god! I don't believe what I am saying right now but this might be the best...gulp....TWILIGHT fanfic ever or my first one anyway.

Becoming Immortal · C6
1 day ago

Dogtooth_Katakuri: Oh god! I don't believe what I am saying right now but this might be the best...gulp....TWILIGHT fanfic ever or my first one anyway.

Becoming Immortal · C6
1 day ago
Ah, by the way, I think you don't know the difference between "my self" and "myself". I am not too sure myself, but I think "myself" may have been right more often than not. View More
Becoming Immortal · C6
1 day ago
But are werewolves immortal? 🤔 View More

FatihKrsmn: I think werewolfs are better than vampires. It would be good if he become werewolf.

Becoming Immortal · C4
1 day ago
Me too... but I found it via google ;) View More

StressedByHW: Ah man I wanted to see that, no homo though

Becoming Immortal · C1
1 day ago
Ah, don't mind my previous message. I found it. Thanks to google reverse image search :)
The minotaur sure seems to have a small one... 😅 View More

SpareTire: Fixed. Thanks for pointing that out! 😁👍

Becoming Immortal · C1
1 day ago
A***, I wanted to see that 🙁😅 View More

SpareTire: Fixed. Thanks for pointing that out! 😁👍

Becoming Immortal · C1
1 day ago

Keyang27: What? That ending is so confusing and out of left field. I think this is it, this is were I finally quit this disjointed attempt at story telling. Things jump around way too much in such a strange manner.

Reincarnator · C306
1 day ago
... what would a story be without an tournament arc -.-' View More
Towers of Heaven · C33
1 day ago

aileneclamiano: Hmmm....i think i might read this

Dual Cultivation · C1
1 day ago
The box was just lying beside the egg for everybody to take? And it was just taken shortly before he came out? And they immediately sent it to headquarters?

Everything is way too forced -.-' View More
Reincarnator · C303
2 days ago
Hmmm, this 2 year sleep / time skip seems somewhat forced.
I mean, okay, he needed rest to recover. But he got his enhanced body with recovering factor and two skills to further help his recovery.
1 month of absolute rest without any fighting / training should have been more than enough time to recover fully. View More
Reincarnator · C300
2 days ago
Confusing o.O View More
Reincarnator · C298
2 days ago
Wtf. Why would Hansoo make such overly quick decisions? Hansoo is still half dead and the Empire is about to wipe the Ains out... but he decides to make a public speech to all zones about the abyss to doom them all. Especially himself. He hasn't even gathered 7 OP skills. Congratulation, I am tempted to quit reading here. View More
Reincarnator · C296
2 days ago
Shouldn't Hansoo have gotten a giant reward for killing the ~lvl 1000 monster named Tiamat? Another zero numbering skill (this time movement or something other useful) would have been great.

And what's this rubbish about opening the abyss from the very beginning? 🤔

*continues reading* View More
Reincarnator · C295
2 days ago

MastersgtJames: what does he mean he still has 7 wishes left? He never specified a number of wishes... Also, Why Xianxia. You should max yourself out for ability of growth. Like, a creative mode Jump-Chain that YOU control.

Peerless Being from a Higher Plane · C1
2 days ago

BrokenSoul: woah woah, why you spoling grasping evil here bruh :(

Peerless Being from a Higher Plane · C1
2 days ago
The last 8 chapters still confuse me a bit, but I guess I finally understood the gist of it all. View More
Reincarnator · C289
3 days ago
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