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A great read but there are some mistakes that i want to point out.
1. You start names with a capital letter (anna -> Anna)
2. After ending a sentence with a dot there is space for starting the new sentence ( I have a dog.i like my dog -> I have dog. I like my dog)
3. New sentences start with a capital letter(See above)
Still one of the better reads i have read while. [img=recommend]
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