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  • The Summoned Kings *Paused*

    The Summoned Kings *Paused*

    Fantasy

    4.6

    In the world of modern technology, Day and Night waged war against each other for thousands of years. With the stalemate leaning towards Night's favor, Day elected to choose a champion to fight for him. Day bestowed divine gifts to many students. They were sent to another world Day had created called Yamuna where they are to be tested by him through building their nations and fighting against each other to become the ultimate victor, his champions. The amiable devoted gamer, Toivo, was dragged into the competition against his will in a disadvantage. So it came as a shock to him to have been gifted the superior power, The Command System, where all others shall obey his every word. However, the force he has to fight against is belonging to a god wielding absolute power. Will his command be able to penetrate through his enemies strong will or will he fail?

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I know 😭 I am trying to do my best to make shedules meet. Soon 😭 View More

mountainwalker132: Please don’t have died on us author! We need more chapters! This world needs your creativity!!

The Summoned Kings *Paused* · C24
2 months ago

VhielF: Hi everyone! I know that there maybe lots of people who are waiting for this book to update another chapter but, unfortunately, after geting out of the hospital, I was stacked with loads of tasks to do. However, I will continue to write and persevere to write this book to completion even if it means writing for a year or so. It is possible that you will notice a change with the style of writing in the long run but I am very grateful for all those who have continued to support this book despite the lack of updates and I promise, I am doing my best. You guys are awesome!

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3 months ago
Reading Status: C23
Hi everyone! I know that there maybe lots of people who are waiting for this book to update another chapter but, unfortunately, after geting out of the hospital, I was stacked with loads of tasks to do. However, I will continue to write and persevere to write this book to completion even if it means writing for a year or so. It is possible that you will notice a change with the style of writing in the long run but I am very grateful for all those who have continued to support this book despite the lack of updates and I promise, I am doing my best. You guys are awesome! View More
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3 months ago

CCmei: Go ahead and just check it out, it won't disappoint.

The intro alone hooks you in with amazingly realistic descriptions. The author has the ability to paint a fantastical picture of the scenery hat draws you into the moment.

Don't be disappointed for too long when the scene changes, it will pick up over the chapters as the mystery and action does. The author has obviously thought out a lot for the long term. It's like watching a unfolding game of chess.

I'm not fond of the characters though, not a single one. At most I'm interested in what the mysterious 'antagonists' are planning. Our MC Tovio doesn't hold my interest and is actually a bit stuck up and annoying in my opinion. The sides are much more interesting than he is though the author does seem to do this on purpose. Lead up perhaps? There is a mysterious past and I do look forward in seeing how he'll grow weak to strong.

But it's the gaming system and military tactics that's keeping me here, not the characters. The action sequences, planning and each scene to transition and onward are again amazingly detailed. Beyond excellent writing style and grammar for a WN novel.

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3 months ago

Mavislin11: The first chapter was great, very descriptive if it's scene. It allows the readers to familiarise with the characters, very relatable. Nice work, love the cover and writing style.

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3 months ago

bryang: This story is just starting out so I have a wait and see attitude but so far I like the direction it is going ...................................

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3 months ago

mountainwalker132: Wow! Thanks for the hard work making so many amazing systems.

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3 months ago

Midnight_Rayne: Thank you!

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3 months ago

Midnight_Rayne: Exactly

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3 months ago

LemonChase: Thanks for the chapter..Its good that your health is back on track now...

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3 months ago
Haha! Awesome 😁 View More

TDGOriginal: I'm so confused

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4 months ago
Hey! Am back, thank you for waiting. I will write up a storm and do my best to post one later! Took longer than I anticipated but now that am back, will do my best! View More

LemonChase: Thanks for the chapterr...please continue to recuperate,as i will be waiting for more chapss

The Summoned Kings *Paused* · C23
4 months ago

LemonChase: Thanks for the chapterr...please continue to recuperate,as i will be waiting for more chapss

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4 months ago

mountainwalker132: Wow! Thanks for your dedication author! Amazing chapter as always.

The Summoned Kings *Paused* · C23
4 months ago
Hahaha am very happy to give this to you! As soon as I heal up, I'll write more :D View More

NakedPotat: Great understandable writing style. Story is great and characters have distinct personalities. I can't wait to read what will become of the world and the characters that the author has made. I don't usually write reviews but I seriously felt the urge to write one in this. Hope the best of luck for the author. Peace out! (JOSEPH MY FAV CHARACTER)

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4 months ago

NakedPotat: Great understandable writing style. Story is great and characters have distinct personalities. I can't wait to read what will become of the world and the characters that the author has made. I don't usually write reviews but I seriously felt the urge to write one in this. Hope the best of luck for the author. Peace out! (JOSEPH MY FAV CHARACTER)

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4 months ago
Thank yiu for understanding :D View More

LemonChase: Its okay..please be well and concerned about your health,its more important..I will be waiting for chapterss when you're health is back on track.

The Summoned Kings *Paused* · C21
4 months ago
I am very sorry for the delay of the next chapter. I am in the hospital right now, recuperating from my illness. It turned out worse than I thought... As soon as I patch up, I will write the next chapter. Please continue to support the novel! View More

LemonChase: I think this is one of the most hillarious chapters,and the most resolvest one(I think)..Thanks for the chapter

The Summoned Kings *Paused* · C21
4 months ago
Thank you, I am very happy to share this to you! I'm very sorry for not being able to post as I am now in the hosptial, recuperating from m illness. It turned out more serious than I thought... I will do my best as soon as I heal. Thank you! View More

CCmei: Go ahead and just check it out, it won't disappoint.

The intro alone hooks you in with amazingly realistic descriptions. The author has the ability to paint a fantastical picture of the scenery hat draws you into the moment.

Don't be disappointed for too long when the scene changes, it will pick up over the chapters as the mystery and action does. The author has obviously thought out a lot for the long term. It's like watching a unfolding game of chess.

I'm not fond of the characters though, not a single one. At most I'm interested in what the mysterious 'antagonists' are planning. Our MC Tovio doesn't hold my interest and is actually a bit stuck up and annoying in my opinion. The sides are much more interesting than he is though the author does seem to do this on purpose. Lead up perhaps? There is a mysterious past and I do look forward in seeing how he'll grow weak to strong.

But it's the gaming system and military tactics that's keeping me here, not the characters. The action sequences, planning and each scene to transition and onward are again amazingly detailed. Beyond excellent writing style and grammar for a WN novel.

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4 months ago
I posted a comment in chapter 1. Might want to check that out :D View More

MikXL_23: Yeah, I know that My english is Broken, I'm still trying to make It better so don't worry.
Also, It would help If you put the parts were my grammar is trash and corrects them.
Thanks for the Review.

Insect King
4 months ago
I posted a comment in chapter 1. Might want to check that out :D View More

MikXL_23: Yeah, I know that My english is Broken, I'm still trying to make It better so don't worry.
Also, It would help If you put the parts were my grammar is trash and corrects them.
Thanks for the Review.

Insect King
4 months ago
I posted a comment in chapter 1. Might want to check that out :D View More

MikXL_23: Yeah, I know that My english is Broken, I'm still trying to make It better so don't worry.
Also, It would help If you put the parts were my grammar is trash and corrects them.
Thanks for the Review.

Insect King
4 months ago

MikXL_23: Yeah, I know that My english is Broken, I'm still trying to make It better so don't worry.
Also, It would help If you put the parts were my grammar is trash and corrects them.
Thanks for the Review.

Insect King
4 months ago
Reading Status: C2
I like how you describe things but, sadly, your grammar...

It is only words that make your grammar wrong and if not, the sentence. Also, I suggest for you to tell us how your character feels too since it is 1st person. Please do tell us who Kerrigan is and how your character got to know her, helps readers who do not know what SC is. There are a lot of things that I can suggest but I think this is all I can say since you are using a POV that I am unfamiliar with. Anyway, noce story, hope there comes a time when you decide to clean the previous chapters b4 :D I'll keep this in my library! View More
Insect King
4 months ago
"an" is used if the first letter of the word beside it is a vowel and "a" if the first letter of the word beside it is a consonant. Example: "An elephant." or "A light". View More
Insect King · C1
4 months ago
I will do my best to make my chapters longer. Thank you for tour feedback! :D View More

MikXL_23: Nice, I already put It in my library

This First chapter was Crazy and caught me in. The only problems are the fact that the chapters are short.

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4 months ago

MikXL_23: Nice, I already put It in my library

This First chapter was Crazy and caught me in. The only problems are the fact that the chapters are short.

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4 months ago

_Rain: This is amazing... I could clearly depict the picture of the battlefield. The male lead is awesome and I'm definetly keeping this in my library.

Writing quality is great, the way you describe each scene is great( something which I'm having difficulty with) but the story is simply amazing.

I'm hoping for more chapters...

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4 months ago

LemonChase: I think this is one of the most hillarious chapters,and the most resolvest one(I think)..Thanks for the chapter

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4 months ago

_Transcendent: I am emotional coz I can relate to what Elyon is trying so hard to express in words. I still vividly remember eagerly refreshing my novel page to check if there are any comments or reviews. I know that my readers are silently reading, but seeing someone just come out and say something brings an entirely different feeling.

I have come a long way in the short time I became an author, now I don't depend on the comments or reviews, but they still affect me.

I write the story to tell it, I view the story I write as a Journey to experience. Nonetheless I sincerely appreciate the ones who are joining me in the journey. Those encouraging remarks and appreciative reviews push me even when I'm down coz I will remember that I'm not writing the story just for myself but also for the people waiting to read it. It is fascinating to see how much this medium can affect us as people.

Thanks for your hard work, fellow authors.

The first novel, first comment and first review are the author's firsts.

No matter how many may come in the future, nothing can replace their position. It's that special. I want to thank the people who encouraged me, without you guys, I would have never made it here.

P.S: F..k Elyon, your chapter made me write so much. I'm going to flame you on discord!

The Webnovel Writer's Chatgroup · C11
4 months ago
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