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kseriousr: What the author(s) don't seem to realise that, it's not stat hoarding or loots that make novels of this genre interesting, these are but bonuses. It's how you use them to futher the story that makes it interesting. Focus should never be on the stats. I could use cheatengine to bypass any progression and get bored in a game after a few moments of playing god but the same game could become really memorable if I take a minimalistic approach. Without challenges, there are no excitement and for this genre, that is death-sentance.

The world turned into a game after I woke up
5 months ago
"i would have liked seeing the protagonist fumble about trying to come up with alternatives". I wasn't expecting him to crush a couple of rocks and make magical aspirin or to just become a chemist and synthesize **** without breaking a sweat. I would have preferred reading about him doing research from half forgotten trivia knowledge and hints from what "doctors" of the time used. Watching him fail and struggle sounds appealing. The fact that he can just pop ready made medicine from his bag is a cheap cop out. View More

Naramasant: It would mean knowing the plants and it's function as medicine because at that time plants was more used as medicine and the chemical that usually used at medicine are most impossible to create without proper tool which he don't have. He is doctor, not apothecary XD

Doctor goes back to Joseon · C5
7 months ago

lilepq: Omg that is so true, i never really took note of that before 😅

The Great Storyteller · C21
7 months ago

chaos227: It's all for the Word count. Like how in high school you're writing an essay and run out of things to write, so you start adding nonsense to up the word count.
But this novel goes too far with it.

A Wizard's Secret
8 months ago

ThrustThunder: Or, fellow commentators, you can read these other books that have improved upon the formula:
Advent of the Archmage (Same as Night Ranger but more Magic Driven)2016
The Wizard World (Chip story that has very detailed set pieces, like reading a vivid Lucid dream)2012
Warlock of the Magus World (Genius with a Biochip reincarnates into the wizard world, Devours his enemies. The best example of a *Ruthless* MC I've ever read)2015
Age of Adepts (Another Wizard chip story about a truly guileful MC)2016
When A Mage Revolts (Guy reincarnates with a system that trolls him, eventually becomes the Hero of all persecuted Mages)2016
The Book Eating Magician (Guy's hand turns into a Grimoire that can eat books to learn magic)2017

A Wizard's Secret
8 months ago

ThrustThunder: Repeated repetitions that repeat repetitively are really repetitive!

A Wizard's Secret · C38
8 months ago
Thank you, i wrote in reply to this comment. I was really thankful and i wanted to show how thankful i was by writing thank you. Did the thank you comment reach the other user? I don't know but i'm sure he will understand how thankful i am when reading this. View More

ThrustThunder: Repeated repetitions that repeat repetitively are really repetitive!

A Wizard's Secret · C38
8 months ago
Reading Status: C36
Reading this novel is rage inducing, it keeps repeating the same basic facts and words over and over and over and over. The chapter where he learns magic is one of the worst offenders, the word Fireball is repeated so much i can still hear it echo around my skull. There is also the one where every phrase talks about "heavy armored knights", he almost uses those exact three words 20 times in a row.

The author also has every single character talk as if every other person nearby is a clueless idiot with a memory span of 30 seconds.
"Hello friend, it is me your fat friend. We've know each other for 14 years and i still have to introduce myself to you every time we meet. I also have to clearly explain my family background and the fact that i love visiting brothels. Have you heard about Mark? He's our classmate that clearly hates you. He hates you because you are going to marry Clarissa and he told you many times he loves Clarissa too! How incredibly interesting! Did you notice that today the sky was blue? It was the same yesterday and as far as memory goes the color hasn't changed, isn't it wonderful?". This is not an exact quote but if you read the novel you'll find very similar situations.

Explanations about stuff is similarly repeated ad nauseam, for example when his computer thingy is introduced we get and explanation on how it will greatly speed up his learning new spells. Now every time the MC talks about new spells he has found he also reminds us about the computer that is going to help him, again. The author or translator doesn't even bother changing up the wording a little, it's like the explanation has been copy and pasted multiple times in different chapters.

At this point i'm not even sure if the author is doing it because he thinks the people reading are unimaginably stupid or he's trying to beef up the word count.

The story is nothing to write home about, incredibly generic and borrows a whole bunch of elements from other more "famous" novels in this particular genre. Church clearly bad, he has computer in the new body even though it was injected in his blood in the previous word???, he learns magic from a random bored guy and he becomes ruthless at the flip of a coin. I'm quite surprised he hasn't raped anyone yet due to yin and yang imbalance...
Almost forgot, he has the computer in his head doing nothing the whole time instead of already calculating stuff he'll obviously need in the future. He'll wait till the last moment to turn it on and find the best combination for a spell he had for months. Why?

Anyway i'm bored, i don't feel like writing about this novel anymore.
This story is crap, the translator is crappy, he probably pops the raws in google translate and just changes a few words if he's feeling it. If he's doing more then that it sure doesn't show.

Don't waste your time with this, eating handfuls of sawdust would be a more productive and fun way to spend your valuable time. View More
A Wizard's Secret
8 months ago
"heavy armored knights,heavy armored knights,heavy armored knights" Can you attempt to use different words sometimes? Even little kids don't repeat the same words this much. View More
A Wizard's Secret · C38
8 months ago
This author repeats himself way too much, "this thing can store 18 fireball, so i'm going to cast 18 fireball and store them into the cells that can hold fireballs. In the future i can cast 18 fireballs easily using these 18 stored fireballs. Have i mentioned 18 extra fireballs? These fireball will definitely be balls made of fire, that's why they are named fireballs. There is also a variant on this spell that makes bigger fireballs and i call it Large Fireball. A large fireball is larger then a normal fireball" View More
A Wizard's Secret · C36
8 months ago
Oh god, the friends loudly explaining every facet of society for no reason... shoot me View More
A Wizard's Secret · C6
8 months ago
She's part angel, is that not complicated enough already? View More
Summoning the Holy Sword · C26
9 months ago
That poor glabella... it's going to break sooner or later. View More
Lord of the Mysteries · C62
9 months ago
Add me to the list of people hoping for the sword to be just that, a sword-- I actually hope it doesn't even start to talk much less transform. View More

Randompasserby: Friend, keep calm and hear me out.
What if, what if the sword is *gasp* a dude 😏 ?

Let's stick to actual members of his soon-to-be established merc company yeah? Personally I'm hoping there's no anthropomorphic weapons hijinks ala xenoblade. That's just a mess waiting to happen...

Summoning the Holy Sword · C23
9 months ago

Randompasserby: Friend, keep calm and hear me out.
What if, what if the sword is *gasp* a dude 😏 ?

Let's stick to actual members of his soon-to-be established merc company yeah? Personally I'm hoping there's no anthropomorphic weapons hijinks ala xenoblade. That's just a mess waiting to happen...

Summoning the Holy Sword · C23
9 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop View More
Godly Model Creator · C1
10 months ago
Not necessarily, it really depends on the type of "poison" used. View More

Sephiroth_Naruto: Wait, if it is poisoned, won't the Zyelok meat be inedible? Unless...It isn't hunted for its meat but the other parts...

Survival Records of 3650 days in the Otherworld · C39
10 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Potion View More
Soul of Searing Steel · C1
10 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop View More
Immortal Mortal · C1
10 months ago
I tried google translating and i still can't decipher what you said. What does Vof N. . nn. X mean? View More

Soju: Be gone .. . .vof N. . nn. X

The world turned into a game after I woke up
10 months ago
Your sarcasm meter seems to be broken... you might want to get that checked out View More

Davidwrn: YOU have PERSONALLY witnessed many 7 years old kids train in the way of blade and literally murdered opponents?! You must be high on weed or something. Delusional talks

Kingdom's Bloodline · C22
10 months ago
Most cultures don't have to deal with people or creatures who single-handedly can slaughter hundreds or thousands of people at a whim. The last guy who organized something on that scale in our world was gunned down. View More

BurstDown: Well...
Most cultures have adopted the stupid “Good people don’t kill” dogma.

Advent of the Archmage · C179
10 months ago
The token card is black, that's hysterical. View More
The Card Apprentice · C39
10 months ago

Rasti: Damn look at all the cry babies in the comment section that want a name change..... Because no one is ever nicknamed "God" or "Jesus" get over yourself and also how is it mocking if the name isn't used negatively lmao

The Card Apprentice · C16
10 months ago
Cutting the cock will surely wake him up. View More
The Ultimate Evolution · C988
10 months ago
That's the point i was trying to make, it doesn't fit the surname part. As for the japanese bit, i'd think they'd be terrified of a manco that wrecks faces. I can't even begin to imagine what something like that would look like. No i lied, i think i can. Great now i have nightmare fuel for my next nap. Thanks Imbloo. View More

ImBloo: "the FaceWrecker" is just a surname part, not a title. Also, anyone with a passing knowledge of Japanese won't be able to keep a straight face if our MC introduces himself as "P***y the FaceWrecker" (Yes, that's what Manko means in Japanese)

Legend of the Gunslinger Mage · C0
10 months ago

ImBloo: Readers' vote :). Also my poor naming sense.

Legend of the Gunslinger Mage · C0
10 months ago
Manco wasn't bad. I think the weird part is the game allowing players to add titles to their nicknames during creation. Could someone make a character named Bob the King? If later in the game he becomes a king does he get assigned a title? Bob the King the King or King Bob the King? That would be fun! View More

ImBloo: Readers' vote :). Also my poor naming sense.

Legend of the Gunslinger Mage · C0
10 months ago

Yllfyr: MANCO THE FACE WRECKER is the best i suggest dont change your trademark its already carve in my brain because its easy to remember and sound so badass , i dont know the story behind the name MANCO but is the best rather than generic main characteristic/chunnibiyoo sounding name above

Legend of the Gunslinger Mage · C0
10 months ago
The reason you gave to change the nickname is because you think it's too cringe inducing. How did you manage to select six options that are even worse. View More
Legend of the Gunslinger Mage · C0
10 months ago
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