HaremBeGone - Profile

Story overall is super basic with constant writing deveatioms leading to meaningless prose and incessant repeating of lines. Overall the author wants to try to fill up the word count with detail but fails most of the time. Martial Arts theme is cool and all but just not executed that well. Typos almost every paragraph. They range from improper grammar to entirely missing words. If the author were just to read over what he wrote it would easily be an entertaining read. The fact of the matter is the authors lack of editing just leads to the readers becoming unwilling editors themselves. I can confidently predict that if the Author focused any amount on cleaning up simple mistakes the novel could easily become more popular. Unfortunately as it stands the Novel is very close to MACHINE TRANSLATION quality and thus at most will be considered a filler book between people waiting for what they actually enjoy reading.

Hard to describe the amount of anticipation I feel waiting for each new chapter. This novel is one of the few that actually reads like a NOVEL. Not some Comic or Lightnovel or regurgitated Copy Webnovel that always plague the popular voting. I barely use this site when looking for a book at this point and keep it around merely to look over once I’ve exhausted the sites with actual quality. Unfortunately on this site it’s akin to having a treasure being buried under a pile of shit. That shit being bland copy books with boring plots. Forced romances or harems. And typically awful grammar. Author if you read this post I recommend putting this story on sites that truly care about reading a book, as Webnovel is just for mass produced garbage that scratches the itch of people who just want the same old boring tropes. Truly truly a good book. Seriously Author it’s extremely hard for quality books to prosper here. Just look at the charts. I beg that you consider applying your creativity where it will be appreciated

I assume Lord Of The Mysteries-also known as Lord of Mysteries

Do me a favour please if you see this comment, Shoot me a reply if this novel ever gets an editor so I can actually attempt to read it thanks.

Honestly I can’t say much about this novel because due to the fact that it’s in dire need of editing it’s difficult to even piece togther what the plot actually is.