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The paragraph structure is killing the story for me. Also, it seems too wordy for the sake of being wordy? And the dialogue seems off. Like you're just writing something, anything until you know how to move the story forward. View More
Marvel: My Rules · C4
1 week ago

Epaxx: I really wanna know how no one interfere them? I know the author said that two are from Hyuuga and Uchiha but they have different positions, and the other thing is his male.

What I'm trying to point out is their station is different, if Itachi were the one who beat him up and no one interfere cuz male heir and what not,

Please tell me how and why. Thanks.

The Sharingan Hyuga · C4
1 week ago
Tension is a blocked word? View More

morghon78: This is too unlikely. You are forced an arbitrary situation just for the sake of having him awaken his sharingan. Nobody from another clan can just wail on the son of the Hyuga clan head and clan heiress of the hyuga clan? In front of ninja that are supposed to protect them? And severely injure the clan heiress? With a head injury? And there's no response other than just asking how the guard ninjas didn't respond? And that's it? Where is that guard's head? Does the hyuga clan have that low of a standing in konaha, that civvies and nobodies from other clan can just **** all over them by almost killing the son and daughter of the the clan head? Where is the anger of a father, where is the pride of a clan head? What??? So when the hokage is clearly, so very clearly saying that hyuga are nothing compared to the uchiha clan, why is there no reaction? And why would they treat them that way, especially since konaha needs the hyuga, what with the ******* with the uchiha clan after the kyubi attack?

The Sharingan Hyuga · C4
1 week ago
This is too unlikely. You are forced an arbitrary situation just for the sake of having him awaken his sharingan. Nobody from another clan can just wail on the son of the Hyuga clan head and clan heiress of the hyuga clan? In front of ninja that are supposed to protect them? And severely injure the clan heiress? With a head injury? And there's no response other than just asking how the guard ninjas didn't respond? And that's it? Where is that guard's head? Does the hyuga clan have that low of a standing in konaha, that civvies and nobodies from other clan can just **** all over them by almost killing the son and daughter of the the clan head? Where is the anger of a father, where is the pride of a clan head? What??? So when the hokage is clearly, so very clearly saying that hyuga are nothing compared to the uchiha clan, why is there no reaction? And why would they treat them that way, especially since konaha needs the hyuga, what with the ******* with the uchiha clan after the kyubi attack? View More
The Sharingan Hyuga · C4
1 week ago
Dafuq. He's immune to poison and disease though. View More
Dragonborn Saga · C456
1 month ago
Wo, the family must be loaded with the that much extra children penalty View More
My Extraordinary Achievements · C28
2 months ago
Lol, animal cruelty at its finest View More
King of Sports · C106
2 months ago
Even with a cheat system and years of training, he's still only basically mid or high genin in avg stats, without counting his chakra though. His low jonin chakra also seems really weak too considering he has a cheat system, trained since 1 years old, and on top of that, he's a jinchuriki. Why is he so weak? I think canon gaara was much stronger. View More
Gaara · C29
2 months ago

Areize: I still like the novel but this to me just forced plot armor because he author run out of ideas in Britain so now he will try something in another country not to insult the author but generally the authors who does those things leave their novel early on and I see this happening I mean the dude was preparing so much then all of a sudden his plan go with the wind because he magically decided to help the vampire honestly first things a transmigratory realize is never meddle in something that doesn't need your meddling he could've waited saved himself and hide until the air is clear the Russian ministery men will appear he just tell his story then go with them to get on another train is that very hard

Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C25
3 months ago
Nice View More
Dragonborn Saga · C429
3 months ago

Graboid_42: Well that's what is written in the earlier chapters with the experience with the first goblin attack and the system recommending close combat skills then being unable to use the bow with the system advising about the combat skill again. It's literally what you wrote so if something else is happening perhaps you should have written what actually happened then.

None of these were assumptions. They were facts based on what you literally wrote down.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C22
3 months ago

BolsonaroNUF: This chapter here was pure bull****, what type of retard drop his sword to try using his hands against a dog biting you? And this Op Power coming from nowhere? You novel was pretty reasonable so dar, what a shame you resolved to **** It nos :(

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C22
3 months ago

Sorenmageofmareth: I just had to laugh. Dying from a basic ***** kobold, despite his experiences, despite having a system, despite magic gear, despite going solid snake. And this has the fall to pull out and try to hype on this will of the emperor bs? This is lame. Liaris phrase at least came from an enemies stronger than 50 percent of orario.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C22
3 months ago

ThrustThunder: "Even if you have decided now, think on it again and tell me your decision 3 days from now."
Hahaha, came here to post exactly this!
"Hey guys, even if you already agree with me, make sure to double check that you don't want to sell me out for the highest bidder in the next three days!"
For a Novel that's normally so good about oversights like this, this seems like a really dumb decision. At least have them sign a NDA before releasing them!

World Domination System · C115
4 months ago

Bloodlotus: I wonder if there is gonna be a time when the kingdom goes against him?

World Domination System · C115
4 months ago
And Harry would never talk back like that. He was bullied his whole life, and saying Snape's bullying is justified would mean he accepted that he himself deserved to be bullied. And Harry does not want attention of any kind. For him attention means punishment. View More
Reaper Of The Wizarding World · C16
4 months ago
We already know what happens. Why is this a whole chapter. Just write what he thought of the first classes. A paragraph for each classes is good enough. Get on with the real story. Get on with what happens to Soren, not what happens to Harry. We know what happens to Harry. View More
Reaper Of The Wizarding World · C16
4 months ago

Ankit1480: Why is he still raising his hands when he knew that Snape was not going to question them. And doesn't he realized that such an action would only make Harry look even worse. So good friend he turned out to be.

Reaper Of The Wizarding World · C16
4 months ago
A few gripes with the chapter. Harry is much more closed off than you write him to be. And Soren's interactions with Harry and co seems forced and fake, and unnecessary. Soren should be more closed off too.

And this chapter seems a bit unnecessary, as only the sorting bit is important. And who just decides to tell that the torturer of your parents is dead on a whim. The interactions seems really forced, like you were looking at the books and decided to insert Soren into it between actual interactions.

And it's a FF. We know what happens, so shorten or cut some parts. We don't want to read the book again with some extra lines and an extra person. We want to read about the extra person changing and affecting story. We want him making moves and others reacting and being affected, not others making moves or the canon story progressing along and him only reacting after the fact. And canon happenings we know, so if it doesn't involve our oc in a meaningful way, just gloss over it.

Sorry about the rant. It just seemed like you were headed in a direction where Soren was just an extra body inserted into Harry's journey, saying some lines here and there.

With that said, everything before the train ride was great. And the premise is really interesting. View More
Reaper Of The Wizarding World · C14
4 months ago

Adamantis: This arc is way to long

Realm of Myths and Legends · C164
4 months ago

DevilsArray: How did aegis survive??? Huh??! Life saving skills are super rare at their current levels. and if aegis and his team doesn't get existence wipe, i am quitting. And yes how did he survive izroths main skill.

Realm of Myths and Legends · C164
4 months ago

Senelcar: On the verge of droping this, author does the same ****ed trick of creating op villain just to show how much mc will grow. No explanation (let's not even talk about stupid “genesis” program that code from nowhere)... No char developpenmment on villain mean author think reader are stupid, which i hate

Realm of Myths and Legends · C164
4 months ago

Roninja: Only one kill? Sigh

Realm of Myths and Legends · C164
4 months ago

hobbstnoon: Kind of think Ageis should have been the only one to survive?

Realm of Myths and Legends · C164
4 months ago

Barbaferro: Thanks for the chapter.

Realm of Myths and Legends · C164
4 months ago

Josuke31: okay i drop this 15 stones again and the other son of ***** doesn't die bye author seriously

Realm of Myths and Legends · C164
4 months ago
15 soul point would equal 105 not 75 though. Since each soul point increases by 7% now View More
Realm of Myths and Legends · C153
4 months ago

Umbrardor: Jon's really cool and all right now, but I'd love to see if Jullnar's made any leaps in power since her fate is tied to Jon so closely.

Dragonborn Saga · C399
5 months ago

YoungestKing: like bruh!

Dragonborn Saga · C399
5 months ago
I hope he gets at least 1000 gold for a single pill. That pill is 100% a pay to win ability. He's the only supplier, he should decide the price. It would make some scary rogue/hunter classes. The main thing is it's permanent. View More
Realm of Myths and Legends · C66
5 months ago
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