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Anyone want to post the translation to English just for the rewards? I got the gist of it but not the details.

So why does Six get knocked down in combat? You gave him the stonewall perk.

This doesn't make any sense at all. The bond with Hestia can literally have zero negative effects on Hades for the simple fact of the matter you made him immune or unaffected by literally anything he thinks or views as negative. So severing the bond was just to what? Make Hades edgy?

Definitely do it

This just keeps on getting better and better.

No he wouldn't, you literally set up the story so it is not limited to cannon dragonball. So that means kiddy gloves are off and berus would have an insane amount of power in an actual universe and not being limited because the plot of cannon dragonball needs to work.

Doesn't the MC know that berus exists? So why is he running his mouth about how strong he is when he knows he's still a just another weakling in the universe?

Who's who at this point I don't remember just kept jumping between them and can't remember now lol

Isn't the pandora box squad the one that dies horribly in the different scp realities/universes to nearly the last like everytime?

The story's going great I very much enjoy reading what you keep coming up with so just keep on writing it, I'm looking forward to see where it ends up.

Just caught onto to this fic and have to say I hope you plan on keeping this up cause it's great to read just hits this sweetspot that makes it feel so good reading to see where the stories going.

Though it's OP might as well do Scarlet rot since the MC definitely does not want to have any parts of his body rotting, so you can easily have him be extremely reluctant to do much more then excruciatingly slowly train it since you have already set a precedent of the MC very much caring about not looking like a freak like godrick much less very clearly horrific rotting body parts. Especially since he has his family going to be living with him, so would only truly seek to wield the scarlet rot as a very and truly absolute final resort till such a time that his control is enough not to rot all life around him and make New Caelid on Naruto world.

Well it'd probably be to much anyways that mythology is basically a legion there's so many gods and goddesses. So while very interesting but would give just as many headaches as a myriad amount of ideas lol

Ooooo I'd love to see Shiva and Kali show up. Now that'd be some wild chaotic future guaranteed lol. Loving the way things are turning out and eager for more chapters.

I for one think you doing doing a good job writing this so far. Yes maybe the chapters aren't the perfection or as great you were imagining to write. But they make sense for what your writing and sit well with the previous chapters, more so these are chapters setting up changes that'll be happening for the new future you plan to write and you certainly can't change the future if you don't write the necessary changes to influence the path the story could now logically take. After all these are fickle, vengeful, grudge holding God's so you really have to do this or it just will not be able to diverge from the canon without making it seem like you forced the changes and seem lackluster from the potential it could have had. So keep up the story your doing great so far and I very much look forward to the chapters to come.

Well honestly you should bring the power scale up for Bb way more since the blood is of a ancient cosmic being definitely should be much more powerful then its portrayed within the game, could even have it that the reason be that the blood is just a amalgamation of many different blood lines of cosmic beings and that's the reason everything ends up more powerful and looks so grotesque the further you go, and why there can be so many different strains of enemy type. Especially for the bosses since the further in the game you go the more changes and terrible twisted "mutations/evolutions?" occur in them so it would go that at some point they'd become more akin to godly ish cosmic horrors. And should probably go the route of having the mc have more physical changes as he progresses in power since he'll almost asurreredly be bathing in the blood of his enemies so it'd stand to reason that it would have influence on his physical appearance godly blood or not since it'd be more like many ancient blood lines and could have the bosses represent more "purified" versions of particular cosmic horrors and thus causes his own blood be impowered/evolved but naturally doesn't mean you'd need to make the character some freakish abomination either just perhaps different color eyes, hair, changes to the pupil ect. Maybe even have a transformation ability like when the visceral attack changes the characters arm and have a battlefront fit for a godly being mixed with traits of a cosmic horror? Could even up the powers scale of the beings on earth maybe even have the blood appear in some of the monsters influenced by the characters existence in the world? Could even have cultists attracted to the mc influenced by the ancient beings wanting access to the earth for cosmic horror reasons, maybe even have many of them lay claim to be their child as well wanting to influnce him or to increase their presence on earth and adding a more chaos to the quests and distrust in Adrian from the pantheons and even his divine ancestors? Just some possible thoughts I have to hopefully give you some inspiration for the future even if you don't use any of it because I'm really enjoying your fic so here's hoping you continue on writing it to the end.

This is great I never knew I needed this in my life lol