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Ascenders Rift · C77
Eyeno: I feel that it’s a great story as well. I just feel it’s being rushed. You can space more plot in there and just add more chapters. Anyway, that’s just my opinion. Loving it either way.
I said my peace, so peace!New Game+ · C180
Aparrsons3250: Very rare almost 200 chapters in and this book is borderline greatness and disaster. I love this book but I always feel like it's a 1/2 step away from disaster. Like 3 or 4 chapters of bad choices or writing and it would ruin everything before itNew Game+ · C180
New Game+ · C180
Eyeno: Author, an arrow is not a bolt. Bolts are only used on crossbows... future reference.Ascenders Rift · C73
Ascenders Rift · C73
Shadow Hack · C16
OberonPrime: I can also see that the arrogant one in the chapter is actually him. He wasn't outstanding to begin with from the way he was described, he was quite mediocre. The only strength he had wqs his father's connections, which made the others a bit envious hence the gossip that only started recently. It wasn't like he was being bullied initially, it only started after his father's injury. It was just a wolf hiding in a sheep's clothing type of cliché which was built up and executed quite poorly.Shadow Hack · C8
OberonPrime: Wasn't really a sh!tty move, rather it was what a realist would do. I mean, would you want to have a husband whose future prospect is living in the slums, with no redeeming feature until after the test? Provided that you yourself may have a good shot at improving your lifestyle. They weren't an official couple to begin with, she wasn't even arrogant during the exchange.Shadow Hack · C8
SilentByakko: I agree here. Their relationship was only assumed by others. They were only childhood friends, though it sux for her that they will now walk different paths. I bet they meet again in the future, likely with him helping her in some way as he passes by.Shadow Hack · C8
Shadowxhunter: No frankly she wasn't that bad. She didin't look down on him nor did she try to mock him in front of everybody. What she did while ****ty was still better than many women from other novel like by exemple BTTHShadow Hack · C8
PeakLevelTrash: True, besides, she only appeared for a single chapter so far, and she wasn't that bad.Shadow Hack · C8
Arxsen: Didn't really seem like she was doing that at all (from how I read the chapter). She just was looking at her future prospects. At that point she was half-awakened, which seems to be a big deal in this society. MC was just a normal human with slightly decent social networking. If she truly wanted a better future, it seems like she would have made the correct choice at that moment. Although now that MC-kun has his OP main character cheat item, I think her choice to not stay with MC warrants a bit of sympathy :PShadow Hack · C8
FelRhyn: It'll be explained, I kinda spoiled it in the discord but we'll get a nice exposition from Tylin about what happened in the next few chapters.World Seed · C81
Eyeno: Your line, creation is hard, so cheer me up! No offence, but it annoys the **** outta me. Not so much the line, it’s because of who else says that exact same line! ANWAN, author says the same thing. But that author consistently pushes out 2 chapters a day, full of crap.Ascenders Rift · C68
Ascenders Rift · C68
EveningSong: Dropped at 143 as it is not worth the stones.
Tl:dr "meh" at the best of times, needs a full re-write to be worth the stones.
This is not, by any means, a premium novel. Nor is it complete garbage. It has potential, a novel concept, and some solid ideas. However, that potential has yet to be expressed up until chapter 143.
The characters have all the emotional depth of a cardboard cutout. The battles are not satisfying. The dialogue is sub-par.
For a first time author's embryonic novel, this isnt half bad. To be something worth paying for however, it needs a solid block of editing, a complete re-write, and some time for the author to grow more accustomed to the English language (my understanding is the author isnt a native speaker, kudos to you friend for the attempt but you have a few miles left to go before you sleep).Monster Integration
Eyeno: Terrible writing. The author claimed that around chapter 60 he would get an editor, and didn’t. Then claimed so again later. Either did and is terrible at the job, or still hasn’t, 600+ chapters in.
He writes entire paragraphs as BANG! Like so.
Maybe repeats the word twice, after. Then he goes to describe the bang sound(terribly) by writing the same word 2-3 times in the next paragraph.
Then decides to have two people talking in the same paragraph, like so. Main character said “he said she said, by the sea shore.” Only without the commas and periods in between. Then insert random female character. “Peter piper picked up a pickled pepper.” Again without any commas or periods.
Then the author spends entire pages describing, in the exact same and generic way, how the main character gets stronger by getting hurt. Over and over and over again. For 400 chapters.
All in all a terrible story. The only 2 things this story has going for it, is it’s unique idea for a story.( such the author ruins. ) And his consistent chapters. Which he literally just shovels out to the readers as crap, so he can milk people of their money.
All in all, I said my peace, so peace!Monster Integration
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