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gtfantasy: Author summarized volume 4 at the end and I do a translation here, bear in mind this is not a word to word one.
Undying, a blessing or a curse. This is the theme of this volume and it fits for many characters such as Azik, Anderson, Leonard etc etc, but when Klein saw those cocoons and people with modernized outfits inside, especially three of those has already broken out, author doesn’t need to emphasize the theme again at this point. The feelings of thrill, terror,suspense, craziness and darkness of this book should appear again. This is one of high impact scenes author prepared before he starts to write the novel.
The whole volume author progressively closing foreshadows including Anderson’s branch which was laid in the middle of volume 3, so at the end of this volume the plots finally exploded and echoed, he was satisfied with the result and will close some remaining foreshadows in next volume.
There were some weaknesses in volume 4 as well, as a tycoon Klein’s daily life lacks conflict, if this part drags too long it is really hard to construct interesting story, but this part can’t be omitted as well, so he was anxious before the plot progressed to Chanis gate, some readers may feel the sudden turning point here, because it lacked a bit of foreshadowing.
Another weak point was the story in this volume was a bit longer than expected, pace at the second part of this volume was the problem. There was a whole month author was not in a good status, he felt that after Klein got potion formula and Leonard dug the grave the story was lacking the *******, he tried to remedy and reconstruct the story but still not happy with the result. Later on he figured out of the reason, lacking change. In another words, after Klein leveled up in the middle of volume 3 to the middle of volume 4 there were more than 200 chapters, so it needed a change urgently. So he adjusted the story and only focused on level up and revenge, pushed everything else aside. From the stats of Qidian, the result was good but it caused other problems, for example Calderon City plot was too simple it should be more complicated.
As for author level up is not only a plot climax point but also a tool to control the story rhythm. The former is easy to understand, even in real world level up is everywhere; e.g employee gets promotion, same for businessmen and government officers. The latter is more complicated, one level up can bring man changes, so author can control the story better.
After plot reached a climax point as for author the most important thing is to calm down and only express what is necessary and get rid of harmful and superfluous staff. Author wants to make sure all the built up feelings and explosions not get interrupted and diluted. So at the end of the volume Klein as director of a grand show, author balanced the story and he didn’t want to drag in too many powerful figures that too many accidents and tensions will cause Klein fail to advance. Author also didn’t want split level up and revenge into two separate lines which will drag the story too slow, interweave Ince’s recall will help to portrait the character but not the plot at this point, so author sacrificed it as well.
Author also considered pulling Daly’s death early and building a ******* that Ince will kill everyone then escape, but he is not certain if the curtain fall will be as sad and beauty as current one, so he sacrificed a bit ******* to make sure ending will be good.
For Daly in author’s original setting, she is the one in church that chasing the Death authority, but later on author dropped this idea. Only as a talented person then there will be story to match Captain Dunn a very normal Nighthawk officer.
So this is the summary for volume 4, author wants readers to guess who is the 3rd person and next volume name is Red Priest.

Lord of the Mysteries · C946
6 days ago
I just hope there is a reasonable development; no bs such as they agree to share Alex, no woman would accept that, only in male fantasies it happens. View More

Avan: you hoping for harem? haha

Doomsday Pillars · C170
6 days ago
Maybe you should go to a therapist, you know a normal person usuallu cares about human lives especially if you are born in a modern society View More

zensa: are you perhaps a fan of the classic xianxia Mc, the goody two shoes, that gets his childhood sweatheart stolen, that has to watch his family get slaughtered, that has to get his spiritual roots taken, to become ruthless in aworld composed of ruthless people (I can keep going in the clichés list of xianxia Mcs backstory). Maybe he should live his life in mediocrity until his mom gets killed and lose all advantages of all f*****g reincarnators. Sorry to burst your bubble, but his character is quite close to what any intelligent 21st century boy, that gets reincarnated in a cultivation world. Keep myself alive, gain power, become immortal. Anybody else can die in a ditch for all I care, I already died once, Idon't intend for a repeat, especially if i can. This story is seriously a breath of fresh air in the eastern fantasy section. By the way You should read Reverend Insanity, for comparison our Mc here is a saint, but then again that one got more ruthless after trying the goody two shoes method.

Birth of the Demonic Sword
3 weeks ago

DrewWells: I honestly greatly prefer shorter fights for 2 reasons:

1. It’s very difficult to feel the ******* of the fight if you read the chapters in different days, obviously this is not a problem if you read them all together.

2. A fight scene happens very quickly and so I think the pace of the story should be fast too to give the impression of a real fights. If there are too many interruptions in between the fight it’s not appealing to me, at most you could show other people’s points of view at the climax of the fight to create *******, but if there are too many interruptions, with other people’s thought and speech, in my opinion it’s detrimental to the fight.

Obviously Avian can do what he thinks is better, this is my opinion.

Doomsday Pillars · C154
1 month ago
I honestly greatly prefer shorter fights for 2 reasons:

1. It’s very difficult to feel the ******* of the fight if you read the chapters in different days, obviously this is not a problem if you read them all together.

2. A fight scene happens very quickly and so I think the pace of the story should be fast too to give the impression of a real fights. If there are too many interruptions in between the fight it’s not appealing to me, at most you could show other people’s points of view at the climax of the fight to create *******, but if there are too many interruptions, with other people’s thought and speech, in my opinion it’s detrimental to the fight.

Obviously Avian can do what he thinks is better, this is my opinion. View More
Doomsday Pillars · C154
1 month ago
I hope you will post the chapters on WN but I think you should do what’s best for you, whatever that is. View More
Reborn: Apocalypse - Volume 3 · C30
1 month ago
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Birth of the Demonic Sword
1 month ago
Reading Status: C2
Sorry, I tried, but honestly it’s one of the most cliché novel I have ever read (and I read a lot). Adding the fact that the author doesn’t know how to write pace, character development and world building just to mention some... View More
Evolution God
1 month ago

bloo: Fun story, doesn't really fall into the trap of most of these types of stories. The issue being that they're charging some insane **** to read it. Like 100 SS per chapter. That would mean every 5 chapters is 10$. That means 50 chapters is 100$.... 500 chapters is 1000$. Greed has made these people LOSE THEIR FREAKIN MINDS. I don't think it needs to be said, but don't support this garbage

I Might Be A Fake Cultivator
1 month ago

Protozoanthrope: The content has been deleted

I Might Be A Fake Cultivator
1 month ago

FilledWithHope: Every chapter after 87 is privleged. I'm not paying stones for the "privlege" of paying the translators paycheck.

Unless you want a paywall don't read this.

I Might Be A Fake Cultivator
1 month ago

Misguided_Rooster: Had some potential in the beginning(a little) but ultimately became too cliche and, well, just flat out boring. Characters are pretty much the same as usual, and pretty much everything about this is cliche. It could of gone places but it was just too freaking cliche and boring.

I Might Be A Fake Cultivator
1 month ago

Valven: Sorry, my review is pretty bad. I read this and wasn’t laughing at all. I don’t dislike the writing and it gets pretty hectic at times. I don’t see this as hilarious and I find myself wondering why everyone laughs at some parts. I don’t get it. The story is okay, well- written, cliched and epic. But to me, the comedy is non-existent. If you are looking for laughs, I cannot guarantee you will.

- In terms of the types of reviews I’ve seen the average triple ratio is 90% found it funny/refreshing. 5% found it not hilarious. 5% is other.

I Might Be A Fake Cultivator
1 month ago

BlackHat: Pff, Chapter 2, the "God of War System" ask him to bark to learn the langage spoken by the immortals.
If it's the kind of story where the cheat system tries to humiliate its host constantly to gain minor stuff, no thanks

I Might Be A Fake Cultivator
1 month ago

sanguine: omg I totally agree
People get butthurt cuz of one-star reviews and they're even deleted while five-star ones which basically have no context and many of them are there just to get the exp, no one cares about them

I Might Be A Fake Cultivator
1 month ago

sanguine: omg I totally agree
People get butthurt cuz of one-star reviews and they're even deleted while five-star ones which basically have no context and many of them are there just to get the exp, no one cares about them

I Might Be A Fake Cultivator
1 month ago

Heretoc: It's quite funny seeing everyone complaining about him rating the novel with just a star. He does points out major flaw of this novel. I had to stop myself from face palming after i read the first few chapters. So I whole heartedly agree with the OP.

About the rating? We all can agree that Qidian's rating system is broken, one sided and utterly useless. I believe that more than 95% of the reviews just contain unintelligible gibberish, emotes and one line statements which are supposed to tell us everything. Any true review, if ever written, is soon submerged under the flood of nonsense reviews.

Btw, most of the novels hosted here, barely have an average 3.5 star rating. Basically, Qidian is just flooding the market with mediocre novels.

Anyway, I never see people complaining about the 5 star ratings which have well... Nothing.

Hypocrites.


Sorry for the rant!

I Might Be A Fake Cultivator
1 month ago

AzureConqueror: While I haven't read this, I do know One Punch Man has comedy that is not stupid. It has world building. The main and side characters all have a backstory. And there's character development. Those are the things that make One Punch Man so popular despite the fact that so many people hate op main character's. And others have already said this novel lacks the things that made OPM great. It's not just about comedy

I Might Be A Fake Cultivator
1 month ago

Lesbian_Loli: I like one punch man and obsolutely hate this novel :/

Like the review say, there is a difference between true comedy/parody and something that just feel stupid

I Might Be A Fake Cultivator
1 month ago

yoohime: i dont like this type of novel too, so i dropped it in the first 20 chapters

I Might Be A Fake Cultivator
1 month ago

VardorStormDragon: Well it is true that my review is one sided, but that is deliberate. I could have mentioned that the world building was nonexistent and I could have mentioned that the character development was nonexistent. However I am of the opinion that focusing on these things would be misleading and missing the point of the novel. In my opinion the whole point of the novel is the comedy/parody of a generic xianxia setting. Since there was nothing in this novel other than the comedy, that is the point I focused on.

Not sure what you mean by fake reviews. Do you think I have presented someone else's view and not my own? Or do you think I am not professionally qualified to review this novel? Since you don't seem to realize it, let me be the one to inform you that this IS NOT a professional forum of editors and book reviewers. It is a forum of READERS. That means these reviews are a polling of the opinions and impressions of the readers. As a person who has read this novel, I am qualified to write my opinion of what I have read. The only fake reviews would be the ones by those who did not actually read the novel. For example:
"I like the concept, please follow thru. 5-star."
"I love the cover picture, I plan to read this. 5-star."
"I hate the MC's name. It is the villains name from my favorite novel. I will never read this. 1-star."

I Might Be A Fake Cultivator
1 month ago

Efank: You must either be someone who is an underage or one of those "glorious" chinese "50 cent army" member. He said it's **** because author tries to make stupid jokes out of stupid situations. I fully agree to his review. Nobody cares about world building and character development if the PLOT itself is stupid or ludicrous.

I Might Be A Fake Cultivator
1 month ago

Blackfalcon1210: What world building? And character development?? Lacking. The world is big and in the heaven realm. That’s all we know. The people??? The MC is an idiot, becomes friends with another idiot over a fight. Girl next door is nice but we know nothing about her. His review is pretty accurate.

I Might Be A Fake Cultivator
1 month ago

VardorStormDragon: You need to be aware before reading this that it is a very low brow comedy. This best way I can describe this is "A wannabe Marx brother clone does Xianxia" or something like that.

For some reason I was expecting a normally intelligent MC forced or tricked into taking a somewhat broken or difficult system and working through the comedic problems in order to transform it onto a somewhat OP system. What I got was totally different. Sorry I don't consider constant ludicrous stupidity as funny nor do I classify it as comedy. Since this is only about stupidity, I find it to be just that, stupid.

However I have to say, if you enjoy that sort of thing then you will probably find this to be absolutely hilarious and I highly recommend this to you. In that case you should consider this a 5-star review.

If you have a low tolerance for abject stupidity then stay far away from this. Since I am in this category, my personal rating is less than 1-star and my advice is avoid at all costs.

What experience you have will depend upon what direction your sense of humor heads in.

I Might Be A Fake Cultivator
1 month ago
Reading Status: C2
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I Might Be A Fake Cultivator
1 month ago

Irene_Xu: Writing Quality- One star. Too many owos uwus. Its almost as if the Author doesn't know how irl people interact.

Stability of Updates- Five stars. Anything that has around 50 chapters is good stability in my eyes.

Story Development- One star. Author made him too OP, and he's just going around doing whatever random thing he wants. He beats up a bunch of first years with his x100 power in relation to them as a first year, with the nick PP Big. Yeh no. He uses his weird plot armor face changing thing to become a God professor. Also, what happened to the Michelle girl plot? What? iTs aLmOst aS If tHe aUtHor dOeSN't uNdeRStAnd wHaT tHe heLl hE's dOing

Character Design- One star. What is the point of designing all these characters if you just have the MC toss them around?

World Background- Four stars. I like the power system. I mean, I like all academy setting,,, Just wasted on a story written like this.

Surviving In My Novel
1 month ago

ReihsRahl: This could be such a good novel if it wasn’t filled with unnecessary info-dumps, there are so many details that nobody cares about!
In this novel there is an interesting story and the author knows what he he writing about and on Webnovel this is quite rare, but the story is so filled with info-dumps that it becomes too slow and boring. It should be entirely rewritten and all the chapters should have at least half the length, and the story would be still slow.
All of this without considering the bad grammar that makes the reading process even more exhausting.

Starship commander trapped in a fantasy world
1 month ago
Reading Status: C38
A lot of potential, but with poor execution. There are too many times that the story contradicts itself. Moreover the MC is too OP and everybody follows him without ever questioning him from the first moment they meet him. Finally this story should really need some editing, there are so many errors that are even indicated by the readers, but the author didn’t bother to correct them.... View More
I Can Respawn In The Apocalypse!
2 months ago

CANAAN: The story has a lot of potential and generates great momentum and urgency in the early chapters causing you to really get into it.

The problem is the author interrupts that for what is essentially a side quest. Breaking all sense of urgency and emersion from it. Its like someone is running in the Olympics is about to get gold and then hits the breaks to check his phone real quick, only for everyone to gain on him and surpass him.

To me breaking that momentum cost the story a large part of its appeal, resulting in a less extravagant rating.

The worst thing is that I get the how and why the author did it. Even if it would not have gotten past an editor and instead would have been moved to the day after the mass grinding race before betas end...

Certainly the info dump on items that would later exist in the real life game but did not exist yet and the shorter chapters really didn't help things.

Thus my recommendation is this:

Read the story if you're alright with such mistakes every now and then and simply enjoy a good concept more than the pacing and timing of stories over all.

For a novel on webnovel, this has a great concept and nice story, if it sees a worthy editor as a completed story, I have no doubt it would sell as a stand alone ebook.

I Can Respawn In The Apocalypse!
2 months ago
Reading Status: C6
It’s pretty interesting, but the MC is too OP, if you already know that the MC will succede in everything he does and survive for sure there is nothing at stake and there is no *******. I know that the MCs never die anyway, but you cam still be afraid for them if a story is well-written. View More
I Can Respawn In The Apocalypse!
2 months ago
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