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ReihsRahl: Wiz could you write somewhere the information about the second layer (mostly the races) that you gave somewhere in the second book, because I don’t remember them exactly and probably I’m not the only one.
Thankyou

Reborn: Apocalypse - Volume 3 · C25
3 weeks ago

PettyOfficer: Overall 3.2/5

If you’re ok with a passive MC who has people falling for her left and right, go ahead and read. It’s interesting when characters don’t step all over the MC and hog the limelight with their over-the-top obsession. Don’t expect the MC to do anything but the minimum required of them.

It’s for “comedic” and “evocative” purposes.

Writing quality 3/5

There are occasional errors when the author switches from past to present tense. You can ignore the errors, but they’re a constant irritation in the background.

Stability of updating 5/5

92 chapters in 20 days. Dang, son. Maybe the author needs to slow their roll and plan out a bit more. Each chapter is probably over 2,500 words. That’s 230,000 words. You should be satisfied with half that amount and if you demand more, I’m going to flame you on the author’s behalf.

Story development 3/5

It would’ve been higher, but the characters keep interrupting with their obsession with the MC. It got tiring real fast when so many strong people came out of the woodwork and obsessed over the MC.

Character design 1/5

Everyone important is OP, especially the MC who was crafted as a Mary Sue. She even had no ties to the world, which made her the ideal person to revolutionize the otherworld. Sadly, the MC loses any ability to make those impressive inventions after transmigrating to another world. That is, except that magic suppressing bracelet or whatever.

What’s worse is that she latches onto the body’s family despite being characterized as independent because she “owes” them for giving her another chance. Seriously? The original owner died stupidly for not listening to her mother. Even if you’re caring for her family for convenience, the least she could do is try to control her wild sister’s behavior. You don’t live in a bubble. It’s a dangerous world of magic and monsters.

It’s really tragic since all we’ve got to show for the MC’s intelligence is their aloofness and confidence as a child. Listen to the MC go on about dissecting things without the MC making tech for self-defense. See as the MC gets into dangerous situations, but never actually be in danger because their transmigrated soul rejects magic and any threat is too weak or already fell in love with the MC.

I had high hopes when the MC talked about skipping town on her kingdom for being looked down as a talentless nobody. She wanted to start a business on her own. But when no one respects her status as a duke, I’m losing all confidence in her, especially when she’s incredibly passive.

She doesn’t control her sister, doesn’t make any defenses when threatened, doesn’t make tech for a distraction or toy, and overly relies on an unknown power that might give out at any time when negating magic.

Let’s not mention the potential love interests that appear, being excessively powerful and unreasonable. I’m getting flashbacks to ”His Genius Wife Is A Superstar” where the characters step all over the supposedly strong and independent MC. It’s infuriating and depressing.

World background 4/5

There’s enough to go around when the characters aren’t busy pouting about who gets the MC. There are a few things I want to debate, but maybe the author addresses the problems or I missed something. Either way, it’s a pretty slow and steady build.

NoGift
2 months ago

Kreature: An honest review that I might be grading a bit harshly.

The quality of writing is pretty good with mostly proper grammar, consistent with it's tense and style of writing, as well as spelling. While the novel could use more attention to detail, whether it be in fights, inventions, or people. Overall I find no real problem with it. I am normally a very nitpicky person when it comes to the quality and style of writing. This novel generally has almost no mistakes if any. A style that's easy to read and understand. The more chapters I read, the more the writing improves. Keep up the good good work!

I have absolutely no idea when it comes to the stability of updating as I haven't been here for very long, so I've been scrolling through the comments in which absolutely no one complains about it. Maybe a few people asking for a mass release, but it's nothing big. From what I've observed, the stability of the updates are more than enough to satisfy your average or even hungry for more readers.

This may be too early for me especially since they've only recently returned from studying, however the Story Development isn't much from my perspective. I can foresee a lot of development in the future for them from where I am now but as for what I've read, it's not very satisfying. Not much has happened throughout what I've read all in all, but I'm expecting some very promising things from the foundation that has been and continues to be set up. The subtle foreshadowing throughout everything leaves the reader wanting more.

Now here's where I have a bone to pick. The character development, or lack thereof, drives me crazy. Argent has not been improving herself or even truly growing. We have not had moments in which she's wrong or even learns from her mistakes. Training in it's own doesn't count unless you make a point of it. Noting has truly grown into a part of her aside from her family and servants from beginning to chapter 60. The only thing that she has learned or gained is to love her family as well as learn from others. Which is honestly for her, a very grand improvement but I can't get past the fact the she hasn't grown otherwise. She may be a genius, but geniuses make mistakes and learn from them just as well as anyone else. I also have a bone to pick with her being indifferent at the beginning. Destroying to countries out of spite is NOT indifferent. That is all about her indifference. Aurum on the other hand, gets a big 5 stars for her character development. From and anxious and traumatized young girl, never knowing how to deal with people, into a Little White Flower. Aurum was able to exponentially improve her social interaction skills despite her lack of interest and trauma. Her life or death clinging to Argent has lessened or increased? Into a Bro-con for us readers.The only thing I have a problem with is the lack of expansion on her emotions and her healing process over time. Otherwise, Aurums Character Development was fantastic. Winter and Mishla: nothing. Nuff' said. Aurum really carried the team in this section.

World Dev? I'm a pretty terrible judge of that but I'm not satisfied by the lack of detail for it, I guess. From what I've read, the author doesn't really expand on it much. They probably will in the future, but it's honestly not to my liking. There's nothing wrong, it's just not fantastic to to me.

Overall, this is a really good read. Finally there's a female protagonist. 50 chapters in and there's really no sign of the ML which is normally a miracle. He'll pop up later though.

Female Lead? Check!
Genius? Check!
Overall Decent Development? Check!
Strong FL? Check!
MC Takes No BS? Check!
Naive MC? HELL NO!
Fantasy? Check!
Monsters? Haven't really encountered them yet.
Good Read? HELL YES!

NoGift
2 months ago

Jonal: Hi
I don't usually post review but making an exception cause this story has frustrated me a lot.
Let's get over with the good parts. No grammar errors and i am thankful of that. Bad grammar is always a plus and the writer does his job in it. Updates daily and maybe twice a day still a plus.
Let's pass on world background now. Well here the things start to get a little awkward(at least for me). The mc comes from a small small (maybe to small) of a village and has no idea whatsoever how big the world is. Nothing bad until here. The plot starts and he is in the run cause he has a forbidden realm. And here i lost it cause the mc is being hunted from the academy (for that mainly and for killing some academy mages but that happens later). He get's the training done and it's the typical mc that loves body refinement before the mage training. Lack of patience is seen at all the things that have to do with everything having to do with magic but in those related to body refinement none and are accepted as a rule or whatever (reminds me of the chinese cultivation novels horrible ones). The mc is rash and a lot, does stupid things sometimes and can't seems to find the solution where a logical one is at sight.
Ex. at the latest chapters he moves from a valley to another to join the Shadowflame Society and there he participates in the tournament to get a chance to get noticed and the **** hits the fan. Power struggle from the clan that governs that valley(different factions to get the power inside the same clan have different ideas about the future 3 main ones).
Confronted with the choices he has to make he gets an all time ''**** hits the fan'' situation by the one he choses.
[In my opinion the best outcome the author could make there was to have him move to another valley. Whats the big deal his friend is not with him as a companion anymore and he can go to avoid more troublesome situation. But no the logical way its not the way of the story. At the end what would have cost him? Some more months to get to travel maybe a year but what's a year for the people who are mages and body refiners. They usually train for decades or a century to pass a stage meaning the live for far far to long.]
Starting with the story development. I didn't get literally jack **** in this one. Like from all the basic info the mc knows nothing. The problem is he has teachers(albeit temporary ones) and even 2 gods(proclaimed from the 2 people he met no idea is it's true but from their power they seem legit) that confront him about his choice. His enemies seems to duplicate with every new place he visits and i was starting to think this would be another xianxia ****.
The characters have their own personality mostly. Enemies are usually described as mobs and the others except the mc only a passing by cause why expand on someone that wont be in the next chapter.
The mc however is total .......... (don't know what insult to throw at him anymore). As a mentioned early is totally rushing in situation and when he does think over a situation every damn situation flies away every time a fight starts. When given the chance to practice his realms and body refinement in the prison cell given from one of the self proclaimed gods [golden opportunity study for 100 years and become strong food included a new realm yes no enemies cause they have no idea where you are] what he does? He takes an overdose of ''real opening pills'' (10 or so) and leaves in less than a year cause he couldn't handle the loneliness that the place caused. What does he expect to have power handled in a golden plate here have some of this and this and a sprinkle of that one. Now as the author says taking to many of these ''realm opening pills'' causes you to do booom and all the place is like a red paintball battlefield (basically what happens to normal people on earth when they take to much of something without the booom) and the mc survives. How come ????/ Why???/ Just for plot advancement???/ Seriously it needs and explanation and a good one at that.
Finally the fu***** forbidden realm that he is hunted for. Again we know jack **** for that one cause author mentions it like some times in the first chapters 1-2 times near the chapters fifty something and that's it. It has been like more than 100+ chapters don't you think he should look in it or does it even matter overall? Cause what makes the mc different from others is that forbidden realm (which is not as rare as it seems cause apparently tons of others have it). The power of the mc is mediocre at best typical xianxia ones. At a place you are a king with that power at another just a typical commoner or even a servant. 100+ chapters and nothing to wait for and my question is....Might this be the prologue but i didn't know???/ And finally what with the title the paragon??? of destruction??? The mc is nothing no paragon no being of destruction he is slightly above average as if possible.
If you like that xianxia thing feel free to read with those fights and dumb mc that get power from just 'cause author want it.
Finally i am less frustrated. Peace :D

Paragon of Destruction
2 months ago

Mixpro555: All right this novel great writing quality. You have good updates everyday and good world background that with some mystery insides. It has good romance, story. Butbutbutbuuuuttttt.... It has worse power level development. Power level barrier. And whacky power level of MC soooooo whacky and absurd that make it nonsense and i think i will drop this novel... Seriously how can such absurd mc still alive after all that thing happen. This novel has no sense power level on mc believe me if you want good story you can pick this. but if you do just dont think of the mc strength because this ****ty brat mc it has no sense of power level and he is so weak and pathetic to the point it absurd.

Paragon of Destruction
2 months ago

Asiano_Casino: The characters. Ah yes, the characters. It frustrates me to no end that we have such a dumb MC. Every. Single, Fucking. Time. He always chooses the worse option. Always does something unnecessary. Always. That’s why I’m dropping this novel. Though the writing itself is good.

Paragon of Destruction
2 months ago

AzureWolf: This story had promise. When I started reading this I expected somewhere along the lines of actual Mages training and honing on their respective realms and then eventually fuse or enhance the realms. The start of the novel was great up until the girl decided she wanted to tag along.

I was fine with this to an extent until the author had to force the MC out of gaining experience from traveling in the wilderness. The author then inserted some stupid decisions that made some important figure help him on deaths door after a dumb conflict that could have been avoided. after that the MC just starting a training montage for a long time...again.

What really made me quit this novel is when I realized after he went strolling through a city the whole story devolved into a ****ty xianxia novel With the retarded MC being overprotective of woman and angry noble sons because of MC interfering. I expected more but I guess I should not expect too much on this kind of site.

The girl that tags along the MC just ruins the novel. The problem is not having a girl tag along. THE problem is how to author presented her. It's like the author is trying so hard to make her a ML but fails at it way too much.

Paragon of Destruction
2 months ago

SamStrike: Writing Quality = Good
Stability Updare = Really Good

But as for the rest.. Bad...

Paragon of destruction = Paragon of average

First point, MC doesn't seem to be logical at all, he threw golden opportunity to train just because he want to find a shortcut (that doesnt exist) or can't handle the training.

Second point, MC does stupid logical decision even if the best answer/solution is slapped at his face, he goes full retard because of plot (?)

Third point, the MC is AVERAGE, he doesnt have any talent whatsoever; what he has is the forbidden real, that from what is shown is not even that 'legendary', an example of a (my imaginary) scale:

Common - Rare - Rare+ - Epic - Legendary

The forbidden realm is only at Rare, or at max between Rare and Rare+

But the worst point is that 'this advantage' that he has on the forbidden realm IS USELESS; he has a forbidden realm that is only mentioned at the start of the novel and during chapter 50 from what I understood, and nothing. We know nothing about the forbidden realm, what it is exactly, what type it is, NOTHING, he doesn even use it; and we are already 100+ chapters in.

Paragon of Destruction
2 months ago
Reading Status: C569
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Dark King
2 months ago
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The God Virus
2 months ago

Newbiel: Thank you guys for all the nice comment you give me. I know it's only à bad minority but it still hurtfull to be on the receiving end of that hate.

I'm going to take a couple of days off WebNovel to take my distance from all of that. I'm not stopping dont worry :)

Immaculate Spirit · C175
2 months ago

DrewWells: I like a MC that goes around killing people, but he should have a decent reason, in this story The MC kills people on a whim that dind’t do anything to him, moreover he Is completely hypocritical, blaming others for thing he is the first to do.
It would made sense if he was born in a devious place and he can’t distinguish right from wrong, but he had a loving mother and teacher, and he was already an ***** when he came in this world. He knows perfectly right from wrong, he simply is just a shallow character that only cares about power and goes around killing people on a whim.
And he is so cliché, he’s like the villain of too many stories, the baddies that what more power because he want’s more power and is evil because he’s evil without and proper reason.
I hope that everybody knows that power, as much as money, it’s just a means, not the final aim, and reading about a MC that wants power without any other aim it’s quite boring. And again I would like and accept if there was a psychological growth, but fro. The beginning to the end he is the same.

Birth of the Demonic Sword
2 months ago
Reading Status: C182
I like a MC that goes around killing people, but he should have a decent reason, in this story The MC kills people on a whim that dind’t do anything to him, moreover he Is completely hypocritical, blaming others for thing he is the first to do.
It would made sense if he was born in a devious place and he can’t distinguish right from wrong, but he had a loving mother and teacher, and he was already an ***** when he came in this world. He knows perfectly right from wrong, he simply is just a shallow character that only cares about power and goes around killing people on a whim.
And he is so cliché, he’s like the villain of too many stories, the baddies that what more power because he want’s more power and is evil because he’s evil without and proper reason.
I hope that everybody knows that power, as much as money, it’s just a means, not the final aim, and reading about a MC that wants power without any other aim it’s quite boring. And again I would like and accept if there was a psychological growth, but fro. The beginning to the end he is the same. View More
Birth of the Demonic Sword
2 months ago

Phipsi: The MC is just a mass murderer and he owns it to be hanged.

He goes around killing people as if it’s his sport.

The sole reason Doris had to die was him.

The same pattern happened before and will happen very often again.

Innocent people dying to fill chapters.


You can’t just bring death to people cause you feel inconvenient.

Also for those saying she brought her self in that situation you are wrong.

BECAUSE she was already a week long in the swamp and from their interaction we can even find out she was in the centre of the group. There were the rank 4 are AND she was NEVER DISCOVERED(she was in perfect condition so she never made a mistake in that time) only when or little MC pops up she gets discovered.

Also described is that she knew she can’t run as she is a stealth specialized hunter not an agility.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C182
2 months ago

ReihsRahl: Completely agree, I’m dropping this, the MC it’s just a human waste that doesn’t deserve to live and it’s not even the funny type.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C182
2 months ago

ReihsRahl: The problem of this story is that Noah is becoming more and more a f***ing hypocritical and he is both arrogant and annoying, and he is continuously blaming others for faults that he has too.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C182
2 months ago

ReihsRahl: The point is that she dind’t make a mistake, Noah did a mess and she has to pay the consequences for him.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C182
2 months ago

ReihsRahl: No she dind’t, or al least the biggest reason for her demise was only Noah, he made a mess in the swamp knowing that there was another hunter there, he simply only cares about himself.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C182
2 months ago

ReihsRahl: Are you dumb?
He is not a saint? That’s a phrase used to describe normal people, not sociopaths.
She came in his way? No, he came in hers and when she decided that she dind’t want to die because of him, it became her fault? He could have kick her away without killing her.
And then again, the righteous hero that saves the damsel in distress?! We are not in the 19th century, that’s not what I want, what I want is a MC that kills people when they actually do something to him,a MC that isn’t completely hypocritical.
Moreover it would made sense if he was born in a devious place and he can’t distinguish right from wrong, but he still had a long mother and teacher, and he was already an ***** when he came in this world. He knows perfectly right from wrong, he simply is just a shallow character that only cares about power and goes around killing people on a whim. And he is so cliché he’s like the villain of too many stories, the baddies that what more power because he want’s more power and is evil because he’s evil without and proper reason.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C182
2 months ago

DrewWells: I’m curious, what’s your first language?
By the way your english is stil pretty good despite that.

Immaculate Spirit · C175
2 months ago
I’m curious, what’s your first language?
By the way your english is stil pretty good despite that. View More
Immaculate Spirit · C175
2 months ago

Okedra: If ur willing to use a little money, The Divine Dungeon series on amazon is amazing. It uses cultivation methods with a dungeon system, and the main characters are not stupid and consistent throughout the whole series.

Immaculate Spirit · C154
2 months ago

Naramasant: There are nothing good that I can recommend at the top.of my head, sorry.
Tbh, I was always warier when I encounter "cultivation " novel, be it BG, BB, or harem. But harem cultivation novel is definitely something that I dislike the most.
Most of them has the most cliche, overused, plot and story. It's exhausting and definitely boring, and some of them managed to cross the line despite me having set the bar low enough. And all that's left is me wanting to bleach my brain and sue the author for wasting my time.

Immaculate Spirit · C154
2 months ago

Okedra: Little story to explain. I have a Vietnamese friend who was basically a child bride to get the family out of Vietnam and into Germany (16 years old). 25 years later they are in the middle of a divorce. The guys mom told my friend that “in the old country” her son would be in his rights to set my friend on fire for wanting to divorce. Women are only recently getting any equal rights in Asian countries.

Immaculate Spirit · C154
2 months ago

Newbiel: What the hell is wrong with them ??

Immaculate Spirit · C154
2 months ago

Okedra: Nope. Stockholm syndrome is well and good in china

Immaculate Spirit · C154
2 months ago

Newbiel: Really? Rape? Is this a fcking joke? ?

Immaculate Spirit · C154
2 months ago

nemery11: Birth of the Demonic Sword

Immaculate Spirit · C154
2 months ago

Okedra: Also, stay away from the “female/heroine” stories. The authors like to use ra.pe between the FL and the ML for whatever god awful reason. “He loves her so much and can’t stand the thought of her leaving him so he casually forces sex on her” ::shudder:: really bad. ML never feels bad or apologizes.

Immaculate Spirit · C154
2 months ago

Tyicius: Unfortunately, most cultivation novels are like that. I've been following novels like Paragon of Destruction, Nanomancer Reborn, Spirit Immortal (Awesome "cultivation story) and The New World (RoyalRoad).

Immaculate Spirit · C154
2 months ago
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