DaShadoe - Profile

So disappointed. ..3 filter chapters that could have been done in one. New novel taking priority really ducks. This one was decent. Now is just a bunch of filler. Guess time to stop spending stones and time.

Maybe my thinking is off? But if you're in a tower for ten years. .... and outside it's only been a year.... that should make the time in the tower FASTER not slower...right?

If you continue please get an editor or a better one if you have one. The are many things that could help make this a better story to read.

Why do you keep saying he would greet his teeth. This means to say hello... you GRIT your teeth, which means to clench them together ...you GREET people.

Why does it seem like your editor has very little knowledge about pronouns? Is this supposed to be a new dialect or are they just getting dumber as the power levels get higher? The story was much better before when it seemed to flow better. Now it's like broken English..