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Tensei13: I still enjoy this novel. This novel may not be good to others but I have never hated it. Spirit Stones needing to be spent irles me, but a lot of novels are needing spirit stones now here and some people never really liked those novels and kept reading. And now that they need spirit stones to keep going they just not liking it more. Then there are those who do like the novels that other people don’t like and now that they need spirit stones to keep reading, they’ll just spend it and keep on going because they enjoy it. They may not like it better than another novel that they enjoyed more, but that doesn’t mean they hate it. That’s why when I see in the comments people who are still putting the novel down because of the system in the story not being there I can only think that this is the type of novel that you’ve just gotta binge read on. Anyways, my point is that I am still enjoying this novel and I hope there are other that are still enjoying this novel as well. I can’t see those people much because the comments are spammed with the same hate comments that I constantly see in every chapter. I hope they’re doing well and are still going on even despite what people are saying about this novel:)The Mech Touch · C660
Southmonk: I disagree, i think the story is now at the stage where those that like mech design and is interested in the story stick with the story. While those that read for the adrenaline rush/sense of fulfilment/face slapping/ designing binge will quit or wait until the pace picks up to where he designs and improves alot again. Just think of ves now cultivating or in meditation when author espounds the designing dao. Im not saying the story is perfect, it can definitely be improved, but all these view points and experiences are interesting too. Before the conscription, ves didnt know much about journeymen. Now he does alot more, where design philosphies are pretgy much set when one advances to journeyman. I kinda forgot but the war was hinted on a few times? So i guess it has to happen anyway. It would be extremely weird if he breezes thru a 10-20 year war in a few chapters... probably he will do a time skip after this mission is done to the conclusion of the war or a final action. But do be patient guys. Dont be addicted to the xianxia genre of cpnstant faceslapping/action.The Mech Touch · C660
NonsenseUser: seconded, please no harem, it ruins the storyRebirth in Bleach · C1
Fatty_Cream: Let me express my worthless opinion, and by extent revealing to you, the reader, that your opinions are also worthless.
Harem, yes essentially a genre that creates two things, poor character development and an interruption of immersion. I'm not going to accuse any specific author of doing this, instead ill provide an example from the plethora of garbage I've had the displeasure of reading. The cliche where the girls are dumbed down to be enchanted by the main character, which usually has no defining personality, and also for this escapist fantasy to occur the female character has to clash with her established character which usually is haughty or arrogant. What did the main character do to deserve this? Oh, so he was basically being a human being with decency, but for some reasons this explanation is enough incentive for the opposite gender to develop some sort of attachment to him or her, I don't discriminate. The ways in which authors tackle this problem is by providing justification, though they are often weak ones such as "X has never received human kindness as a result of her background of her family being scheming and so on", though this loops back to the implication of my first argument, in which the character development is impeded due to the character ideology being contrasted to fit the authors wishes. To elaborate further, i shall template this "heroine", she's haughty and was born in a higher societal position, so as a result, she has a superiority complex. Alright with this templates i ask why should she care for someone else's kindness? it is to be expected, she was born in a higher position and those below her should be glad they helped her in any way. Instead, it'd be strange for anything but neutrality or indifference to exist in that scenario. Now it'd be different if the character were to interact with someone of the same standing, the character has to stay consistent unless they already had character development in an impactful way for them to react in a different way. Think of it this way, does the passive spineless fellah deserve the girl, an introverted mess with no defining feature, or perhaps the outgoing person with a key defining personality who makes an effort? I'd argue a harem author would say the passive spineless guy deserves her, as he was "nice" to her one time.
Anyways, i went on a rant about how harems are the bane to my existence as they are usually the first indicator of a story going into hell, the reason being that realistic character development is hard enough as is with one heroine but to expect that in every single in other character chasing the MC, who have their own personalities and temperaments, without breaking the readers emersion is difficult to pull off without the weakest of authors just creating the girls to be soulless glorified dolls in his/her's main characters collection.
i'd also like to add those who do not have their immersion interrupted in those examples I've shown are probably people who use harem to self insert themselves into the boring main character archetype, its easy to be nice but its unrealistic for the real world to reciprocate the soulless vessels single character archetype that female harem members provide, as real woman are individuals with actual personalities molded by their environment. If you don't have your emersion ruined by an elf girl with F cup tits who blindly love the main character with 5 other girls with the incentive being as weak as "being nice" then, you, my friend are just lonely. Yes, i used ad hominem in my reasoning as a counter-argument, get over it bro I'm a rad skateboarder who surfs on the weekends, get over it B)Rebirth in Bleach · C1
Daoist_WingLizard: NO *SLAPS* GET YO HAREM PLEADS OUTA HERE!!
TOO MANY GOOD BOOKS RUINED CAUSE OF UR KIND!Rebirth in Bleach · C1
KoFu_: Please...No harem. We are plaged by horny ****egers with harem stories...Be different,be Unique.Rebirth in Bleach · C1
Isilith: I don't intend to write a harem novel. I find them to be forced usually.Roguelike: A second life in Marvel · C0
mr6: I'm honestly disappointed in this arc. The plot has lost its spark. Every chapter seems to be more boring than the last, and we're not really covering anything. I liked how we got to see Ves compared to other Mech Designers, but that's about all I liked in this arc. Regardless, what I really wanna see is Ves using the system and going through various ups and downs as he develops his Mech Design skills and LMC.
Truth be told, I'm fine with Ves going on the occasional expedition for more resources or whatever, but when that's all he does I get the sense that the author is just trying to fill up the pages instead of actually being creative. Especially when he's this long winded about it. Like, all that's happened is that Ves joined the Vandals, kidnapped the Dukes son or whatever, and now there going somewhere. That would have been fine if it was 10-25 chapters that were covering this but it's been way more. Somewhere in the hundreds I think. And that's too much. In conclusion, I just want this arc to end because it sucks, and go back to the awesome story line of the past.The Mech Touch · C564
SuperGuru: I hate this arc please move on. So slow and repetitive.The Mech Touch · C564
1Raunak1: If she manages to escape it will be another 10-20 chapters like Lord Xavier of the detemen system arc!! 😩
Hopefully the author doesn't drag this fight, and Foster gets captured.The Mech Touch · C564
ottospens: like most of us. The novel use to be great but without the system, the cat, and Mech designe stuff this story dont deserve top 50...The Mech Touch · C564
KhanarL: Yeah. I think I've been supportive of the author so far about doing more world building, but the pace of the Vandal Arc has really gotten bogged down. I actually like Ves as a character and seeing his growth as a Mech Designer is the soul of the story for me. The Vandal Arc spends too much time away from Ves. Even when Ves is on screen he lacks agency. The outcome of the plot does not seem to hinge on Ves actions, which makes him less interesting to watch as a protagonist.
Although I will still continue to read, I'm starting to divert my power stones away from this story. Vote with your wallet (or power/spirit stones in this case).The Mech Touch · C564
Daoist_Void: What do you mean by looking down on asian martial arts?The City of Terror · C81
Evile: Thank you!
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Adelasorra: Luna has always been my favorite female character. I'm really happy she got some time in this chapter. ❤Chronicles of Arth: Prince of Shadows · C22
Mutt: If the link doesn't go through then rip (https: //tvtropes .org/pmwiki/ pmwiki.php/Main/DeusExMachina) okay so then let me quote from this website "when some new event, character, ability, or object solves a seemingly unsolvable problem in a sudden, unexpected way. It's often used as the solution to what is called "writing yourself into a corner," where the problem is so extreme that nothing in the established setting suggests that there is a logical way for the characters to escape. If a bomb is about to go off, someone finds a convenient bomb-proof bunker in easy reach. If a protagonist falls off a cliff, a flying robot will suddenly appear to catch them. A Million-to-One Chance of something occurring is accomplished by a bystander who didn't know what they were doing."A Wizard's Secret · C20
Mutt: so We get no whiff of this quantum computer and then suddenly the MC is like "Oh if only if I have this ex machina" and then the ex machina appears. Instead of just following him overA Wizard's Secret · C20
Bogart: Let me guess, after this he is going to make the uninspired choice of beginning with the fireball spell, but because of the "Matrix" it will be loads better than his teacher's... Pretty stock if you ask me. Author would have been much better to reference this technology in the beginning. A sudden info dump with no prior warning or idea that such a thing existed, throws you waaaay off.A Wizard's Secret · C20
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