omgitsaray

3d

Posted

Like other reviewers have said, this novel is incorrectly named. The novel follows the MC 10% of the time while 90% of the time, follows the story line of the eldest disciple with a sword body. It should be named Adventures of my disciples, or something similar. The MC only appears when his disciples are getting bullied by experts too strong for them to handle. Otherwise, he's hiding in his mountain eating and sleeping. Is the story interesting? It's okay, just the disciples meeting people, leveling up, and fighting across realms. Nothing special and nothing that makes you want to keep reading. This is just an average novel for people who don't have anything else to read.

I See the Aura of the Great Emperor in All My Disciples

Eastern · Don't Let Me Stay Up All Night

omgitsaray

5d

Commented

I love this high quality translation from Atlas Studio

Chou Siwu had killed the young master of the Chou family in one move.

I See the Aura of the Great Emperor in All My Disciples

Eastern · Don't Let Me Stay Up All Night

omgitsaray

5d

Commented

Forcefully changing the mc's name into English has now made other chinese references super awkward in the novel. This is why I always prefer keeping people's names in Chinese.

Like the "18 Dragon Subduing Palms", a remarkable martial art, when Qiao Feng performed it, he could sweep the world, however when it was Yelu Qi performing, it was comedic.

I Really Didn't Mean To Be The Saviour Of The World

Sci-fi · Objects in Fire

omgitsaray

5d

Commented

Do you even read what you MTL? The raws say shuttle, and not a single chinese character remotely talks about time.

He packed his bags and boarded the time machine.

I Really Didn't Mean To Be The Saviour Of The World

Sci-fi · Objects in Fire

omgitsaray

5d

Commented

Zhong Lei is the name.

"Name: Carrie Thomas."

I Really Didn't Mean To Be The Saviour Of The World

Sci-fi · Objects in Fire

omgitsaray

5d

Commented

If someone is asking a question, there should be a question mark.

"What are you doing!"

I Really Didn't Mean To Be The Saviour Of The World

Sci-fi · Objects in Fire

omgitsaray

5d

Commented

Chen Feng turned into Harrison Clark, lol!

Harrison Clark sat curled up by the window, watching the sunrise alone, as still as a statue.

I Really Didn't Mean To Be The Saviour Of The World

Sci-fi · Objects in Fire

omgitsaray

10d

Commented

The raws say, "I gave you face but you wouldn't take it!"

Seeing this, Li Xuheng cursed, "You're so ungrateful!"

I Secretly Develop Myself In The Demon World

Eastern · Monochrome Glasses

omgitsaray

10d

Commented

It's not fried, it's traded in the raws. It's a lost in translation kind of thing.

Two hours have passed now, and the price of the game bracelets has been fried to millions per piece, and this price is increasing at an astonishing rate every minute.

I Secretly Develop Myself In The Demon World

Eastern · Monochrome Glasses

omgitsaray

11d

Commented

Your sister is a hand-grabbing cake! Your whole family are hand-grabbing cakes! It's a scallion pancake with or without scallions.

The young man was in his early twenties, eating a pancake with big bites while drinking soy milk. In addition, he was holding a hand-grabbing cake and a bowl of eight treasure congee. These were not for anyone else but his own breakfast.

I Secretly Develop Myself In The Demon World

Eastern · Monochrome Glasses

omgitsaray

11d

Commented

It's not a game warehouse, it's a game cabin.

Because game warehouses were expensive, and early game warehouses could only play designated games from game companies, virtual reality games were not widely popularized for a long time.

I Secretly Develop Myself In The Demon World

Eastern · Monochrome Glasses

omgitsaray

11d

Commented

It's one hundred million, not billion.

"Enrollment completed, cash reward of one hundred billion yuan!"

Starting from a Fake University

Urban · Two Murderers

omgitsaray

11d

Commented

They've only rented the place for one day, the author better not forget about that.

ch 0 9 Chapter 9 External Teachers_1

Starting from a Fake University

Urban · Two Murderers

omgitsaray

11d

Commented

It's not a hacker, the raws call it a cheat/golden finger.

There's another reason why Ding Yue is insisting on making this fallen examination hoax into reality, it's because he's curious to see what kind of a hacker he would unlock after completing these four steps?

Starting from a Fake University

Urban · Two Murderers

omgitsaray

11d

Commented

There's a bunch of missing translations when the MC first sits down and flirts with the waitress. I didn't check the rest.

ch 0 1 Chapter 1 A Fake Admission Letter_1

Starting from a Fake University

Urban · Two Murderers

omgitsaray

11d

Commented

"What do you want to drink?"

"What will you drink?"

Starting from a Fake University

Urban · Two Murderers

omgitsaray

15d

Commented

How convenient. Just like how other mc's casually read a magazine about building a steam engine in their previous world, right?

A hobby Leonard had taken up in his spare time.

Catastrophe Card King

Games · Blindness

omgitsaray

21d

Commented

If you can't make up new words, you cannot work for webnovel.com

Looking at the skills that appeared in his mind, just like the "Immortality" talent from before, Lu Yuan hesitated for a moment before reacting: "This is the Attribute Template, Experience datatization."