The_Preto

2mth

Commented

Better have a time skip and resume of week

Do you guys want a time skip. Because this is really slow paced and I think it would be better to have a time skip then continue this way. I'll also do a short explanation of what he does during that time skip.

Percy Jackson: Wouldn’t You know it

Book&Literature · ReaderOfTheSwords

The_Preto

2mth

Replied to ScarlettYgddrasil

I think he will open the second gate too and over time prove that they are better at everything. Then leave the mysterious eyes to Akashi, make the difference between emperor vs conqueror and wake up Akashi

ch 262 Chapter 262: Title At The End Of The Chapter!

Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)

Anime & Comics · mythoast

The_Preto

3mth

Commented

sora with shimizu is a good dinamic and potencial for (both) character's growth

ch 0 9 Aftermath

Haikyuu: A Twin's Choice

Anime & Comics · WeighingSwing_35

The_Preto

3mth

Commented

Really curious to see the emotional evolution of MC

ch 14 Farewell

Harry Potter: I'm James Potter.

Book&Literature · Nathe07

The_Preto

3mth

Commented

Good luck, hope everything resolve will be okay

ch 28 Announcement

Born as Gojo Satoru Cousin

Anime & Comics · Takamiya_Shin

The_Preto

3mth

Replied to mythoast

Some people are over reacting, so don't worry my man. Just continue with the good work and passion. ps: more Momoi x Tsuna and Tsuna with his family, pls

But, well, I might have gone a bit overboard, so thanks for the feedback!

Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)

Anime & Comics · mythoast

The_Preto

3mth

Replied to Blasphemer_reader

But will have consequences, i really think that is possible and Tsuna really push the GoM beyond the Canon 🤷🏾‍♂️

Plus, the power dynamics with Tsuna's existence were different. I thought that, it made sense for Kise to enter the zone, especially since he had no injured this time and had shown big improvement.

Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)

Anime & Comics · mythoast

The_Preto

3mth

Replied to Myzy

In high performance, people always strive beyond the limit, what matters is victory and that's what makes it so captivating to watch, it's no wonder that in rare cases some have "super focus"/zone and make history in the field (e.g.: MJ, Kobe, Felps, Uzain Bolt, CR7, Messi and so on), but the question is to see the consequences with Kise... I guess it will be a few weeks of neglect and maybe even physiotherapy perfomance the athltes

Hey, everyone! I noticed some concerns about Kise entering the zone in my story.

Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)

Anime & Comics · mythoast

The_Preto

3mth

Replied to Vandalieu_Zakkart_0030

i think that Kise will be have a lesion or be really close to one

ch 220 Chapter 220: Kise's Dance in the Zone

Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)

Anime & Comics · mythoast

The_Preto

3mth

Replied to BunnyFF

Remember that Tsuna is not in the zone and was caught in surprise during this exchanges

ch 220 Chapter 220: Kise's Dance in the Zone

Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)

Anime & Comics · mythoast

The_Preto

4mth

Commented

i really like their relationship, hope that both Coral anda Roy accept each other feelings/desires

Roy was pulled into the portal, and chuckles came from behind it. Roy grunted, and water splashed. Coral gasped. "Why do you have a dog in your hood, Roy?"

The Witcher: The Divine Hunter

Video Games · Leohart

The_Preto

5mth

Commented

no harem sect for the win

So imma make a compromise, she gets the upgrade but Ash is still only going to date Maki.

The Phoenix of Jujutsu Kaisen

Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3

The_Preto

5mth

Replied to Seiyu

Tsuna has the potential to open the "true"/team zone, but i'm really curious to see if his gate will be different

Aomine mumbled with a smile as he placed his hand on the doorknob. His muscles tensed as he pushed the door open with determination.

Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)

Anime & Comics · mythoast

The_Preto

6mth

Commented

brotherzone is a sad thing... worst than friendzone.... Just hope my bro's heart don't break too much

ch 54 Chapter 54: Getting Along

Bleach: Shadows of Destiny

Anime & Comics · LazyXalien

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6mth

Replied to Sovannra_Seang

dates and romances are a little bit cliche, but this is also a good and confy aspect

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The Phoenix of Jujutsu Kaisen

Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3

The_Preto

6mth

Commented

i really curious to see what type of change Ash will bring in the world and characters, not only in power upgrade or event change, but mentality and relations dinamics, for example, Gojo not be alone and melancolic because of this, or Megumi be more open and creative etc etc

ch 17 Just Trying To Have Fun

The Phoenix of Jujutsu Kaisen

Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3

The_Preto

6mth

Commented

remind me of Haikyuu, soo it was a good reading and dynamic

[A/N—Tried to change the Volleyball matches writting style! Heavily focused on what happened in the game— probably not gonna write important matches this way but give me your thoughts?]

Volleyball Dreams: A Horimiya Tale

Anime & Comics · freshleaf

The_Preto

8mth

Commented

I think developing more the difference between "professions", advantages and disadvantages between each one would be interesting, but I know that would also come with time equal development in general (world, character etc). Otherwise, it's very interesting and has the future of picking up a protagonist in early youth, instead of an adult or late teens.