dwvande

1yr

Commented

One small error, probably from using a spell checker. The Equus should be a "steed", not "stead".

ch 19 Equus

dwvande

1yr

Commented

Why didn't you expect it to be popular? The story is light, quirky, a good read, and is different from 99% of the transmigration/reincarination novels floating around .

ch 24 Seamless

dwvande

2yr

Commented

Watch out, the coyotes have picked up the scent.

Even some older women... but we don't need to talk about that.

dwvande

2yr

Commented

Nothing like reverse psychology.

As she hit him, she scolded, "Don't act all high and mighty! Do you think you're some unrivaled super handsome guy in the universe? Let me tell you! Brat, you don't have the liberty of deciding whether you want to be with her. In fact, she's not even interested in you!"

Almighty Daughter Runs The World

Urban · Unforgettable Speech

dwvande

2yr

Commented

No pressure.

"No need to look anymore. This is an individual exam room for you. Do your best and the results will be out tonight. If you don't get accepted, you will be shot tomorrow morning," said the examiner beside him.

I Am Not A Mage Lord

Games · Miracle prayer

dwvande

2yr

Commented

double,double boil and trouble...

If it was auctioned in a provincial city, the final transaction price might double or even double.

The Genius Mage

General · AB

dwvande

2yr

Commented

Is it the "Red Bull" elixir found in convienence stores?

"What kind of bull is it? Why is it so strong?"

My Girlfriend From Turquoise Pond Requests My Help After My Millennium Seclusion

Eastern · Red Pepper Afraid Of Spicy

dwvande

2yr

Commented

At least the constant activity isn't being described in gory detail.

"You're right, my lovely wife. Watson has become so outstanding because of God's blessing! We can't let down the God's good intentions. We must work hard and make love. Perhaps the next child will be even more outstanding than Watson."