LonelySago

3mth

Commented

The third time the author mispell "Hagrid" is the time to stop reading this.

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LonelySago

3mth

Commented

My pops was watching one piece and coincidentally read this with the one piece opening on the bg. Hahaha

((Music time! Play Naruto OST Chain Explosion (FULL) ))

LonelySago

3mth

Commented

Bruv

"Shit…" Richard muttered a curse under his breath. "There is a zombie apocalypse happening right now."

Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System

Sci-fi · Faux1231

LonelySago

3mth

Replied to dog_townlord

Yes. .That's what it's called exactly.

Others, however, argued that murder couldn't be justified, even in the face of infidelity. After all, cheating wasn't against the law, no matter how unforgivable it might be.

As the committee deliberated, Dumbledore couldn't help but let a small smirk play on his lips. The allure of Gringotts, the symbol of wealth and power, had proven too tempting for the Wizarding World to resist.

I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

Movies · AlienWarlord

LonelySago

4mth

Commented

"Posted three minutes ago on the official site [Image]."

Superhunt

Games · FETI

LonelySago

4mth

Commented

Soon enough, the elf finally spoke, his voice trembling but resolute. "D-Dobby wants to be free!"

I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

Movies · AlienWarlord

LonelySago

4mth

Commented

You can summon Shenron

'I'll have to test it out later…' Stashing the stone away from the time being, Peter wondered, 'What would happen if I collect all three of the Hallows together?'

I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

Movies · AlienWarlord

LonelySago

4mth

Commented

Dumb old door?

[Insert picture of Dumbles here]

I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

Movies · AlienWarlord

LonelySago

4mth

Commented

[Insert picture of Voldemort here]

I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

Movies · AlienWarlord

LonelySago

4mth

Commented

21 states in the US categorize adultery as misdemeanor.. Though, there are countries where you can kill a cheating spouse legally though there are certain conditions to be met, like in Rick's case. He accidentally saw his wife cheating and killed the other guy. If he premeditated the whole thing, it would be a different crime. But him, seeing his wife acts on accident and killing them will be seen as an impulse rather than his goal. If he even show remorse and play the victim in the court, he'll be able to win the case against him. Intent is always defined in the proceedings. (i'm a janitor in a courthouse) 😂

Others, however, argued that murder couldn't be justified, even in the face of infidelity. After all, cheating wasn't against the law, no matter how unforgivable it might be.

I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

Movies · AlienWarlord

LonelySago

4mth

Posted

Quite the disappointment. If the author written a story in another setting, i think he would be great. But it feels like i'm reading a Chinese drama with English dub. Though I know a lot of readers here would read this (we all know that there are a lot of trash novels here). Cringe interactions and unsuitable tone in characters dialogs. These are thr things that made me stop reading this. It started off really great, and the MC's first interaction was normal. But after a few chapters it went downhill really fast. I don't even mind the huge tike skip but please make it more meaningful. Like growth in perpective or adapting to his circumstance, he still talks like a western man and he lived for a few decades in a cultivation world. Even foreigners living in china change their ways when theyblive in that country. That just goes to show the author isn't well equipped in the cultivation setting as he has never been in that type of culture. Anyways, i wrote this review because i was really disappointed. If the author deletes this, it just proves my point. Please do better author. Or write another story thst isn't cultivation theme, i would very much would like to read it.

Poison God's Heritage

Eastern · Biako

LonelySago

4mth

Replied to IlHitlI

I stumbled upon this comment and got me to read this book. And oh boy I was so disappointed.. You seriously need read more books if you find this perfect. Idk about how you judge a "perfect" book, but if you think cringe interactions and unsuitable character dialogs then this book is perfect. Its like a Chinese drama dubbed in English. Characters have Chinese names but sounds so western when thay talk. Its conflicting with the Cultivation world setting. You won't notice it if you're a westerner but if you've read a lot of well made cultivation novels then you'll easily get my point.

Poison God's Heritage

Eastern · Biako

LonelySago

4mth

Commented

Should the book give explanations? Or it's only for herbs and things that helps it in its cultivation..

There was an herb hidden behind a small rock, I pulled the rock and discovered a purple flower. I didn't know what this was but I yanked it with its roots and placed it in the pouch I got from the sect.

Poison God's Heritage

Eastern · Biako

LonelySago

4mth

Commented

Yu? Or Yan?

"I-I'm Lu Zaifeng, I'm an inner disciple of the Spirit Sword Sect, and have come with miss Yu for a mission of our sect."

Poison God's Heritage

Eastern · Biako

LonelySago

4mth

Commented

He definitely turned into an idiot.. If he took his money, and bought poison with it, he'll be able to increase his cultivation faster.. He's on the clock, he doesn't have the time for exploring. Smh

There was no way for me to return there, and even if I did, what good will it bring me? I finally made it to a cultivator, I have finally achieved my dream, why should I be tied to them? Why not find how this world of cultivation works?