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Not for your writing, it's great. Just to reduce pressure on you. And go over occasional mistakes - like in this chapter you misspelled man as main once. Someone who could go over your draft so you don't have to. View More

WheeledWriter: Thanks for your kind thoughts. I apologise that my writing is difficult to read, I agree a third party more editing for publication would probably improve it, however - I would not know where to even start finding and editor.

As for shorter chapters, I am definitely doing the smallest chapters I can without breaking story flow. Only one or two things happen per chapter - if i cut them in half then you would have chapters that would not communicate anything meaningful. And I personally do not enjoy that approach

Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C64
2 months ago

WheeledWriter: Thanks for your kind thoughts. I apologise that my writing is difficult to read, I agree a third party more editing for publication would probably improve it, however - I would not know where to even start finding and editor.

As for shorter chapters, I am definitely doing the smallest chapters I can without breaking story flow. Only one or two things happen per chapter - if i cut them in half then you would have chapters that would not communicate anything meaningful. And I personally do not enjoy that approach

Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C64
2 months ago
You are writing long chapters. May be three or four short chapters a week. That would reduce pressure on you. And get an editor. View More
Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C64
2 months ago
Store can still have everything, just make it harder to purchase. Prices should match the ability. Keep inventory, make it limited, increase it with time. Sort of like MMOs. You get a medium sized free bag initially. You can increase number over time. Except good ones are hard to get. Afterall, a limited inventory would get filled easily, and he will have to work hard to purchase upgrades. Same with everything else in shop, make him work to get anything worthwhile. View More
Danmachi: Obligations to the Past · C8
7 months ago

AnaamDaoist: You don't actually need to make him go to another dimension. In LLS canon, the tower is connected to several different world. MC's mother herself is training somewhere in heaven, which is huge. There were lots of stuff happening in background, like black hell king establishing labs to create innates. The canon story line itself start when ancient demon emperor takes over old Yue Yang's (pitiful guy) body. Floors of tower remain unexplored. In canon, he was sent to earth for protection. You can have him placed somewhere safe, for training, within LLSverse.

Other World Gacha System · C0
7 months ago
You don't actually need to make him go to another dimension. In LLS canon, the tower is connected to several different world. MC's mother herself is training somewhere in heaven, which is huge. There were lots of stuff happening in background, like black hell king establishing labs to create innates. The canon story line itself start when ancient demon emperor takes over old Yue Yang's (pitiful guy) body. Floors of tower remain unexplored. In canon, he was sent to earth for protection. You can have him placed somewhere safe, for training, within LLSverse. View More
Other World Gacha System · C0
7 months ago

Holou: Actually it's not the system, but the Mc I mean all previous chapters were Mc talking to herself about doing this or learning that no interesting interactions with characters, simply put rather than a cute child demigoddess in the path of OPness, u made her look so boring. But I liked the novel so please don't drop even if I may sound like I hate ur story. It's just the Mc need fixing in my opinion.

In Danmachi With a System · C10
7 months ago
All you initial chapters were lot of information and nothing actually happening. Even the action part wasn't that exciting. Perhaps you can find a good editor. View More
In Danmachi With a System · C10
7 months ago

AnaamDaoist: Reading your previous fanfic, it felt like you had not read the novel completely. Yue Yang's mother is very strong, and that old Taoist her master. They had placed him in another world (earth of first chapter) to safe gaurd him while she trained to battle a bigshot from heaven. Yue Yang's cheat was that he was born out of world tree, had God's blood in him.
I wish you luck with this one, really looking forward to it.

Some another Long Live Summons Fan Fiction · C1
7 months ago
Reading your previous fanfic, it felt like you had not read the novel completely. Yue Yang's mother is very strong, and that old Taoist her master. They had placed him in another world (earth of first chapter) to safe gaurd him while she trained to battle a bigshot from heaven. Yue Yang's cheat was that he was born out of world tree, had God's blood in him.
I wish you luck with this one, really looking forward to it. View More
Some another Long Live Summons Fan Fiction · C1
7 months ago
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Some another Long Live Summons Fan Fiction · C1
7 months ago
His image was bad because he didn't contracted till age of 20. Contracting at the age of 9 is genius. His image should not be bad. View More
Other World Gacha System · C11
7 months ago
Wasn't Yue Yang changed as a child? The real one sent to earth and fake one took his place on LLS world. It is when he turns 20 the old taoist brings him back. Where does 9 year old YY fits in the story? View More
Other World Gacha System · C2
7 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop View More
The Daily Life of the Immortal King · C720
7 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
The Daily Life of the Immortal King · C702
7 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
The Daily Life of the Immortal King · C675
8 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop View More
The Daily Life of the Immortal King · C465
11 months ago
Bit of canon divergence there, most stories list king Arthur to have lived around 5 century AD, while Gringotts in canon was established in 1474, nearly a millennia later. View More
Bleached Multiverse · C53
1 year ago
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