Laephar

2yr

Commented

Again, nothing but simple teasing and lightening the mood.

Leonel grinned. "Aina… That's the first time you've called me by my name…"

Laephar

2yr

Commented

A simple tease.

Leonel's smile widened. "So you pay enough attention to me to notice?"

Laephar

2yr

Commented

Inner peace.

It was an odd feeling. He didn't like killing. And today, he had killed more people than he had even in the Mayan Temple. But, his heart was as light as a feather.

Laephar

2yr

Commented

People not understanding human emotions, wanting a realistic character that behaves is unrealistically...

Still, what felt the most uncomfortable for the group was the odd turn in the relationship between Aina and Leonel. They felt that in the past, Leonel would never ask Aina to do such menial work, nor would he speak to her so neutrally. He gave her commands and assignments no differently than he did to anyone else.

Dimensional Descent

Fantasy · Awespec

Laephar

2yr

Commented

Wonderfull way to introduce a bunch of names, I mean Knights! And this with personalities and all, even backstories! I think I'll seriously will be sad if any of them die D:

ch 31 The usual spar with a different feel (2)

Mad Hound of Esselgarde

Fantasy · callow_dream

Laephar

2yr

Commented

Weren't the Esselgarde's supposed to be the only Marquis family or am I remembering it wrong? Or this family isn't from the Empire?

Rovenin: " The pervert is the fourth son of Count Loenti, the masochist who's enjoying the Maid' s anger is the third son of Baron Heil and the green-eyed bastard who's Bad mouthing you is the Second son of Marquis Rohyan."

Mad Hound of Esselgarde

Fantasy · callow_dream

Laephar

2yr

Commented

I'm too rotten, I can't read "nutty flavour" without thinking about you know what...

'This is really good. It's not too sweet and has a nutty flavour. I like its warm toasty scent.'

Mad Hound of Esselgarde

Fantasy · callow_dream

Laephar

2yr

Commented

Author you truly like names starting with "C" don't you? Not like I'm complaining.

Cahill : " Cain"

Mad Hound of Esselgarde

Fantasy · callow_dream

Laephar

2yr

Replied to Laephar

p.s.: I lowkey crave for a proper bromance, even if I can't help but ship D:

ch 0 5 First Rampage

Mad Hound of Esselgarde

Fantasy · callow_dream

Laephar

2yr

Commented

I find his change of character pretty believable, besides the fact we don't exactly know how he was before. You can't not change when you combine your personality of your past life together with knowing your future. Good work so far, even if it 5+ months since this chapter!

ch 0 5 First Rampage

Mad Hound of Esselgarde

Fantasy · callow_dream

Laephar

2yr

Commented

ah, I know this feeling of rushing motivation and determination to improve yourself all too well. too sad it always disappears the moment I wake up.

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Ascension of the Immortal Asura

Fantasy · rRandom

Laephar

2yr

Commented

I, for one, like this way of him getting his powers, way more closely related mystery involved then the "generic fortuitous encounter in the wild while exploring" or some similar crap.

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Ascension of the Immortal Asura

Fantasy · rRandom

Laephar

2yr

Commented

such a refreshing sight... it's truly a joy to be able to read such a naturally flowing narrative.

ch 0 1 John Fenix

Ascension of the Immortal Asura

Fantasy · rRandom

Laephar

2yr

Commented

I'm extremely excited about how this Situation will resolve itself, if at all that is...

ch 104 Is This the End?

Professor Kal

Fantasy · Mungknut

Laephar

2yr

Commented

I'd rather read a well thought out Story than a rushed one, even at the cost of delays. So all the time of the World to you! The novel is great!

ch 103 The End is Nigh

Professor Kal

Fantasy · Mungknut

Laephar

2yr

Commented

This is the story about a Lich I didn't know I needed. So good!

ch 96 A Little Drafty

Professor Kal

Fantasy · Mungknut

Laephar

2yr

Commented

kinky

If the slaves can escape easily or they can revolt against their masters, this trade would not have existed until now. Strict laws from the governments and special forces from the armies dedicated to the slaves' hunt are the only reason such trade is still going. For example, if a slave kills his master, he and all the slaves of that master and their families will be killed by sitting on a wooden spike.