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Fenrir323: I hope the Novel returns to the system. Chapter 1-416 was a Novel about a System with a Mech shop and some little (or not so little) advetures. 416-till now (666) is a Novel about a Mech designer in the Military who goes fighting and only reparing mechs... Both Novel are great but i started (and want to countiue) to read a novel about a boy with a SYSTEM and a mech shop which developes (Kingdom Bulding elemet). Its nice that we read he can further his patch without the system (prove himself) but its now a novel completly without a system.. He allways says he cant rely on system (Mastery is dangerous/Knowledge to easy/etc). He should use it until its gone (if its gone). He should milk the system as much as possible. I see a trend in the novel that he doenst want to use the system anymore because of his future path. And he spend much more time outside of his shop than with it. No shop can surive that. Sorry for that rant. As i said these are 2 different (and good written) novels and i want to go back to the original.The Mech Touch · C666
teabag: Every one keep saying that this is good but I differ .....it just feels.... childish for me(the reasoning I mean)...... I guess I'll try the other chapters and see if I'll continue or drop off from reading this......(it felt like a teenager was writing this and not an ***** due to the weird reactions of the individuals around him)Stronghold In The Apocalypse · C14
CultureLover: Annoyed. Really annoyed. What's wrong with most of these authors? Why is the author cursing America? Like really? A sugar novel trying to be funny. It isn'tStronghold In The Apocalypse · C12
TianYa: Did he seriously play this game for 6 years? MC is too immature for meThe Immortal Player · C11
BaR03mber: My IGN will be : Death of Hope and Faith
So I will get 3 legendary skill right? 😆The Immortal Player · C5
Saladinxc: All those people who say his mother annoying doesn't understand what "Asian mothers" are?? This example is only mild at best. Bah. You never know the pressure in our lives.Elixir Supplier · C71
CelestialMeatbun: My mom
When I was in highschool : don't date! Study first! Don't get pregnant so early!
College : focus! No bf! Read and study!
Working : find a job! Career!
Today : you have a job! U have a car! A house! But where are my grandchildren? Why do you have no boyfriend? Lovers? Affairs? I want children!
Me : I'm aiming for magic. I want to become a sage!Elixir Supplier · C71
yeeeharrr: This war arc has been going for 164 Chapters. I'm going to pray to the flying spaghetti monster that this arc ends soon.The Mech Touch · C580
ThrustThunder: If you'd like some suggestions of my favorite Novels you can find on Novelupdates:
The New World by Monsoon117 (Teen's World is engulfed by a System. Alone and trapped, he must suffer and endure to survive. VERY WELL WRITTEN!)2016
The Games We Play by Ryuugi (Kid gains power of Videogame Protagonist, Min/max's his skills. Must pretend to be Badass Mafia Boss to outsmart Godly enemies. The most Cunning/Crafty MC I've read in a long time.)2015
Dragonborn Saga by Don_Dokhmesy (Guy reborn into a overly Modded VR Skyrim World, Becomes Lord of Immersion!)2018
A Monster Who Levels Up (Guy transforms into Monsters as his trait, Uses their unique skills to become Op/Rich)2017
The Novel's Extra (Same Author as MWLU about Author who is trapped in his own Novel by a Ghost Writer, must make himself Plot Relevant to gain Exp) 2018
The World Turned into a Game After I Woke up (Guy's World gains Gaming System, Gets killed so much he returns to the past, Shameless looting ensues! Fast food)2017
Worth the Candle by Cthulhuraejepsen (Kid appears in a Battle Royal based of the D&D World he created, gets skillsheet, ruminates on tropes)2017
The City of Terror (Guy wakes up with a status screen in a fever dream city where it's kill or be killed by Chinese monsters of lore, becomes OP)2016
Seoul Station’s Necromancer (Guy returns from conquering a System World to find it has bleed into his own World, becomes OP)2016
The Arcane Emperor (Guy accidently transports himself to Game System World, Gets OP Learning class) 2013
Shadow Hack (Guy gets Shadow Clones to XP grind for him, becomes more OP every chapter)2017
Leveling Up And Becoming Undefeatable (NEET Reincarnated with a System that gives the Skills of Other Wuxia Protagonists, junk food writing at it's most shameless)2013
Invincible Level Up (Begins exactly as LUaBU, but takes a more serious World building approach)2012
Godly Model Creator (Kid in Superpower World uses ability to copy others skills to become OP, Kills his enemies!)2013
The Strongest Gene (Guy reincarnates to World of genetic modification with cheat skill of Luck. Creative face slapping abounds)2017
Rebirth of the Thief Who Roamed the World (Guy regresses and uses VRMMO to get revenge on enemies by creating an Empire of Brothers-in-Arms funded by Shameless looting. OG of it's Genre)2010
Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God (Rips off Rebirth heavily, but the release rate is exemplary and I've commented on almost every chapter)2015
Night Ranger (Transferred into a D&D VRMMORPG, Guy must gain Power before the Apocalypse happens)2015
Advent of the Archmage (Same as Night Ranger but more Magic Driven)2016
Warlock of the Magus World (Genius with a Biochip reincarnates into the wizard world, Devours his enemies. The best example of a *Ruthless* MC I've ever read)2015
The Wizard World (Chip story that has very detailed set pieces, like reading a vivid Lucid dream)2012
Age of Adepts (Another Wizard chip story about a truly guileful MC)2016
When A Mage Revolts (Guy reincarnates with a system that trolls him, eventually becomes the Hero of all persecuted Mages)2016
The Book Eating Magician (Guy's hand turns into a Grimoire that can eat books to learn magic)2017
Tales of Demons and Gods (Mad Snail's Novel, turned Manga, turned Anime about a regressor who uses his Advanced knowledge to become rich and slap faces)2015
Upgrade Specialist in Another World (Increase your cultivation by making your accessories OP? Yes please!)2011
Strongest Abandoned Son (A Cultivator reincarnates into our World, uses powers to slap faces and get rich)2012
The Desolate Era (Kid reincarnates into Wuxia World with OP cultivation technique, eventually kills Gods with his sword. First Novel I read here.)2014Black Tech Internet Cafe System · C1
AuthorWiz: Real 1st, any other 1sts are fake news 😎Reborn: Apocalypse - Volume 2 · C38
Einlion: Where you got 10,000 children from is something only your heart knows the answer to.Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C816
Chibba: Vahn found himself severely lacking 'reasons' to refuse women, even though the only one he actually needed was a general unwillingness...he...just...wasn't...unwilling...!
This is a good sentence.Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C816
Jaedin: Man, this story screams character development. It may have been easier using a more empty state, but I'm impressed how striking the character of the MC from bottom up has developed.Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C816
Hybrix: The path of becoming the Emperor... shall now commence! 😁😁😎😎😖😖
Thanks for the chapter, Ein-san! 😖😖😁😁Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C816
EinlionsBtch: Vahn names the dungeon and fucks itEndless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C816
Nepeake: We need to know how relationship between freya and vahn has changedEndless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C779
anjan011: Ein, i think u should take proper rest for a few days. While pumping out chapters like crazy is great for readers in short term, but it burns out the author greatly, which ultimately is a great loss for the readers. So my suggestion is for u to take a few days off. I dont think any of ur readers will mind that. After all a happy and healthy author means quality content, right?Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C768
Arch_Bishop: Writing Quality 5/5 - chapters are well written with a smooth flow(best way I could think to describe it) to them.
Stability of Updating 10/5 - I feel sorry for eins keyboard... He updates more than any other author while simultaneously being active on discord, comments/reviews, and doing a side story/omake
Story Development 4/5 - Vahns journey is amazing to read, especially now with his children being born and growing, however the (thankfully not very frequent anymore) *** chapters are taking a toll to where I just skip them now. However everything else is fantastic and this story just keeps getting better
Character Design 5/5 - The original characters (especially MC, his named monsters and his children) are all phenomenally designed and written about, and the characters that are from others works (ie danmachi, negima, etc.) have all been an amazing improvement from their original source material counterparts.
World Background 5/5 - Same as characters, the world so far has been expanded tremendously from its original source material, into something much more amazing that leaves you wanting more with each new chapterEndless Path : Infinite Cosmos
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xiao_long92: I seriously dont know why anyone would say or talk badly of this novel its so refreshing exciting and emotional that for me its basically perfection in progress from character development to action to sensual scenes between characters its just perfect and makes perfectly imersed into the story and characters so five stars any timeEndless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Darkness_Light: I love the work but I only have a few suggesting and hope that you take it in a beneficial way. Also hope that your next novel would be soon if any.....
Only gave a three for character design since I think it's taking too long for the MC to understand and adjust to the world compared to how he was at earth and also he's taking too long to move on from his past.
The world background is a four because of the story itself as the progress is too slow. You still haven't even introduced the Xenos yet and also for the fact that the MCs knowledge on the Danmachi novel itself is somewhere in the fifth novel or so limiting his actual knowledge on the plot. With the system he should still be able to buy them but there has been no instantiation of him doing so. You can also let him buy stuff from earth to ease his progress, even if it's blueprints or something similar it should be fine do think about that.
The story development has a four only because he's taking too long to train and go with each girl, like the recent arcs where he went to the dungeon with each of the girls in his familia to train them. Though it is not a bad thing that you give your story a good background do understand that most people might feel like skipping these stuff as they feel that it is somewhat repetitive. Do check that even for actual novels no author goes into such detail as you did, though it can be said that you are building up your experience it would be good if you cut down on a few parts.
Do note that more chapters don't necessarily mean good story. By now he should have already gotten into the actual plot but I still can't see that in the near future. If you want to say that you are taking so long only because of the other characters then do note that even for the actual Danmachi novel the author keeps side stories or even entire volumes for them. Sword oratorio can be such an example.Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
LykosWhitewolf: Just to give Einlion some love again!
Fenrir is best girl! Fenrir is best girl! Fenrir is best girl! Fenrir is best girl! Fenrir is best girl! Fenrir is best girl! Fenrir is best girl! Fenrir is best girl!Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Luft_Rauser: Advisory - the following lyrics contain explicit language:
Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free,
You are a pirate!
Yar - Har - fiddle - dee-dee
being a pirate is all right with me!
do what you want'cause a pirate is free
you are a pirate!
You are a pirate! (yay!)
We got us a map (a map!)
to lead us to a hidden box
thats all locked up with locks (with locks!)
and buried deep away
We'll dig up the box (the box!)
we know it's full of precious booty
Bust open the locks,
and we'll say "HOORAY!"
Yar - har - fiddle dee-dee
if you love to sail the sea
You are a pirate!Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
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