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I think starting from Earth would be a good idea, using it as an operational base while you build a secondary base on another planet. I see the MC using the South Pole base to bring in resources, build up their forces and protect themselves, plus it's the only way to get to Atlantis.

I think an Ashrak changes body each mission, otherwise he would get burned directly at the start of the infiltration. Furthermore, it remains a host and cannot be held responsible by the Tok'ra for the actions of its symbiote in view of their fundamental principle.

For a long term goal, it might be interesting to make a pact with the Tok'ra. By saving Egeria from the Pangars, the MC can strengthen the Tok'ra and this will minimize your importance. Coupled with this it is also possible to give them the heads of Setesh, Hathor, Isi and Osiris and thus perpetuate your alliance in the long term.

In addition to Zat'nik'tel, grenades, Setesh has a Kara Kesh as well as transport rings; I hope that among his stock, the MC will be able to find some In'tar, this will allow him to train his soldiers... There are currently 5 billion people on Earth, so recruiting soldiers and people willing to fight shouldn't be difficult...

Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter.

So, the memories from Chapter 2 come from the symbiote's memory, while the memories from Chapter 3 come from the genetic memories received from the queen... (I didn't understand it that way, I was more thinking of a 5-century memory of the host, and the rest came from the symbiote's memories...)

The MC's body has lived 5 centuries under the influence of a symbiote, its immune system must be completely destroyed and replaced by the symbiote. He will have to regenerate it like the Pangarans, or use tretonine in its place. For now he is using the hara'kesh ring to heal himself but in the long term this risks becoming problematic. Tretonin must be the best option since it is possible to synthesize it.

Thanks for thé chapter.

I'd like to revisit something I've read. The translation in the anime is terrible, and they don't make a distinction between Hiraishin (teleportation) and Shunshin (instantaneous movement, which involves putting chakra into the legs to boost speed). Tobirama acknowledges that Minato is better than him in Shunshin when he arrives on the battlefield. Minato is better at Hiraishin. Tobirama admits that he would have been unable to teleport the entire army like Minato, and with Hiraishin Level 2, Minato is capable of teleporting with his already-created ninjutsu (the Rasengan)

Personally, I see it like this: Minato doesn't really have a wide array of ninjutsu techniques (only Rasengan), unlike Tobirama who is a master in genjutsu, taijutsu, and ninjutsu. It's more of a tactical question in combat. Minato rushes in with Hiraishin for short-range attacks, whereas Tobirama has more options (ninjutsu, genjutsu, taijutsu) However, Minato is capable of imposing his mark in the midst of battle to tag his opponent and is even capable of teleporting something other than himself, like Biju bombs, whereas Tobirama uses pre-established marks on objects to teleport himself

-Recover the time ship on the kingdom of Arkhan, going back in time can be interesting - Otherwise for the moment the Wraiths are dormant, so stealing their technology and their ships can be interesting. -there are also Lantien ships which are recoverable

I find it a shame that Magneto died, I hope to see him come back to be the guide he is in current comics...

I disagree, I put Yangchen in a special case in that she does it reluctantly and she would certainly have no pity for Zhao, the Fire Lord and the generals who follow him, but she would let the soldiers. (If she had the same choice as Aang, namely to take away his mastery, she would have done it.)

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Personally I don't like this chapter at all, Kyochi was a rather cold and very combative avatar, who did not hesitate to kill, she lived in a period of conflict like the one Thorian is experiencing so intervening in this way is very unlikely . (Roku or Yangchen would have a better alternative).

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TFTC

I think that instead of sukko you wanted to say sokka

Thanks for the chapter. I just thought of something, if the MC kills the avatar he will be reborn into the water tribe and there is a 50% chance he will be born among his people right?