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TheMedallion: This novel is not deserve to be called system or level type novel. If you name genius doctor type this novel more like that way. System or level type novel has a charts that show us status what did he do more specific and i can imagine more easily but this novel is not showing anything. Visual ascept zero numeric aspect zero how did this deserve novel system or level tag. If you want to read doctor novel good to be go for it but if you are looking for system and level novel than i do not recommend this novel.

Path of Medicine With a System
1 month ago

Cestarian: The vandal arc is still ongoing, it started in the early 400s (420 or so, maybe a bit earlier), and at chapter 870 it is still ongoing, hopefully in it's later stages, although ves has developed noticably over this time, it's more than half the fucking book already, and like 80% of it is ves talking in circles about the glories of mech design and design principles and all that nonsense (all this content could have easily been covered in 100 chapters)

The Mech Touch
2 months ago

Docnox: At this point you’re just ripping of Star Trek, Please wrap up the current arc as neatly as possible and get back to the Mech Design stuff. You’ve crippled your own story with this Vandal arc, even your Protagonist can’t wait for it to end.

The Mech Touch
2 months ago

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King of Sports
2 months ago

JamesAnthony1999: This novel has a good story and characters development however the non-premium chapters badly need editting. I unlocked the first premium chapter to check and it's easily more readable than the non-premium chapters I have read so far (chapter 25). The problem is the grammar and sentence structure are terrible. It's almost like every word in a sentence has been placed in a random order before moving onto the next sentence and repeating the same thing.

Don't get me wrong, it's possible to read however I found that I was having headaches trying to read it. Everything else is absolutely fine my only problem is that I struggle to read it and it's taking the enjoyment out of the novel for me.

The only reason everything else isn't 5 stars is because I can't read the story clearly enough to give a definite rating so I left them at 4 stars because the plot seems interesting and the author has some great ideas but without being able to properly read it I cannot happily rate it higher.

I might try to continue reading if the chapters get eddited or just slowly over time in order to spread out the strain of reading it. Good luck author and I wish you the best but I can't personally read it yet.

Be happy with sports
3 months ago

Deepsea: Hi i would like to ask at what chapter does the grammar improve? I’m at chapter 22 and it is still a chore just to understand what was said...

Be happy with sports
3 months ago

PayDay: It's so wrong of you to have a novel that could be so much better held back by grammar issues. The story is there, the character is there, but the last of the big three THE GRAMMAR is no where to be found. I can get past the dialogue issue, but you just can't throw commas at a run-on and expect that to solve it.

It has gotten to the point that I'm wondering if you read over what you write. At one point in the Novel you even call the MC a young woman (specifically ch.35). I've tried pretty hard to read this novel, but the mistakes are too glaring to let slide. Even when I skimmed through I was noticing mistakes.

Without an editor I feel I'm being pretty lenient giving it this score. If you are serious about this novel you should really consider working with someone to fix the mistakes.

Be happy with sports
3 months ago

wrw215: It is nice that there is an offical translator again for this novel but with this quality is just bad so many translation errors especially a name butchering seldom seen and there is even an translation already available for guidience. It would wise to rework the existing 80 chapters because at moment it is a nusience to read.

Only I level up
4 months ago

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Doomsday Pillars
7 months ago

Dontlookdown: Jesus christ, you people are retarded. Why cant he say the grammar is bad? Its a damn review! If the grammar is bad then he has every right to say it is. Are you telling me that you cant even criticize a novel if you havent written one yourself too?!?!

Doomsday Pillars
7 months ago

Raest: Why should I? I'm here to learn english not to make money of my writing, but If you're willing to pay for my reviews i'll try to find someone to check my spelling. Anyway you must be quite bored (or in dire need of exp) to go after little me ;)

Doomsday Pillars
7 months ago

Raest: Another webnovel difficult to judge. Story is quite interesting albeit nothing new: reincarnation + doomsday + zombies + base building.

Characters... well our MC is 36 yr old architect and familly man... and that it, all the info we have

World background... well its Earth 2019 so we all know right? As i'm living in a different part of the world and never wisited Bali it would be nice to have some nice description.

Writing quality.. oh boy! Author should readproof his work before posting or ask someone to do editing - plenty grammar errors. It breaks the reading flow for me.

I do enjoy this novel but it could be, with little extra work much brtter.

Doomsday Pillars
7 months ago

Sredni_Vashtar: wish someone else would take over. what a waste of a webnovel

Throne of Magical Arcana
8 months ago

Fafa08: This is a hidden gem. Finally i found another one of these few stories with a proper english sentence structure and properly used grammar!

At the beginning this novel feels like a western fantasy story, where the mc just comes into his power. But this feeling shifts; the novel gets more into the eastern fantasy theme with body cultivation.

Overall it‘s a very good novel: Nice magic and cultivation system, Proper English grammar, nice pacing. Thank you for this great novel.

Paragon of Destruction
8 months ago

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Zhanye Black - [Being rewritten]
8 months ago
Reading Status: C106
This is a hidden gem. Finally i found another one of these few stories with a proper english sentence structure and properly used grammar!

At the beginning this novel feels like a western fantasy story, where the mc just comes into his power. But this feeling shifts; the novel gets more into the eastern fantasy theme with body cultivation.

Overall it‘s a very good novel: Nice magic and cultivation system, Proper English grammar, nice pacing. Thank you for this great novel. View More
Paragon of Destruction
8 months ago

Fafa08: This novel begins slow, but has a steady pace with a well thought out (and planned) story. A lot of stories have the problem that the main character gets to strong to fast. This is not one one them and the potential of the story is enourmes.

In my opinion this is one of the most underrated stories on this site.

Spirit Immortal
11 months ago

Khrams: This is a really solid novel so far. The writing quality is great. The story, while a little confusing at first, explains itself over time. You can tell that it is well thought out and has a clear direction. The updates are godly. Maybe because it is TGIF today, but the author just released a lot of chapters. Again, if you want a good fantasy novel that is solid and unique, this is the place to be.

Spirit Immortal
1 year ago
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Reborn: Evolving From Nothing · C1
1 year ago
Reading Status: C115
This novel begins slow, but has a steady pace with a well thought out (and planned) story. A lot of stories have the problem that the main character gets to strong to fast. This is not one one them and the potential of the story is enourmes.

In my opinion this is one of the most underrated stories on this site. View More
Spirit Immortal
1 year ago
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Spirit Immortal
1 year ago

Friendless: I disagree. At best you can argue that it takes place in a similar universe. But as far as ive read the plot is different enough that it can’t be called a copy.

Spirit Immortal
1 year ago

BlueCastle: Pretty much the only think like douluo dalu is the spirits people have. Besides people don't complain when every xianxia uses almost the exact same cultivation system and that is hundreds of novels. This is much better than douluo dalu in my opinion.

Spirit Immortal
1 year ago

Linodo: Hi there! I'm the author of Spirit Immortal. For those who are new to my novel, welcome! I hope you will enjoy reading the fiction that I have conjured up. Do be kind if you spot any mistakes in grammar, sentence structure or anything in general!

I will try to answer as many questions as I can, except for speculative comments in order to prevent giving away spoilers. So please understand!

**: Help like this review so that more people can see this comment!

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1 year ago
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