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Obito_Tobi: anti hero ans ruthless mc is always used and all of them fail in no more than 10 chapters
also you said his strength is great so how the hell he punch those thugs and only seems like norma punchs
and your explaining for his strength suck it's nowhere the level of superman
saying he can lift a car with one hand not comparable to superman by anyway
he got whitebeard (insane level of strength in one piece characters can carry 100 of tons easily )
meliodas a demon insane strength and speed very very fast and very strong that he took and swing a stick to cut a mountain
madara strength is also great and note this sharingan can't change between tomoes if it's three it will alwats be three whenever activated so need to correct this too
also nagumo himself is very strong since he ate a lot of monsters and very strong ones but to put it simple you only write things in words but your explain about the powers is shame to them all another thing
this is the way all the dc , marvel fanfic with mc got a lot of peoples powers
most of the powers will be either left unused or used once or two time then never used again
simply put you are just your regular fanfic author that will drop
cause things are not stable at all
your best will be 5 chapters before things get ruined
cause you refuse to accept that justice league not killing is not just pride of sh'it but to be also better example for people for justice is not killing bad
and also a lot of peiple have some reasons for what they do
i friendly advise start looking at big picture not limitting your imagination , second do think about future if you want to write , simple put should build the future from now not just looking at the present trying to come with idea to make together for the chapter you write this will cause you a lot of problems where you will get a lot of writer stop in the near future
i know you didn't plan the future in case you just start to squeeze ideas from your head when writing a chapter trying hard to make it related to the prevuous one
if you want to be an author simply suggest don't plan for the present or the short run
but for the future and long run and try think twice before writing
other than that grammar mistakes
and go with overused boring things like anti hero all fanfic about dc and marvel are anti hero and ruthless mc kill villains and worst a harem in modern wirld they are simply horny trying to imaginating mc banging multi womens of dc , marvel
simply they are not authors but writers and those are different
so either put your best and you will get rewarded for your effort
or make some half ass writing and will write two pitifull chapters and drop
this is from ly point of viewYOUNG JUSTICE:REBIRTH · C1
Jinn019: Thanks for the chapter 👍keep up the good work..I hope the chapter could increase from 1 though..☺️Reincarnated into DC with the Omni-Gaming System · C16
Kelly111: Wow so no actual progress or contentReincarnated into DC with the Omni-Gaming System · C16
blaiz: thanks of the chapterReincarnated into DC with the Omni-Gaming System · C14
Q101: Thanks for the chapterReincarnated into DC with the Omni-Gaming System · C14
Zyga: So if the avatar breaks through does the main body also break through and imma need a few time skipsReincarnated into DC with the Omni-Gaming System · C12
Greedward: You a tually used the pill for the avatar. Omg, you dumb.Reincarnated into DC with the Omni-Gaming System · C12
fearlessj2008: might as well get rid of the main body lol. for some reason i want to keep reading to see what happens but the avatar body is pointless at his age in my opinion. he could of trained and spent time with his family but instead he is just making his avatar strong and rich. what is he going to do adopt his main body and give him everything.Reincarnated into DC with the Omni-Gaming System · C12
Newsourpatch: He needs cultivate his bodyReincarnated into DC with the Omni-Gaming System · C12
MassDestruction: Is there any need for an avatar, he is not even a month old, do some time skip, grow up main body, how much can an avatar help him. He is wasting his time on an avatar, when he could cultivate his main body.Reincarnated into DC with the Omni-Gaming System · C12
MassDestruction: Also this is DC, not some business novel, where is training arc, where is fighting. Cultivation without any real martial arts or foundation weapon techniques will get him nowhere. Ditch that fu*king avatar and focus completely on main body.Reincarnated into DC with the Omni-Gaming System · C12
GreatWolf: Add rose to the harem incest wincestReincarnated into DC with the Omni-Gaming System · C2
undead_progenitor0: Hello 911 I wanted to report this book for robbing me of my power stonesGate to the Multiverse · C48
AdrianVeidt: The man of culture haa spoken!!!! 😂😂😂😂😂😂The Thunder Demon Straw Hat Luffy (A One Piece Fanfiction) · C12
CelsoMarques: Dude, Stop, Get HelpThe Thunder Demon Straw Hat Luffy (A One Piece Fanfiction) · C12
FvkYouBoy: Hahahhahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahaahhahahahahahahahhaha.....A New Hero in DC? · C10
DaoistPureEvil: Webnovel is curse.. all kinds of calamity descends to you if you are an author preventing you from posting a chap.. some author has there relatives killed, some got their computers or gadgets use to posts chapter ruined.. and now a wallet is missing.. tsk..tsk.. anyway.. thanks for the reminder..A New Hero in DC? · C10
FAN_OF_READING: He still didn't experiment with the otsutsuki DNA not to mention sealing and sage arts. He also doesn't have much fighting experience. He also didn't really begin with physical strentening. But THE most glaring fact is that he isn't being creative enough with his chackra from the intetnet age.Naruto: Road To Godhood · C12
Tiktark: In theory, might gais training should produce yang energy, and uchiha's should be more yin inclined, so the growth of chalra should be great, as i assume this version of narutoverse people build up chakra reserves rather than rely on what they are born withNaruto: Road To Godhood · C3
Espectador: Author, brain tumor is treatable, run urgently to the nearest hospital and look for treatment or you will regret it.
You made the stupid Uchihas nonsense simply so that you can follow the canon without the complaint of the other readers, right? That was stupid, just make a bad MC if you want to explain the reason for your lack of manipulation in the Uchiha case.
After all, would ***** men really blame a child for his father's death? Some could undoubtedly blame it, but not most as in your fanfic! And how did the protagonist want to become strong to prove that everyone is wrong and in fact he is not to blame for the death of his parents? That makes sense? Ok, he was a kid <6, but do me a favor! Spare me this ****!
Autor, tumor no cérebro é tratável, corra urgente ao hospital mais próximo e busque pelo tratamento ou você, se arrependerá.
Você, fez dos Uchihas idiotas sem sentido simplesmente para que tu possa seguir o cânon sem a reclamação dos demais leitores, certo? Isso foi idiota, simplesmente faça um MC mau se quer explicar o motivo da ausência de suas manipulações no caso Uchiha.
Afinal, homens adultos realmente culpariam uma criança pela morte do seu pai? Alguns sem dúvidas poderiam culpar, mas não a maioria como em tua fanfic! E como assim o protagonista queria se tornar forte para provar que todos estão errados e na verdade ele não é o culpado pela morte dos seus pais? Isso faz sentido? Ok, ele era uma criança <6, mas me faça um favor! Me poupe dessa merda!Naruto: Road To Godhood · C3
meowwe: The story starts when luffy is 16-17 in the original and in this he is 17 so what important event is skipped?The Thunder Demon Straw Hat Luffy (A One Piece Fanfiction) · C2
WeavingSpider: Okay thats def a rewrite.
Right now too much swearing.
(too often the word "f^ck", say other words too if you need.
Just use some fancy one like these: bollocks, arse, bell/bellend, berk, blighter, bugger, twat, tosser. There are many in this beautyfull language.
(I wonder how many will survive the censorship😅)
I know there exist fire with nearly over 100 ° celcius but wow its weak at the moment.
(Fire temeratur examples "info dump"
Candle flame – The hottest part of a candle flame burns at around 1400°C, while the average temperature is usually 1000°C.
Wood fire – A household wood fire burns at around 600°C. Temperature can change depending on the type of wood and its condition.
Bonfire – The temperature of a bonfire gradually heats up to around 600°C, but bonfires can reach 1000-1100°C.
Bunsen burner – A bunsen burner is adjustable, with safety flames measuring around 300°C. Fully open bunsen burners can reach 1500°C, with piercing blue and white flames visible.
Burning match – For such a small flame, a household match burns at around 600-800°C.
Propane torch – Combustion of propane and air is roughly 1900°C. A butane fire will have a similar temperature.)
Lets see what changes there are in this rewrite.
Keep the chapters coming👍😘The Crownless King · C3
Daoist_ValkoWolf: To be honest this story is developing too fast, there is no real world travel and exploration of the usual pokemon fanfic and it's been a constant repitition of data dumps and power ups to those data dumps.... although I like the premise of the real world style of pokemonpokemon ::::: Uncharted · C16
Rahit: Dude I am just a fan trying to write a fanfic.......cut me some slacks........between criticism is appreciated........just write in review section .......if u guys dont get my response or u want to input........😅😅😅😅😅pokemon ::::: Uncharted · C16
Brokedepressed: Batman: the dark knight
Midoriya: the emerald knightMy Hero Academia: A Hero's Will · C21
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