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Wow! Thank you author for the reply. :) I personally prefer slice-of-life type animes and sect/clan/kingdom building novels. So I am totally hooked to your story. I am already excited to see how the current plot will progress and his future disciples.

I felt I wrote an essay instead of a review

I like this novel. The MC is OP from the start but not too much. Not too reliant on the system. I mean the system is really helpful but he can still improve (cultivation, knowledge, techniques, etc) independently through training. The plot about accepting disciples and teaching them. And the low key character of the MC. However, I also dislike some things such as: > The disrespectful tone of speech and actions of his disciples to the MC. I mean, the MC is their master but they are calling him "you" in some dialogues and the way they act and talk with the MC is too informal and not like master-disciple. > A lot of characters think and act too stupid. Like the beast tamers and the Bai younger generations that are not afraid of MC's sect even though they are just ants in front of MC. > The characters of his disciples. Qing Yi was first introduced as a low-key, quite, shy, gentle, young girl but now she became a manipulative and abusive senior sister. Chu Yang had the guts to steal a precious item from his previous powerful sect but acts as a weak young girl in front of Qing Yi and her servant. > Compared to his relatively high cultivation, the MC has no knowledge about almost all stuff regarding cultivation. Not a talent he excels at besides about swords given by the system. No knowledge about formation, alchemy, no powerful techniques, etc. Given his cultivation and age, he should be considered a cultivation genius yet he feels like a young master from a powerful clan that only got his cultivation through pills and not from training. I hope the MC would remain in the sect and not travel outside of the kingdom. There are already a lot of novels that forces the MC to leave his sect to further improve his cultivation and search for breakthrough opportunities. I mean, he already have the system. He could just stay in the sect, teach his younger disciples while the older disciples roam the world to seek opportunities. He could just improve his sect, make it powerful and known throughout the continent so that more talented disciples would come to his door instead of searching them himself. I also hope the cultivation of each disciple are proportional to their talent and how long have they become disciple of MC and not making all disciples at around the same cultivation like other novels out there. I actually like the fact that Qing Yi didn't won the sect tournament. His disciples could be stronger than most but not the strongest. I don't know if this can still be considered a review but more of a message to the author hahaha But I honestly enjoy reading this novel. Thank you so much author for writing this awesome work. :)

This novel is one of my most favorite system novel together with I am the God of Games, so if you like the latter you'll like this novel too. What I really like about this novel is that the natives of the world and the players are interacting with each other as equal rather than the typical NPC-Player relationship. Each NPC has their own story, character, and personality that affects their favorability with every player. Players also has their own stories and personalities that makes this novel more interesting. The Goddess or the MC is also not stupid, and plans a lot and cautious when dealing with situations especially with other gods. Another thing I really like about this novel is that not all players can level up until the cap or max lvl possible. Only a small portion of the players can further increase their lvl per version update so that not all players are at the same lvl which is more realistic. The only unfortunate thing is that I don't think this novel will be picked up again but it has more raw chapters out there.

I really love this novel. I first read the few chapters because I was curious of the plot of the story. And now, after reading all 60 chapters, I can say that I am already hooked and wish I could read more. The plot is kinda unique since it is a clan management novel wherein the MC cannot solve everything and can only support his clan behind the scene. The time skip for me is the most interesting part since after each time skip, he could see the results of his intervention and the progress of his clan. It is also kinda realistic where some clan members die of battle and it hurts the MC since all the clan members are his descendants. It is still in the early part of the novel but I am excited to see the growth of his clan and his clan members.