Badges 8
Moments 4
3yr
Commented than not then
"Let's go, and remember I am helping you to return the favour and along the way will train and hunt to strengthen myself, we are friends and may even be closer than that, but I am sorry to tell you that I already have someone in my heart," he plainly states to her, believing that it is better to clear the air then play with her emotions.
Eye System
Fantasy · Adam_A
3yr
Commented u use strange choise of continuous word. u use the word 'however' if you say in the first part of line about how opposite or have something to consider about the word mean against second part of line mean. example 'eventhough he can sweep the floor however now he can't sweep the floor because his hand hurt'. like that.
The gap between LVLs is quite large and is difficult to be covered by skill, however, the gap between LVL 11 and LVL 90 is like heaven and earth.
Eye System
Fantasy · Adam_A
3yr
Commented what a weird writing.. it talked in third point of view and instantly changed into first person of view. so unstable and strange. for me it makes me uncomfortable.
Struggling to get up with blood seeping out of his nose he is kicked by Jaydan in the stomach sending me sliding down the corridor.
Eye System
Fantasy · Adam_A
DarkestVoid
Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God
Games · Lucky Old Cat