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If you like autocorrecting in your head while reading then you'll love this novel. In a single paragraph a persons gender can flip 3 or 4 times. Don't know if it is solely the translators fault or if it had a proofreader, either way someone is either lazy or a cretin.

What most of the other reviews say about this webnovel are true. However there is an issue with chapter structures. I think it might be obvious to anyone whop read this that the average chapter should be around 1500-2000chars, however they are split into 2 chapters instead; which I can only guess is for money making purposes. At the end of each chapter you are likely to find a conversation, or task, or activity or even a simple walk to somewhere is only half completed. The next chapter will provide the conclusion but then rinse and repeat when you get to the end. The webnovel doesn't start out like this, just starts nearer the point it becomes premium. Still, at least it doesn't have any of those stupid sex scenes from Dual Cultivation; you are quite literally paying for a half finished activity each time with that webnovel.