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Good novel. The writers grammar and storytelling is great. He/she adds proper description of the scene to paint the image , and the main protagonist is like-able. Good job.

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Yeah. The indian english sentence structure around those chapters bothered me so much.

MMORPG: Rise of The Dungeon Master.

Fantasy · Champsing

Inkybear

1yr

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I cant get past the poor english grammatical errors. I know the author is from india but it really bothers me. The lack of vocabulary and sentence structures make it feel like the characters are all 5 year olds. "Master, what master call Yunyun for?" Grave looked at Yunyun and speak. "Playing time is over."

MMORPG: Rise of The Dungeon Master.

Fantasy · Champsing

Inkybear

1yr

Commented

Bad grammar and poor spelling errors. Tsk tsk tsk

ch 16 Thoughts....

MMORPG: Rise of The Dungeon Master.

Fantasy · Champsing

Inkybear

1yr

Commented

Need to improve on the writing…. Having Alex thought, alex rolled, Alex came, Alex moved, Alex walked , used in almost every paragraph is horrendous considering he is the only character in the whole chapter.

ch 33 Dungeon Boss

MMORPG : Ancient WORLD

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Inkybear

1yr

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I hate it when authors/ translators use = equals, or + (plus) as a page/paragraph break. So dumb!!! Hearing equals equals equals 50 times in audio mode is the dumbest thing.

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