Awesome22

11d

Commented

"Sara told me she saw him kill three men in a bar with a pen." John had thought the story exaggerated, Sara messing with him. Rosie less so

Awesome22

1mth

Commented

did I miss something? They are still in a game no? I mean sure they are trapped in the game and they'll die for real if they die but it's still a game and the mobs and npcs are still bundles of code.

The same way that the Goblins were no longer just 'bundles of code' meant for me to farm for experience and get stronger... they were real and were more than capable of terrible things; things that warranted the deep loathing I - and many others - have for them.

Twin Moons of Eden: Online

Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu

Awesome22

2mth

Commented

Small advise. you don't get more readers by being annoying. The only thing this wall of text does is make me eye-roll and speedscroll past it. I've never felt less tempted to read something or donate money. And it also kills my desire to continue reading. Maybe try looking at it from the viewers perspective.

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My name is Ben Parker (The Knight's Multiverse X MCU)

Movies · Calm_Wanderer

Awesome22

2mth

Posted

The story is well written but we're now at chapter 91 and the MC is still 14 years old and still figuring out his powers (not because he's just getting more and more powers) we've until now only had 1 mention of the name Blacksteel and that was only a vision from the future so I highly doubt that it will ever get to this point. Until now the mc didn't have any real reason to use his powers except for maybe 2 scenes. I also didn't see even one scene where I had the feeling, that the mc had an average intelligence not to mention above average. also the sex scenes are terrible I recommend skipping them(did I mention 14 yo?). It would probably be a 2 Star if it weren't for the update stability and the good writing quality

Marvel's Black Steel

Movies · Ozonelayer

Awesome22

2mth

Replied to Awesome22

for me*

ch 20 Chapter 20: School life 3/6

Marvel's Black Steel

Movies · Ozonelayer

Awesome22

2mth

Commented

If you think that's how a person with a good heart acts I recommend therapy. Anyway that chapter really destroyed the story

ch 20 Chapter 20: School life 3/6

Marvel's Black Steel

Movies · Ozonelayer

Awesome22

2mth

Replied to SPS4

Another problem would be that you don't have any copyright of this story whether you wrote it or not since this is a fanfic the copyright is with the copyright owners of cyberpunk 2077. So I doubt that webnovel will care since it's still a story uploaded here which means traffic for this website

This book has been deleted.

Awesome22

7mth

Commented

Chapters keep getting shorter and shorter but atleast there are enough chapters for patreon. who writes fanfics to make money you literally could've written an original novel about a Zombie apocalypse and maybe even made money with it. well you'd have to write a lot more then you are now. well I'm not going to continue waiting a week for 5 sentences and I'm definitely not paying for a fanfic

ch 54 S2E54 - Hahaha... Unless?

The Walking Dead: Warlord

TV · Sorrest

Awesome22

7mth

Commented

アイデンティティ · Mikio Sakai

"Takami wo mezasu no sa a brave new world jounetsu no kissaki-"

A Saiyan Owl

Anime & Comics · ReyKale

Awesome22

7mth

Replied to NomeProvisorio

I see but don't most people look for the newest updated stories anyway? that's what I do anyway

ignore it

Reborn As Crowley In Supernatural

TV · NomeProvisorio

Awesome22

8mth

Commented

+1

4) OC

Naruto: Rise Of The Uzumaki

Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All

Awesome22

8mth

Commented

+1

- Main character becomes a Jinchuriki and we get to experience him trying to gain Chomeis trust and have a friendship similar to that of Kuruma and Naruto

Naruto: Rise Of The Uzumaki

Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All

Awesome22

9mth

Commented

[Welcome, Host!]

Earth's Strongest Shield

Movies · AgentMonke

Awesome22

9mth

Commented

I hope you know that what you're doing is not allowed. You don't have copyright for fanfiction even if you wrote it yourself. Well I doubt anyone will care but who knows

ch 0 5 Unlock the Rest of the Chapters for 5$

Young Sheldon: The Transmigration of Jake McCallister

TV · KonicZ

Awesome22

10mth

Commented

Coming out from the convenience store with a cigarette in his mouth, Ace was walking down the street thinking about his life when he came to a crossing. As the sign signaled for him to cross, he started to walk to the other side of the street, but when he reached the middle of the crossing, out of nowhere, a truck appeared, and without any time to react, all he felt was a massive force hitting his body and then pitch black.

Life of Ace Mikaelson (the originals fanfic

TV · LonerZN

Awesome22

10mth

Replied to Thumbiko_Mkhala

Why read a Fanfic about TDG if you don't even like the original? too much time?

Rebirth in Tales of Demons and Gods with System

Anime & Comics · Acnologia1234

Awesome22

10mth

Commented

"And they all perished, mwahahaha!" he added, erupting into disturbing laughter.

Marvel: Blacklight Reaper

Anime & Comics · PepengAgimat

Awesome22

10mth

Commented

isn't he supposed to be a vampire? or does that come later because right now he is even weaker than a normal human not to mention that he doesn't seem to like blood

ch 0 3 CHAPTER 02

TEEN WOLF: BLOODBORN

TV · Draul_TheOminous

Awesome22

10mth

Replied to JhakqueZyx6

Doesn't it get boring tho? even I find them extremely predictable and I didn't even read that many and finished none of them

After some time he was awakened by his alarm clock from his dream about how he was flying on a broom. Flying broom. That reminded him that he should make some flying artifact. Not broom of course, but something like star shuttles from a novel called Martial Peak could be useful. That was another novel Robert didn't finish.