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This seems like the usual version of The Little Mermaid, but it isn't. And with daily updates, how different it is will soon be evident. It's well-written and worth reading.

This is an interesting read. The writing style, particularly the vocabulary, can be improved but the premise and the plot is intriguing. The narrative also has a good creative flow.

This an interesting read. I like the pacing of the story. There's something exciting happening in every chapter. I also like how the chapters close with something to look forward to in the next one. Keep writing!

This is an interesting read. I like how the descriptions in the narrative flow, and how the scenes unfold. The plot is also quite intriguing.

This is a really intriguing read. I like the sudden twists and turns in the story. It leaves me curious and excited to see how things will unfold for Faith.

This is a well-written novel. I love how vivid the world-building is, and the artistic flow of the narrative. The character and plot setup is new to me, which makes it a really refreshing read. Each chapter makes you look forward to what's going to happen next. Great work!