Midhun94

3mth

Replied to ProudMonkey

Hey bro, I would love if you can make the gaming part a bit more structured, similar to the King's Avatar and apart from that you are doing a great job.

Midhun94

3mth

Posted

It's a really nice story, nice character development. I hope that the gaming part gets a bit more structure, I would suggest the writer to refer The King's Avatar on writing the gaming side of the story. But I am ready to accept all these little short comings hoping that the writing will get better as the story progresses. To sum it up it's a great work and I recommend everyone to read atleast 30 chapters before dropping this book.

Midhun94

3mth

Replied to Necsys_Coldheart

try Child of destiny novel

Zhang Yang’s nerves were high-strung, fully unleashing his athleticism to dodge the Black Panther King’s attacks again and again. At this moment, a character’s Movement Speed would obviously be unable to keep up with his reflexes. Only by distributing more Attributes Points on Dexterity would it be possible for him to utilize his advantage to his best ability.