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I decided to give this a go because of the (seems to be brain dead readers) that gave a review saying it gets better. I found it VERY hard to force my self beyond the first PARAGRAPH. I kept going, it got better, then chapter 6 came, to make sure I questions why im reading it, so don't bother reading this. (Not writing my own review since its not worth the time, now Authors can delete reviews). View More

Athrium: i honestly couldnt get past chapter 5, grammars pretty bad, MC acts like an idiotic frat boy 90% of the time, and during chapter 5 when he gets his wand he makes a magical vow to "to do evil", author changes base characters for no reason other than self gratification, this is just terrible, however, if you can slog through that ****, then go for it.

I am in Harry Potter!
2 hours ago

Athrium: i honestly couldnt get past chapter 5, grammars pretty bad, MC acts like an idiotic frat boy 90% of the time, and during chapter 5 when he gets his wand he makes a magical vow to "to do evil", author changes base characters for no reason other than self gratification, this is just terrible, however, if you can slog through that ****, then go for it.

I am in Harry Potter!
2 hours ago

tekite: Who is actually writing this? A 9 year old? Someone who has never been outside his house? Someone with an elementary level education? I am not sure what constitutes saying he would never do evil like lmao, are you serious? And he is shaking and crying because of olliviander??? Why even bother writing if you got someone old in the body of a young boy who has een tortured for his whole life, shaking and crying at the sight of someone just asking him a question... ahhh, lost hope on this novel. Such a joke

I am in Harry Potter! · C6
2 hours ago

NoghtDeNihil: Ummm....Ollivander gave Voldemort his wand and never gave any indication of regretting that decision in the books....soooo im kinda lost on the whole "Do no evil thing."

I am in Harry Potter! · C6
2 hours ago

Heretoc: Okay... So he takes a magical vow to not do any evil.


My question : Define Evil.







That's just horribly vague and in a sense impossible. Throwing garbage outside is also considered evil and murdering someone too. Both are on entirely different scale, but still considered evil, depending on who you ask. Police kills someone to protect a person. Is he now evil?


So that's just completely vague and left to numerous interpretations. Plus, who's evils are we talking about. What ollivander considers evil might not be wrong in the eyes of Orion. So once again, vague and full of loopholes. You probably didn't think this through and just went with the flow.

I am in Harry Potter! · C6
2 hours ago

Sabth3607: I guess u mean vines not wines

I am in Harry Potter! · C5
2 hours ago

InCYGNIficant: Also, you use too many/different ( " * / [ <-- just stick to one.

I am in Harry Potter! · C1
3 hours ago

InCYGNIficant: Almost unreadable. So many unnecessary CAPS and swear words. Is this a parody? If so then I get it.

I am in Harry Potter! · C1
3 hours ago
I feel a few issues with the novel:1. The MC personality did 180. Not the best idea since the people that started reading and enjoying it suddenly need to read about another MC (it was not from one chapter to the next but it was very fast anyway).
2. What happens now, end of novel? Does he drag his family around to other worlds? Does he go solo?(this one is best but again will not make sense with his personality change). View More
Nothing But Overpowered · C78
6 hours ago
The entire exam, 3 chapters of the same thing from other pov is really not as good as the start of the novel.
The BS testing his character, only his? Him "Saving everyone", the double the points just so he gets the record, too much cring, it is too much laying it on him being the "hero".
In the real world superman would not go well, if the "hero" type that always has the right answer, always making sure to treat everyone equally, even those that do not deserve it, it turns him into a cardboard personality.
Also him being depressed for failing, can you please make him not as stupid?? So much for super intelligence, seeing how people were in danger he could easily come up with the idea that it was a test (ffs he watched the tv show where the hero points were not advertised at first), even if he didnt think of it wondering what they would do rather than going to worst case "oh no i failed" sounds like a crybaby.
Even if they did kick him, his fcking superman, he doesn't need the school. View More
Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C16
6 hours ago
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Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C16
6 hours ago
This is getting out of hand, 3 pov for the same scene, 3 chapter for the same thing. I hope this is not a theme. View More
Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C16
7 hours ago
The last part was a bit too cringy, even for a "hero", mainly because it was too obvious it will happen and didn't feel natural. View More
Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C14
8 hours ago

Ryofu: Wait, "if his power level before training while his quirk was turned off was 10, then his power level after training with the weights and quirk turned on was also 10" isn't this wrong? It should be his power with his quirk ON before was 10 then after the training his power with his quirk OFF is 10 to show he became stronger?
Currently with the wording is seem he got weaker.

Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C12
8 hours ago
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Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C9
17 hours ago

Kali_Grapy: I don't know why but throughout this whole chapter I've been cringing. Well most of it is from the latter half. Still love your work though.

Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C8
17 hours ago
superman got nerfed for a fight scene. View More
Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C8
17 hours ago

WealthyRaccoon: Overly reliant on the source material to the point where the presence of the MC amounts to absolutely nothing, so much so that calling this fan fiction is a stretch so exaggerated it pulls your groin thrice over. Author took about 60 chapters to recount the 3rd book (at a bit under 100k words), while the original is a grand total of 107k. This alone isn't an indicator of poor quality but the fact that the only change we get is someone getting torn apart at the end, while the rest remains an almost shot for shot remake.

The MCs sole purpose at this point in time seems to be snarky comments and the occasional one liners, only making any form of contribution once it's relevance to the plot has been whittled down to a finite point.

Some HP fan fiction goes crazy with ideas like cultivation, dragon animagi and ancient families, but at least all of these stories have tried to inovate upon the source material, while this author is clearly far too comfortable wrapped up in the warm embrace of a pre gay Dumbledore JK Rowling.

Vastly over rated and provides almost nothing of substance. Just read the originals again, after all they'll tell the same story.

Prince of Shadows
19 hours ago
I hope the clone's pov ends at some point. I honestly don't track who is who, having them with different names I think was a bad idea, should have just used 1st clone, 2nd clone, etc.
Feels like multiple MCs (which I obviously dont like). View More
Reborn in Tales of Demons and Gods · C43
1 day ago
When all else (plot) fails there is always the good old "i want your women" plot. View More
The Burning Fiend · C90
1 day ago
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The path of the lustful demon · C169
1 day ago

LordFi7th: Shit what a waste of a good cualdron, author WTF, MC didn't get any blood and he also missed out on this girl. The concept of Bros before hoes does not apply in this novel 😭

The path of the lustful demon · C169
1 day ago
It seems to be a growing theme of the Mc being played by. Sure it will change but in the mean time it is too much too often View More
The path of the lustful demon · C167
2 days ago
I would like him to reveal the switch...or call child services at some point. View More
Dark Lord Dumbledore · C7
2 days ago
Site is going to sh*t. Can't downvote books, authors can now delete reviews they dont like, everyone rocking 4.6+ score, finding good novels is becoming harder. View More
Harry Potter: Library Of Heavens Magic Path(HIATUS) · C5
3 days ago

Lucky_OP_God: I totally agree. And Having an AI there is no way he should forget that.

Harry Potter: Library Of Heavens Magic Path(HIATUS) · C4
3 days ago

Trek: Memeory removal was stupid.

Harry Potter: Library Of Heavens Magic Path(HIATUS) · C4
3 days ago

Dragonia_101: U should not have done the memory removal thing

Harry Potter: Library Of Heavens Magic Path(HIATUS) · C4
3 days ago
Many wording mistakes. It's decent but obviously *******, not even proofreading. View More
Harry Potter: Library Of Heavens Magic Path(HIATUS) · C2
3 days ago
I detest this devil heart plot. It's pretty much the power that goes against you troop. View More
The path of the lustful demon · C148
4 days ago
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