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Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator · C137
3 hours ago
I would prefer if he did have some impact on the places he goes too. Small things, a cure for a girl with cancer, helping a boy that is alone. As is it feels like the story is not really doing anything, he will need to stop at some point, even for a time and live. View More
Gate to the Multiverse · C23
1 day ago
He wants to go into politics? I will keep reading hope that idea will be scraped, moments its clear thats the path I'm out. All that power and he is looking for fake power? View More
Jurassic Hero (Boku no Hero Academia Fanfic). · C125
4 days ago

Maurz: You're telling me he would rather go thru all this dumb **** instead of just use a wish to practically skip it? Ok then, onto the next novel.

Traversing the Anime Multiverse with a System · C4
4 days ago

BookCurator: Forgive me if there any mistakes in the review, I'm typing this out on my phone.

It appears that the author does not accept constructive criticism?

I read until chapter 20; while many others only read a few chapters before reviewing, so I hope you do not attack me for reading only '20' chapters when reviewing.

The grammar is subpar, to say the least, but the flow of the story is somewhat understandable and I can vaguely comprehend the general direction of the plot. Furthermore, the characters are like cut out cardboard figures with no real personality; it appears that they exist only to push the plot forward. Writing about a 'billion-year old master' is difficult, to say the least, when reading you somewhat expect for the MC to know of a limitless abundance of skills yet this not shown very well.

Are we supposed to expect for the MC to have only been sleeping for most of those years? To even try to believe that is extremely unrealistic and requires a very broad mind from the readers.

For a person who is writing to make money, the quality is honestly not high enough. I've read many other originals on the site which have far less publicity than this, yet those stories have a more defined plot and much better grammar/flow.

So, I'll try to give my review according to the general system of WN.

Writing Quality: 2.5, although the writing/grammar leaves something to be desired; it is somewhat understandable.

Stability Of Updates: 5, the updates have been punctual as far as I can see. (Although I'm not sure if the quality has dropped over time as I stopped at C20.)

Character Design: This is honestly a 1-1.5 for me, the idea of a 'billion-year-old' master is extremely badly portrayed. My personal feedback is this: Don't bite off more than you can chew, for your type of novel, the MC being designed as a legendary 50-100-year-old genius that once reached the peak would have been much better. Why? This leaves room for error, as it is extremely unbelievable for a billion-year-old monster to know such limited information. Furthermore, the way the MC acts is far too unbefitting of someone that ancient. But if the MC was only 50-100 years old which is still considered an elder in human terms, it allows us to actually have leeway in our mind to believe that the MC is human and can make mistakes; even though he was at the VERY PEAK of the ENTIRE universe in his last life. The side characters that I've seen up to C20 are also extremely plain, they exist solely for the readers to have a 'funny' and 'unreasonable' read when one is drunk and not thinking straight. This is fine for some, but not for me.

Story Development: As I've said before, extremely plain where the chapters are spewed out only to be 'there' yet with no essential plot or meaning. 2-2.5.

World Background: Although it's not fantastic, there is still a vague world I can picture while reading up to C20. - 2/5

Overall, this novel was extremely dull and boring to me which disappointed me greatly due to the number of 5-star-reviews, which made me feel a need to review this novel myself so as to balance it out. This novel's idea even though not crafted very well may appeal to some but not me. (I may have an higher expectation than your average reader which could be because I've been spoiled from the number of good novels — which naturally also includes originals, where the grammar is much better than this story and they also have very well-thought-out plot but have a lower rating/less popularity than this story.

This was just my 2 cents on this novel. (I primarily created this since the large number of 5-star reviews did not match the content I expected)

Unsealing: Omnipotent Father
4 days ago

Yztif: A lot of trouble for being weak. If MC survive this calamity, he should shut his clan down(not allow anybody in or out of the clan), and focus mainly on how to break the seal to get stronger. It just too damn tiring to read so much struggle for survival. MC knows he is weak, after this ordeal, he should set up the formation then shut the whole clan from outside world, and focus mainly in getting strong

Unsealing: Omnipotent Father · C78
4 days ago

Avrin13: This story seems to be going down the drain. Nobody likes to read chapters about the mc getting thrashed, especially when there is 5 of them in a row. If this charged SS it would die.

Unsealing: Omnipotent Father · C77
4 days ago

TheInnocentGuy: Sorry!
Gonna dropped this novel!
Stupidity level went insane.
This whole tournament chapter has made this novel into MC chasing one.
Thought I found a gem but total
disappointment.
If he is billion years old guy and has that much knowledge than why the **** he takes his disciples in that tournament if he can provide all things to his disciples easily.

Unsealing: Omnipotent Father · C77
4 days ago
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Unsealing: Omnipotent Father · C7
5 days ago

matt1: Dude isn't kneeling a bit too much for someone who can't even be com0ared by so called powerful...and you make him kneel cause he thinks his life is very valuable and didn't he commit suicide? I know it's important but is that really how a supreme sovereign should react? Really eerie

Unsealing: Omnipotent Father · C2
5 days ago

Mortifer: What a disappointment. The aftermath and the reaction chapters are the best part of an OP MC story. Which is crap if you just erase the memories. The scene becomes pointless.

The Immortal Mutant Teen · C38
5 days ago
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Reincarnated as Tony Stark with a Skill · C80
1 week ago
That pokemon addition mid chapter, great way to break the reading experience View More
Reincarnated as Tony Stark with a Skill · C80
1 week ago
My expectations are reduced for this novel. It started well but at this point it just seems like the "imagine what I would do if i had unlimited powers" but you are not getting to the story.
He told the food service telepathically to enter the room but made it seem like he actually said it outloud, is that a bad joke? Reading this make him look stupid, either open your mouth and say it or dont bother make her believe you did, you either dont care or you do and lazy?
regardless, story should start. up to here is basically reading a long system logs on what powers he got. View More
Gate to the Multiverse · C10
1 week ago
Sooooo, he got powers and tried to see if they work for 12 hours ....without actually using them? He must feel as stupid as he looks since it took him 2 seconds to fly while actually using those powers. View More
Gate to the Multiverse · C6
1 week ago
wow, this new story line...idk. "trucks of destiny"? Ill be honest this sounds so rushed and bad. View More
Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C44
1 week ago
A sane one hopefully. View More

RokuX: Mc needs a girl i am just saying

Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C43
1 week ago
The plot just went 0-90 and boring at the same time. View More
Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C30
1 week ago
wtf was this bs. This talk was just complete made up bs. View More
Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C26
1 week ago
God damn, MC took stupid pill, or kid pill. View More
Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C25
1 week ago
Honestly, good opinion of the MC reduced in the past 2 chapters, not because of robberies but because he acts like less than a dumb kid since he didn't see this coming and acts surprised.
He really acting stupid here. 1. He didn't consider things and kept one save from before any robbery.
2. They will still investigate, they will just consider his last robbery as the last robbery and check those days. If he somehow manages to rob but keep it out of his memory it would make sense otherwise his plans is just plane stupid. View More
Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C24
1 week ago
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Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C24
1 week ago

Shiakuma: MC has the save and load ability just remember the winning numbers of the lottery and load a day back.
Fastest money ever

Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C21
1 week ago
He is looking to make money from drugs? meh, no interested in reading this further, good luck. View More
Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C8
1 week ago
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Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C1
1 week ago

Ellimist: This is so cringe worthy. Ron Weasley going to a party for the purebloods? That's just weird. Meh I'll try to read the rest, and hopefully it won't actually make me cringe like I think it would

Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C8
1 week ago
I hope he called the second Tony All-Black (allfather, get it?) View More
Reincarnated as Tony Stark with a Skill · C38
1 week ago
As first chapters go this one is good at keeping my expectations very low, hopefully it only goes up from here. View More
Reincarnated as Tony Stark with a Skill · C1
1 week ago
What a huge disappointment after such a long and good story, I was always impressed how well the characters were written, very close to the original, if a mistake was made or will be made it could be ignored, plot hole or plot armor but here we see something that would not happen, Superman would not have behaved that way, and all just to make some random new enemy. Disappointing. View More
Super Man in marvel Universe · C25
1 week ago

DragoonAdurna: I actually agree superman didn't even want to kill zod there is no way he would have abandoned a creature that would most likely die if it separated from him. It is your story though but I can tell you now a lot of people will stop reading if you change fundamental things about Clark Kent Superman I hope you change this part but if you don't I will still read pretty good story except this

Super Man in marvel Universe · C25
1 week ago
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