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This small forest arc didn't really improve the novel. MC turned from decisive with direction in life to a...lead by the nose brainless MC. The pregnancy was even worse in my opinion.
Not a bad novel but the last few chapters killed whatever need I had to read this further, good luck. View More
The Hedonist Sword God · C82
2 days ago
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The Hedonist Sword God · C81
2 days ago

ErozothDraeor: he wanted a system friend and he called her heavenly system as the NAME? couldn't he call he a proper name?

Marvel: Dragon God of Speed · C1
4 days ago
Honestly, when he was thinking about going into the ring to show the fighter whats what I cringed, it reminded me of those anime MCs that are little fighters and decide to interrupt some competition or protect some girl (which is far stronger than him) for Justice! View More
Immaculate Spirit · C173
4 days ago
This chapter was a disappointment for me. 1. Normal vampires don't have covens, a pair or even 3 and that's rare.
2. There is no logical way that his existent caused a coven or multiple show up in that place, saying "butterfly effect" is a poor excuse, you can say it but its not believable. You just made this up for plot and it feels.
3. Unless the city is particularly big and in south America covens don't intrude on others territory. Even the movie showed a situation that when the visitors found the area is "claimed" they left.
4. The MC got stabbed again, all that power yet the brain doesn't work.

All this small facts come from the book, I can only assume you didn't read the books, you ignored the facts or just don't care.
Point is, for someone that's not familiar with the original it seems ok (and someone that likes their MC strong but incompetent).
With the quality of your writing a bit of effort to maintain the original would go a long way.
From my experience those fanfics that are usually considered great is when they maintained a logical progress of the story compared to the original, even if this changed.
Example: The 2-3 vampires visited just like they did in the book\movie (James and Crazy, 3rd being dead already), when they noticed the Lycan they reported it to others and this caused more vampires to come. In your case the new vampires showed up (that did not in the original) because "butterfly effect" which translates to because I feel like it.
I'm not complaining here, overall the chapter is decent, just trying to help. View More
A New Wolf in Twilight · C30
5 days ago
hmmm...this plot was bad. He wouldn't kill someone innocent for something like that and there was nothing to indicate the he changed into full cultivator psycho. View More
The Irregular In ATG · C33
1 week ago
His wisdom is to low to be a good mc. View More
The Hedonist Sword God · C75
1 week ago

Kalafijor: I dont want this weird woman in harem

The Hedonist Sword God · C75
1 week ago

Dreamheart_Dragon: I totally agree. They would only ask him to leave if he was being a jerk

Immaculate Spirit · C170
1 week ago

Okedra: Nope nope nope as a proud former member of the military they would not act like a gang! They would be very polite until acted upon. Especially with a young teenager!!!

Immaculate Spirit · C170
1 week ago
I feel the grammar is getting a bit worse each chapter. View More
Immaculate Spirit · C168
1 week ago

fearlessj2008: this chapter should have been before the other but not a bad chapter.

The Hedonist Sword God · C71
1 week ago
Bad performance. View More
The Hedonist Sword God · C70
1 week ago
Me too, I hope it was not an excuse to hold them back. "didn't have time". View More

ShallowNoMoe: After two years I wonder how much stronger they have become.

Thanks for the chapter.

A Warrior's Path · C273
1 week ago

ShallowNoMoe: After two years I wonder how much stronger they have become.

Thanks for the chapter.

A Warrior's Path · C273
1 week ago
I didn't think this is still going, keep at it. View More
Marvel: Dragon God of Speed · C6
1 week ago
this dragged a lot View More
The Hedonist Sword God · C68
1 week ago

JaineX07: The cooking thing ain't funny specifically if the girls are staying, they should be told their errors so they get better

The Hedonist Sword God · C67
2 weeks ago

Malcolm_Massey: Stop making the MC act like a pussy.... It's a good book otherwise.

The Hedonist Sword God · C67
2 weeks ago
he needs to get off his "man" ass and learn how to cook himself. View More
The Hedonist Sword God · C67
2 weeks ago
is over the top, it would have been better if he didnt user a "known" figure (position) as it feels to fake. View More
Immaculate Spirit · C164
2 weeks ago
Agreed, he also makes this kid overly stupid. Having access to higher education and being exposed to certain life styles does make kids more aware, in this case its completely ignored just to make the MC "Look he helped the president's son, how awesome" View More

JamesMVP23: Bro can u hurry up with this arc and get like be a movie star and singer and now the chapters are way shorter now to and longer to release as well

Immaculate Spirit · C162
2 weeks ago

JamesMVP23: Bro can u hurry up with this arc and get like be a movie star and singer and now the chapters are way shorter now to and longer to release as well

Immaculate Spirit · C162
2 weeks ago
So it ends. View More
Scholar's Advanced Technological System · C128
2 weeks ago
tldr: I think this plot is full of holes (previous chapters included) and overall bad with how cliche\predictable it is.
Can't say I like this, wait, honestly I would have rather if FH actually died and we got a new MC. I would not have liked it but at least its some extreme new things rarely seen, this plot? seen it, many times. The power\part of the MC that has its own personality (plus the 2 demons, will they want their own body one day?),now we just need to wait to find out "WOW, who knew that getting rid of the devil heart will make me stronger than with it?" what are the chances???
Didn't FH loose part of his soul at some point? (im possibly mixing novels here), now the devil heart, the two demons, we should call him Legion instead. View More
The path of the lustful demon · C267
2 weeks ago
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The path of the lustful demon · C266
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The path of the lustful demon · C265
2 weeks ago

House: I still don't get why he is so weak suddenly sure his "cultivation" is sealed but does he not have and OP Soul and a dragon body? Devil hard, his sis all out attack,... So why is it so hard for him?

The path of the lustful demon · C265
2 weeks ago
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