KingGeorg
Lv 5- Joined Jun 2018
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I like witches and I’m the king of my castle.
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Out of Space · C381
xxAlter: The 3rd option is good, but would you guys mind it?
Otherworld Adventure · C166
Power Up, Artist Yang! · C167
Power Up, Artist Yang! · C167
Power Up, Artist Yang! · C167
Power Up, Artist Yang! · C167
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Power Up, Artist Yang! · C163
xxAlter: I'll keep those suggestions in mind!
If others don't mind for filler chapters...I've actually written plenty chapters in the side-charas perspectives, but I've been holding out on them just to keep my pacing consistent...not to mention some of those 'filler' chapters tend to go for a couple of chaps...why? I'm not sure myself lol xDOtherworld Adventure
Otherworld Adventure · C154
Otherworld Adventure · C152
Watts: Cecil's real mom and foster mom will for sure end up best friends lol
Otherworld Adventure · C151
Otherworld Adventure · C149
1) You like transmigration stories with the proven concept of a not weak Mc having an adventure in another world, that you’ve read a thousand times but still can’t get enough off..(like myself)
2) You DON‘T want your Mc to be a teenager in heat yet having some girls around him only only one true future wife.
3) Potentially some kingdom building in the later chapters.
4)Not to many grammar or spelling errors per chapter. To my knowledge you will spot some here or there but they aren’t that often. Make sure you mark them and inform the author, because he earned it writing for free for us.
And here some points I’d like to point out that I think the author could improve.
1) Stop using Japanese terminology in an English story. This is sloppy writing in my opinion and also asks for trouble when your reader isn’t familiar with it.
2) Over use of something-cum-something. I know this isn’t necessarily wrong but to my knowledge so far this is sparely used . „cum“ is Latin for with and hence you will find this normally with special terminology like „summa cum laude“. So this begs the question why not simply using with instead of cum and secondly it seems to me unnecessary in most cases. If you are in a bar or caffe you don’t need to know that they also have a dance floor ... caffe-cum- dance floor or better a caffe with dance floor.
3) Some characters could have more depth to them, especially those around the Mc. But I’m aware that this is easier said than done, and also would require even more time in an good paced story. I only want to note that it seems obvious that besides the main protagonists not much to the inner or outer conflicts of his closest allies is actually known. It’s a bit like scratching on the su***ce and I think it’s lost potential... potentially ;) View More
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Otherworld Adventure · C145
xxAlter: Thanks for the advice! I've been wanting to change the release time so I guess I'll experiment a little during next week's releases. If u don't mind me asking, what time do u think would be a good time?
Otherworld Adventure · C143
Otherworld Adventure · C142
Watts: most likely will casually take out a rank ss monster with just his legs lol
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Otherworld Adventure · C90
xxAlter: Ohh this sounds great! Thanks!
Otherworld Adventure · C87
Dannymysteryman: At least now we know the name to put on the gravestone
Otherworld Adventure · C76
attack_the_turnip: As if her wont end up carrying everything for the rest of their lives.
Otherworld Adventure · C56
