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So far the pacing is bad. You have barely introduced the mc and already a time skip. The seems generic because you haven't spent the time to properly scow his personality and characteristics through his training and you haven't explained anything about his powers that he is supposed to be training. View More
Half Saiyan in Tales of Demons and Gods · C3
1 week ago
It just feels like way to many over used plot lines kill the mom so he doesn't have anything holding him back. And why would he just kill his blood companion jus Because he didn't feel it was worth having any more. It could have made it where it could eat other beasts blood essence to evolve or mutate View More

Eveofchaos: No, it's an original story.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C70
2 weeks ago
This is a translation isn't it? No one wanted the mother to die. And you didn't listen to the fans. You said that everything was pretty much determined witch is usually a code word for translation. View More
Birth of the Demonic Sword · C70
2 weeks ago
How are you going to fill all the plot holes... Viper a master of disguise can't tell the mc is a girl... When the mc need to use the restroom does she go to the men's room? How will she hide when she hits puberty ? When she gets in a fight her clothes are still damaged by her opponents gift. View More
NoGift · C31
3 weeks ago
How long does it take to get New chapters usually??? View More
Dark Star Survivor · C0
1 month ago
I'm going to place my complaints. This story seems to have stalled on the actual story. Most of original companions aren't getting enough development anymore he seems to spend more time out of vr then he does in. It seems you are building drama because you don't truly understand how to do a proper VR novel. You were doing great originally but now you have to many main characters. Now most off the story seems to be irl or him talking to each companion. I would appreciate it if you could get back to the main story ark please View More
Spending My Retirement In A Game · C251
1 month ago
I think you are over dramatizing his life. I don't understand why.... This is really starting to feel like some one is bringing up there own past at the expense of the story View More
Spending My Retirement In A Game · C250
1 month ago

Mimbdy2: ... What Eisen and Komer didn't notice were the two pairs of eyes following them and learning the true art of magic. "Hey Fred, are you thinking what I'm thinking?" "Of course, George! We need to get back to Hogwarts and make some magic artifacts!"

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C231
2 months ago
The reason I capitalized rabbit is because it's a over use trope. I would like to see something new like a roze wolf, or a crab spider, or something like watermelon pig. I don't know I just hop it won't something overused View More

Vampfan1: Harpy?

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C221
2 months ago
Or maybe what does the fox say?? LOL View More
Spending My Retirement In A Game · C221
2 months ago
The next one might be a bird, fish, or a RABBIT type? View More
Spending My Retirement In A Game · C221
2 months ago
They are allies. This would be a nighmare if grudges formed. Would you still be allies with a country who allowed your recruits to fight over a table? Wouldn't you be worried about them stealing whatever resources they thought were valuable? View More

klostrez: Wrong the fight is with another nation soldier not inter fighting with the same nationality (the rules only for the same country, no profit to be made from the same country especialy no unity)

The Favored Son of Heaven · C43
3 months ago
How is fighting over a table to eat at going to build up team work when u are fighting other people in the military? Wouldn't that cause grudges to form? How would they work together if they get deployed? not only will the have to look out for the enemies the would have to watch there own back because they might get backstabbed by there View More

Am3lia: I understand what your saying but there is a limitation as to what can be accomplished in vr. As you have noticed they don’t do their basic training in the vr it’s rl. Some things must be done in rl. Strengthening your body, making friends, building relationships, some skills, etc. Now VR is an excellent tool for many things. This military doesn’t seem to be concerned with the medical costs, the other thing is they need to cull the soldiers. So those that get beaten and get broken bones do you think they will be kept?not without extenuating reasons.
in reference to your comment about how to use VR for small infiltration exercises. Don’t forget these are brand new recruits. Also these recruits are army, last to go in not 1st, they are not special forces.
The other thing what sparked the discussion was the fight in the cafeteria. Going by your suggestion. You would halt angry men throwing punches at each other for them to put helmets on to fight in VR. Have you ever tried to stop 2 men from fighting before? And this would be 2 squads fighting. What I’m trying to say is that it is unrealistic to have all fights be VR. Also War is not in VR it is IRL.
I understand your concerns about the medical costs but the author hasn’t even brought it up. There are many ways to keep the costs down. Don’t think in terms of our world, our medication costs are greatly overpriced.
But this is all an unknown for this novel right now.

The Favored Son of Heaven · C43
3 months ago
I kinda agree with your statement however if they have a VR system that is just like there irl then it would be more cost effective to fight in vr. The military wouldn't want to waist medicine for no reason and would rather use it in serious situations such as a battle with a foreign threat. Most of the time the medicine is extremely expensive. Using VR to it's fullest would allow full on war situations and it would allow for small infiltration exercises. View More

Am3lia: I also agree w/ Kyroslagen. The other thing is in these types of novels they use these types of brawls as team building activities. If the whole group doesn’t fight together to their fullest they will get punished. Now this rule hasn’t been established here yet. But since Du Peng took out the leader and never stopped the group I would assume these are the rules there. They would have been in trouble if they let their squad mate be picked on and not accepted the challenge. Since they go by the rules of survival of the fittest. I also assume they have ways through medical or cultivation or pills to restore their injuries and bones without it taking much time.
Remember irl we don’t cultivate so it’s not a fair comparison. Your comparing apples and oranges there. But I do completely agree in both cases the military does own them.

The Favored Son of Heaven · C43
3 months ago
When I say irl I'm talking about irl in story compared when he uses VR. When the author makes extremely bad plot choices because he wants to force a sub plot it ruins story emersion. View More

10000DaoOfPotatos: Guess what


This story isn't IRL

The Favored Son of Heaven · C43
3 months ago
Is this dead? the story was awesome. View More
Doomed Dungeon · C10
3 months ago

N0xiety: Isn't his father like 2 realms higher than him? Yet mc can create more powerful strikes only using a tiny ammount of energy? This isn't scientific at all. What is even the point of having more energy and higher cultivation realms then? Are you telling me that if mc had rank 9 modified spirit arts then he would be able to strike harder than spirit saints or something? I mean by logic if he can strike harder than a spirit lord just with modified rank 5 arts, then rank 9 would pretty much make him jump like 5 realms or something? How is this even a thing? Too op and nonsensical. How does he even produce power from nothing? Spirit arts by logic should only help with channeling his power no? It does not produce the power itself right? So how can just 5% of a Spirit grandmasters power strike harder than a spirit lords? That's like saying a child can strike harder than an ad*lt if the child has better technique. Yet we all know that the child would never be able to strike harder than an ad*lt even with the best technique in the world because he just doesn't have the necessary power backing the technique! Adult can still punch harder than the child even without a tecnique...

Spirit Cultivation · C33
3 months ago
The part where they allow fighting in the military is BS. the military treat it's soldiers as property. If you broke a soldiers arm or leg in service they would be put in jail for breaking government property I would understand if the fighting was done in VR but not in irl View More
The Favored Son of Heaven · C43
3 months ago

FallenDreamer: Thanks for the chapter.

Did Eisen forget he got his first ten or so levels without fighting even once?

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C69
4 months ago

cantbelieveit: I'm just hoping the champions are the 5 originals (makes sense if each of the 5 metallic dragons chooses a champion. Plus you have one dragon that likes nature, one dragon that likes magic, and this Steele dragon.... which makes me think of combat original tee hee)

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C69
4 months ago

DaoistMasterJohn: Did someone fart into Eisen's brain?! Did he really ask "Do monsters also only level up through combat, like us (people)?"?!?
Funny thing he should ask... considering he was leveling up beforehand through crafting alone and fought for the first time with level 14 if I remember correctly.
Especially he should know that there are other ways to gain experience points / levels beside combat, at least for people.

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C69
4 months ago

DragonSlayer01: Welcome to the club

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C34
4 months ago
If you got a new power wouldn't you try to learn how to use it? Wouldn't you try to experiment to see the extent of it's usefulness? View More

Amrokq: You can't expect every MC to be smart. Plus she transitioned from a peaceful environment to a deadly on so her survival skill have yet to developed. JUST. HAVE. PATIENCE.

Doomsday Wonderland · C36
4 months ago
Why does the revolution army have to point out the obvious. Why would the mc go to some random company and get work when he could work for his family and have some protection? The MC's family wouldn't actively try to suppress him. View More
Legend of the Mythological Genes · C88
4 months ago
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Legend of the Mythological Genes · C88
4 months ago

KentLuCas: He better tame that damn Demon as compensation.

Lord of the Magical Beasts · C31
5 months ago
What a rip-off View More
The Legendary Mechanic · C329
5 months ago
It's blatantly stupid that his design philosophy would reject hacking / programming. Programming is like tracking a kid how to behave and how to act. Hacking is like bad adults corrupting kids or teching them how to deal with bullies. So how is that against his design philosophy? View More
The Mech Touch · C472
6 months ago
I'm extremely annoyed he left the system and lucky back at his base. This is a mech system novel. It's extremely stupid to remove the system that allows him to stand out. Now he is just a normal designer. Now he won't be able to get power ups as easy and it going to slow his progress down a lot. Bad story decision View More
The Mech Touch · C407
7 months ago

ABitterDay: Rating it low since there really is not much development tbh and the ratings seem to be inflated.

17 chapters in and there is one small paragraph talking about making buttons. every other chapter here was him fucking every single woman he has come across. maybe you should change the description and title of the novel. perfectly fine with ***** scenes since i am actually reading the harem sect novel but when almost the entire novel is filled with *** there is really nothing much to read....

Merchant Emperor
7 months ago
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