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But FINALLY! It's complete! It took so much practice I thought I was going to go mad, but it's finally in place! This thing has been such a pain in the thorax to put together, it better live up to the effort that I put into it! Lousy magic. Why can't I just wave my antennae around and clack my mandibles a few times, eh?

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

Fantasy 路 RinoZ

PotatoTrain
Replied to jfunk200
it's truly amazing how cynical and hypocritical people can be from a "onlooker" (readers) perspective. If the below comments put in even 2 seconds to imagine being Morellia they'd agree with your point. but unfortunately as readers with access to all information available and a very well written storyline hyping us up on the side of the colony, of course it's a biased decision.

Myrrin tried to catch hold of her friend, but she evaded her grasp and slipped back amongst the rows of tents and out of sight. The young woman stared for a moment, a worried expression written on her face, but turned back to her duties after a moment. Morrelia was tough as nails forged from larger, tougher nails. Whatever was bothering her, she could handle it.

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

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PotatoTrain
Replied to SapphireMidnight
I agree with this. also don't forget that their civilization is still at mideval era ish and not an advanced information society we live in. witch hunts, religion & supersticions are prevailant

But it didn't change what they were, fundamentally. When the cataclysm occurred, the old Legion records showed that these supposedly 'peaceful' creatures had rallied behind the Ancients and helped lay waste to the surface. The Legion never forgot and never forgave. For them, the war had never ended.

Chrysalis

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PotatoTrain
Replied to Dracolupus
but then you also have sentient beings who were forced to be registered as "monsters" by the dungeon (the pet crafter people) and they were originally just a regular race like humans and dwarves

"They are monsters, born from mana. They are the children of the Dungeon and it is that which they serve. I'm surprised that I would need to explain this to you, of all people."

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

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Commented
Titus will battle with the sealed demon : really bitch?
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The Commander's hand gripped tight around the handle of his axe for a moment before he relaxed again. The spirit trapped within raged without end but he crushed it with his will after a brief struggle. Whenever he grew frustrated, angry or tired, the foul beast would attempt to break him. Laughable.

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

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PotatoTrain
Commented
replace the horse with an ant 馃憣
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"I am prepared to die for the Colony!" he said.

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

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PotatoTrain
Replied to StealthyElephant
ant queen uses thwacks, Enid uses WHAMS

Both the audience and Beyn were stunned as he stumbled to the side and fell to the ground. After he gathered his senses, he turned to see Enid storming towards him from the council building.

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

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"TAKE HEART AND PREPARE YOURSELVES, MY PEOPLE! WE ARE PREPARING TO LAUNCH A GREAT CRUSADE INTO THE DUNGEON! WE WILL FIGHT ALONGSIDE THE COLONY AND ENSURE OUR FUTURE TOGETHER WITH OUR OWN HANDS! GATHER TOGETHER ALL WHO ARE WILLING! ONLY TOGETHER CAN WE -"

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Beyn throwing his sermon down on us through the 4th wall -- PRAISE THE COLONY!
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"REMEMBER EACH AND EVERY ONE OF YOU!" He thrust forward an accusatory finger. "THE PEACE YOU EXPERIENCE NOW, A PEACE THAT THE COLONY FOUGHT AND DIED TO ACHIEVE, IS FALSE! EVEN NOW THE WAR CONTINUES BENEATH OUR FEET!"

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

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PotatoTrain
Replied to StealthyElephant
If beyn had a choice in the name it would be something like Antslave or Antworshippers

"WITH OUR NEW CLASS, THE ANTMANCER, GRANTED TO US ON THIS VERY DAY, WE SHALL BE ABLE TO STAND SHOULDER TO SHOULDER WITH OUR ANT SAVIOURS AND REPAY OUR DEBTS!"

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"THE TIME HAS COME!" he orated, "TO RISE! TO STEP FORWARD AND BE COUNTED! OUR SAVIOURS, THE COLONY, BATTLE FOR THEIR VERY SURVIVAL BENEATH THE GROUND. THEY SAVED OUR LIVES, REBUILT OUR HOPES AND DREAMS AND GAVE HOPE TO THOSE WHO HAD NONE!"

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

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Replied to PotatoTrain
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"We must prepare," Beyn whispered, "for the crusade."

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

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Replied to Grunty_Lover
I mean, keyword being "were" it's not like they're God's anymore... for now.

That being said, Krune's Mental Energy Perception was not affected at all! Until now, the only thing Krune found that could hinder his Mental Energy was Godly Energy. Of course, there was also Luvile and Harold's powers, but those two were previous gods, so Krune didn't count them. At the moment, Krune's Mental Energy Range was still able to see everything over a hundred kilometers of distance!

Is that a Wisp?

Is that a Wisp?

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Replied to HuskyGorila
Death is both the greatest sin and greatest glory to the colony, only when you are alive can you contribute to the colony, but in death you can protect the colony.

He was frozen. He felt as if he'd been struck by a bolt of lightning. His nerves wouldn't respond, they were jammed. He couldn't even think about wanting to think. So immobile was he, no breath moved in his body, and he slowly began to turn red.

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

Fantasy 路 RinoZ

PotatoTrain
Replied to FearlessCloud01
woah bro, I think just keeping the regular robes & ant hats is fine. . . that got dark real quick 馃槹

Inside, a circle of the devoted were already gathered, wearing their ropes and attached antennae of glory. As one, they turned to the door and when they saw who had arrived, faces lit up with joy. Heart soaring, the priest rushed forward to greet his people. There was no need for words between them. These were the people who had experienced the deeper truth of the Colony and its majesty. Within the nest, they had experienced much together, and had their eyes opened even further (something he had not thought possible). These were the people whose feet were most firm upon the path.

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

Fantasy 路 RinoZ

PotatoTrain
Commented
wearing their ropes? or robes? 馃槄 this is a church guys, not a BDSM ant club

Inside, a circle of the devoted were already gathered, wearing their ropes and attached antennae of glory. As one, they turned to the door and when they saw who had arrived, faces lit up with joy. Heart soaring, the priest rushed forward to greet his people. There was no need for words between them. These were the people who had experienced the deeper truth of the Colony and its majesty. Within the nest, they had experienced much together, and had their eyes opened even further (something he had not thought possible). These were the people whose feet were most firm upon the path.

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

Fantasy 路 RinoZ

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