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2d

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The writing is subpar and mediocre. The story and the worldbuilding is first class though.

The bus ride was long, but Fred didn't mind. It was his escape from the harsh realities of life. He'd managed to finish the entire book in just one day, a testament to his love for the series. As he flipped the pages, he couldn't help but marvel at J.K. Rowling's storytelling, which had a way of making him forget about his own struggles.

Winds Of Magic In Hogwarts

Book&Literature · KuroWashi1903

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9d

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It's the second movie lol. This is such a silly author fail.

So Padfoot laid down on the carpet and started watching the movie Star Wars: The Empire Strikes Back. Halfway through the movie, he started getting really into it. During the ending scenes, he was anticipating what was going to happen when the movie paused. He barked.

Harry Potter and The Force of Magic

Book&Literature · Drinnor

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9d

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4.8 / 5 I like this story only thing I disagree is harry becoming a r4p!st.... That is just disgusting and can't be explained at all. Anyway after this happened once he did not do it again and the story continued to improve. Overall a great story but this one thing nearly ruined it for me.

The Real Harry Potter

Book&Literature · Infinity_Weaver

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9d

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I have a deep problem with thinking that the "real" Harry Potter is a rapist who misstreats his own allies (Dobby). He acts even worse than Voldemort. Especially since this change occured in 1 day. From weak, submissive gullible boy to psycho rapist.

ch 11 Deadly Negotiations

The Real Harry Potter

Book&Literature · Infinity_Weaver

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9d

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I read so many fics that I can't help myself thinking: "He probably cleared the Potter vault anyway so it's his own money". Fics have really ruined Dumbledore for me... can't see him as anything but an evil manipulator.

Harry had wanted to do it himself, but Dumbledore told him to save his money on other more important matters and that he was old and didn't really need the money anymore.

Harry Potter and The Force of Magic

Book&Literature · Drinnor

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9d

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Same brain & IQ as hagrid. Sick self own. Used the same words :D

Tom smirked a bit. "You don't think your parents left you with nothing, do you?"

Harry Potter: The Dark Bonds

Book&Literature · Galaxy_Wonder

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9d

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Garbage knock off from a terrible OP fic that somehow manages to create something even worse. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Harry Potter Live Question In 1976

Movies · ZoroTraineeWriter

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10d

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Author doesn't know the disillusionment charm. lol

Invīsibilis- Causes the target to become invisible from everyone, including animals. However, it doesn't hide the target's scent and whatever noises they make.

Harry Potter: Wanted

Book&Literature · Booggie

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10d

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The dates are all wrong!!!!!!

-yesterday night Monday, February 5th, 1993 the French Art museum was broken into, and the famous painting planète des amoureux was stolen. Left behind was a picture of escaped convict Harry James Potter otherwise known as the boy who lived. Harry Potter is now wanted by the French ministry, he is already wanted by the British Ministry. What ministry will he be on the run from next?! Did the dementors make Harry Potter insane or was he always like that!

Harry Potter: Wanted

Book&Literature · Booggie

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10d

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Every 3 to 4 months I check for new HP fics and this one is another gem. One of my favorites and easily one of the top 10 HP fics I have read (and I have read every popular one). The picture of this story is a bit misleading since this is actually a very wholesome story and harry is smart enough to usually avoid violence and use his wits to solve his problems and strike back at his enemies. So nice OG characters and likeable canon characters. Some people complained about the slow updates... I don't think every 2-3 days is "bad" especially since these chapters are decently sized. Keep up the good work. One of my new favorite stories.

Harry Potter The Serpent

Book&Literature · Infinity_Weaver

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10d

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High action story. Overall quite a few new and interesting ideas. At first I was glad that this story did not waste time and was a high speed chase from start to go... now I am a bit sad though since the quality of the story is so high that it will be a shame that this will probably end in another 50-100 chapters. Anyway great story, easily one of the top 10 HP fics I have read, keep up the good work. Also you win the award for creating the most fucked up and evil Dumbledore in any fic.

Harry Potter: Dragon Eyes

Book&Literature · FakeViolinist

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10d

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Pretty sure at that point this is NOT true. Not even remotely. Happens WAY later.

'He knows. HE KNOWS!' she panicked, getting as red as the signature hair of a certain wizard family.

Harry Potter: Dragon Eyes

Book&Literature · FakeViolinist

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10d

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It still makes no sense for him to know all of this...

Peter Pettigrew's destruction was not actually high on Harry's list of things he had to attend to. There were too many things he counted as emergencies for that. No, Death Eaters were strictly 'targets of opportunity' as far as he was concerned. It was just that Peter had fallen practically into his lap.

Harry Potter: Hero's adventure

Book&Literature · Perfect_Lionheart

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10d

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Ron is stupid but he would never do that. He loves his rat and he sees it as a family pet.

Ron's jaw dropped. His anger evaporated, and he was off like a shot toward the common room to get his rat and make the trade before Harry wised up and changed his mind.