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It's like people who say "I don't like pizza with this taste", but eat more pieces than anyone else.
No need to care about. View More
Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C0
2 months ago
Thx for the chapter. I desire more. Like more chapters, more plot, more of the creative use of the plot points)) View More
My MCV and The Apocalypse · C17
2 months ago
The pace of story is good. It would be good for everything to be reasonable in some sense. I mean if where is some event, a little info about how or why it happens will do. It isn't always necessary, but it will make story more 'believable'. If i didn't misspel the word. English is not my native. View More
Absolute Stealing · C25
2 months ago
Thx for the chapter. I see no reason to kill Quing Shui or anything like that.
And especially i see no reason to change novel just because someone doesn't like it. This is fan-fic. It is supposed to be the created in the way the author sees it right View More
Absolute Strengthening Technique · C111
3 months ago
There was once a talk between Odin and Heimdall in which it was revealed that Brunhild is older than the Asgard itself. In that universe she was only trainer of Valkyrie's, not the captain or chief or whatever.
The main point i was trying to get us that Brunhild is even stronger than Odin and others. She even took down Celestial by herself easily, while Odin struggled with one View More
Asgardian Sword God · C4
3 months ago
Thanos is a warrior. He is like Thor in that regard, more like the one before the start of the first MCU film of Thor. Arrogant, prideful and blind to anything which didn't conform to his "standards".
Thanos is a gardener. He knows that to save flowers or whatever you are growing you need to remove weeds or other plants, because they steal nutrients from the plants you are growing and will kill them, so to save you plants you need to "remove" other plants and weeds.
And his name as Mad Titan isn't fir nothing. View More
Asgardian Sword God · C3
3 months ago
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There is a saying:
" -give customers what they want and everyone will be happy.
- But I don't know what they want.
- That is the thing, boy, no one knows, even the customers themselves, so we just need to make them desire thing we sell. That is much easier."

What i mean is that you don't need to change YOUR story just because someone said he doesn't like it. No matter how good your story is there are bound to be people who will not like it, even Harry Potter was hated by some people and it is a good book. View More
Here I Come One Piece World !! · C49
3 months ago
I think in this case it is because most of One Peace sword techniques are tailor made for "katanas". Author already stated that in the story, if i am not remembering wrongly, something like "he can't use his skills properly with non-katana swords". Something similar to that. View More

Obito_Tobi: a question why anyone that want to use sword always chose katana always every damn fanfic that goes with sword for mc always katana why not a two edged sword or a great sword why always fucking katana

Asgardian Sword God · C2
3 months ago
Story with a good potential in my opinion. Thx for the chapters and update more please View More
My MCV and The Apocalypse · C15
3 months ago
Thx for chapter View More
Here I Come One Piece World !! · C45
3 months ago
Thx for the chapter. View More
Fallout 4: In The Commonwealth · C10
3 months ago
Arlong is not a good guy. Everyone deserves redemption or whatever, but he is just like the serial killers - most of them didn't became like that by their own choice - their harsh life twisted their life and morals. But no matter what, it didn't change the thing what they did. It can explain their actions, but not justify them. View More
Here I Come One Piece World !! · C39
3 months ago
I am not sure about Komeng, but Arlong only started the thing as revenge, which in the end turned to into some twisted realisation of his dream - living on the surface along with humans in beautiful park like the one on Sabaody, while getting any thing(toy) they want. That's why they became so obsessed about money View More
Here I Come One Piece World !! · C39
3 months ago

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The Online Game Version Of Marvel. · C64
5 months ago
Patriotism is good thing(IMHO), but not in this extent.

Why most of the Asian, specifically Chinese, authors have so many nationalistic looks on the world? I can't understand that. Is Chinese propaganda of "we are good guys" really that strong in China? Every big country has this kind of programme for their own people, but i just rarely see that much "patriotism" in non-chinese-made novels.

Maybe it's my fault only seeing bad ones and thinking that everyone is like that(most probably that's the truth), but seriously i mostly notice this in Chinese novels. View More
I Found A Planet · C83
5 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God · C1515
6 months ago
Thx. The story is interesting for me, so i hope you continue this good work View More
ONE PIECE: Through the scope · C16
6 months ago
Hope you will became healthy soon, and continue writing. The story is interesting. View More
Monkey Pirate King · C43
6 months ago
Nojiko and Kaya maybe? Just because. Viper or that little girl on Skypea with prediction haki (haoshoku maybe, i just forgot the name) she was able to hear "voice" of all people around at young age. So she must be really talented in that kind of haki i suppose. Mermaid can be hired as well. The harpy girl on the Punk Hazard ( doflamingo subordinate). A lot of talented people there found on Dressrosa arena. View More
One Piece and the Celestial Dragon · C35
7 months ago
I mean that there is no need to do it forcefully. I mean sometimes when you write story comes naturally, sometimes you need to force it. And it feels like forced now. I don't mean that you need to change it or anything, it's just my opinion that maybe helpfull or may not be helpfull at all View More

HaremQueen: I write best when I have something to work with, I’m just trying to create something to do exactly that. If I kept following cannon, even I will lose interest.

[ON HIATUS] One Piece: Journey of a Lifetime · C52
7 months ago
Thx for the chapter. I don't think there is a need to make this complicated. It just can be an ark there MC gets new nakama and help old one's with growth. View More
[ON HIATUS] One Piece: Journey of a Lifetime · C52
7 months ago
Thx for a chapter View More
How Much For Your Soul? · C16
7 months ago
The comments for the previous chapter there not asking you to drop or change the story, at least i think so. The criticism was our opinion on what is wrong and why it is so. How to write your own story is up to you and no one can dictate you what to write. View More
Some LLS Fan Fiction (Ended) · C44
7 months ago
Well, i will be hoping that all this army matter will only have good influence on this story View More

HaremQueen: That also true. However, if what I’m imagining the basic training is going to be like is true, I probably will have my work cut out for me. Besides, thinking ahead and plotting everything just doesn’t suit my style. Even if I’ve got a detailed plot for upcoming chapters, it’ll probably be different anyway. That is..depending on my mood.

[ON HIATUS] One Piece: Journey of a Lifetime · C50
7 months ago
A lot of meaningless killing. In my opinion it would be strange for Yue Yu to treat him like a human after what he have done, as for loving him, she needs to be mentally ill for that. View More
Some LLS Fan Fiction (Ended) · C43
7 months ago
The only good side is that you have enough time to think about the plot. I sometimes feel it's more productive to think while training than while just sitting and doing nothing View More

HaremQueen: Don’t worry, basic training isn’t until September so there is still at least half a year. I’ve been informed that it will last for 18 weeks.

[ON HIATUS] One Piece: Journey of a Lifetime · C50
7 months ago
That's unfortunate. How long it may take? I still hope you can continue this story. It's enjoyable to read View More

HaremQueen: I heard that we are allowed to bring our phones. Although, I doubt I will have the time and leisure to update so often. Maybe I’ll have to go on hiatus.

[ON HIATUS] One Piece: Journey of a Lifetime · C50
7 months ago
Congratulations and thx fir the chapter)

Also, Can you still write while in military? I mean you will have less time, i think. For example, when i was in army the phones weren't allowed (we had phones anyway. All good if any oficer doesn't see it). And there is training and other exercises no matter which military you join, so i just thought it would be hard to keep updating the story if not impossible? View More
[ON HIATUS] One Piece: Journey of a Lifetime · C50
7 months ago
I mean, while experiencing things like "battle" with Traraniel or whatever kingdom, especially the whole plan of the king he should be at least get suspicious a little about this world being inhabited by some evil people View More

Uveilazatrum: I like this story but I can't comprehend why the intellect of mc is decreasing constantly.

The Sovereignty System · C115
8 months ago
I like this story but I can't comprehend why the intellect of mc is decreasing constantly. View More
The Sovereignty System · C115
8 months ago
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