annoyed

1yr

Replied to Moonwolf1235

Right I forgot that teal killed 2 people the second time round not 1 sorry.

ch 82 Causing Trauma 4

Earth's IP Game Designer {BOOK I COMPLETED}

Anime & Comics · Moonwolf1235

annoyed

2yr

Posted

Not very well thought out, at least in the first few chapters I stopped at chapter 7, I didn't continue after that. He apparently goes to a school for the first time yet has found a place in the back mountain to cultivate previously, the school matches up people with completely different levels for no apparent reason given that neither the high level people or the low level people benefit from a match where neither learns anything. He cultivates a technique with a "high entry threshold" but starts cultivating it on the first day that should instead be a "long practice time" as that at least makes sense. There's a random character who came out of nowhere to tell him about his opponent then disappeared feeling very plastic. Can't say anything about the update rate I never caught up to where the book is. The book expects you to just know what the levels are instead of actually informing you anywhere. It doesn't create a real background for the story it's just, this guy transmigrated and took this test a bunch of times to become a beastmaster because he can't become a martial artist, no real information about the world. The translation is okay I don't feel like I have to decipher what I read to understand, but it's not the best. Not a good book for those who are new because they don't tell you what anything means and those who have read many books can see the plot from miles away.

Imparting My Cultivation To Beasts Gets Me 10,000X In Return!

Eastern · Juju Lost in the Fog

annoyed

2yr

Commented

Everyone hates on Africa. Aside from the 2 constitutional monarchies, the one absolute monarchy and one federation the rest of the country is literally made up of republics. You have to win a vote to become leader and there's all kinds of corruption related to that, but you can't just kill off the old leader and take his place.

ch 1396 No Clothes

Don't worry about the argument the other guy's an idiot who can't read properly and thought you'd said the mc knew the exact time he'd rocked up in the other world instead of he could tell how many days it had been by how many times dawn/dusk had past, aka how many times it had become day and night he also seemed to think that having three days pass would be 48 hours without thinking about how having 1 day pass would then be 0 hours.

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Tempest of the Stellar War

War · Skeleton Wizard

annoyed

2yr

Replied to ALI_X_GAMER

Like the mathematical instrument?

"Wasn't it the two of you that invited me? We share the same destination, so we might as well head there as a team." Krune shrugged his shoulders. "Besides, it's my choice to join you as a team. I don't care about the opinions of some idiots I've never seen before. Come, let's register ourselves at the guild now."

Is that a Wisp?

Eastern · Suiyan

annoyed

2yr

Replied to deadman_344156

Not until you pointed it out 😁

[Rejected!] Crinis declared before thinking.

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

annoyed

2yr

Replied to annoyed

That is to say I understand Thomas no need for shame.

He idly noticed she still had trouble acknowledging the admittedly traumatising invasion that they had suffered through. There wasn't a man, woman or child in the city who could possibly forget the events of that fateful day, with the exception of one child, Thomas Barnes, who somehow managed to sleep through the whole thing. What Yasmine said was true, there really wasn't that much to do. Although he was still nominally in charge of the town guard, they had been reduced to essentially a police force, no longer responsible for defending the city from monstrous incursions. The Colony had taken care of that. He was one of the few people to know of the vast territory that the Colony had claimed, so large that Rylleh had been included within it, and of the measures they had taken to manage the wave, measures which meant that, so far, the citizens of the city had barely noticed a change other than the rising mana levels.

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

annoyed

2yr

Replied to NightDK

Thanks

He had to have known he wouldn't be able to defeat me, as wounded as he was, so why bother making the attempt? I get the feeling the demonic mindset is going to be very different than what I would expect to see from a normal sapient creature. Still, we learned a few valuable things from him, such as the name and location of the closest demon settlement to the Colony. We'll need to scout it out in more detail in the future, since I've little doubt we'll be conquering the place as our first port of call to extending the territory of the Colony into the third strata. I glance out of the vast terrain that is lain out before me from this high vantage point. Won't all this be better when it belongs to the Colony? I look down at the teeming hordes of demons down below. Just think of the farming possibilities…

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

annoyed

2yr

Replied to NightDK

? I missed the reference where should I go to find it

He had to have known he wouldn't be able to defeat me, as wounded as he was, so why bother making the attempt? I get the feeling the demonic mindset is going to be very different than what I would expect to see from a normal sapient creature. Still, we learned a few valuable things from him, such as the name and location of the closest demon settlement to the Colony. We'll need to scout it out in more detail in the future, since I've little doubt we'll be conquering the place as our first port of call to extending the territory of the Colony into the third strata. I glance out of the vast terrain that is lain out before me from this high vantage point. Won't all this be better when it belongs to the Colony? I look down at the teeming hordes of demons down below. Just think of the farming possibilities…

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

annoyed

2yr

Commented

Well I hope HIS bust doesn't stand out it would be weird otherwise.

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I reincarnated as a stone

Fantasy · Gasccart

annoyed

2yr

Commented

35+15+15=65

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I reincarnated as a stone

Fantasy · Gasccart

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2yr

Replied to Kurdi123

I'm not saying that we shouldn't eat meat, but a lot of the animals we've wiped out have been due to deforestation and the like not for food. Also hunting animals to extinction isn't really required when we could hunt some other animals when one of them becomes endangered. For the most part it's human greed.

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God´s Eyes

Urban · HideousGrain

annoyed

2yr

Replied to DaoistD81xIR

I would, but I made it a pure dialog story so now I don't know how to continue. My aim was to turn it into the aliens watching the Mc and commenting on his decision like they would a T. V. Show, but because they were aliens they'd occasionally say things like "bro did you see that tree it was so hot that green texture was amazing why didn't he stop and admire it" or things like that. But like I said because I went full dialog I don't know how to continue that idea.