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    Horror&Thriller

    4.4

    Admin notes: We've recently got an influx of files coming from all over the place There was one from building block b and another from outpost 274 I'll be recording all these files in the data base as well as sending it to You. Each file will be separated so feel free to read at any 'volume' below. Will update every Tues/Thurs at 19:00 I hope the results are what you expected to find. Admin 8

  • 3 Years Later

    3 Years Later

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    It's been 3 years 3 years since everything has gone haywire. I've heard that there's not much left anymore. That most of everyone is gone. Yet I'm still here. ========================== Updates every Monday and Friday at 19:00. There may be occasional updates on Wednesdays.

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    Realistic Fiction

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Moments

thank you for commenting once again! And who knows? :3 View More

WindinHair: Thank you for the chapter.
I wonder if the "voice" belongs to an alternate personality?

3 Years Later · C36
1 day ago

WindinHair: Thank you for the chapter.
I wonder if the "voice" belongs to an alternate personality?

3 Years Later · C36
1 day ago
Thank you for commenting again! :3 View More

WindinHair: Ty for updating.
Wonder what the deal with the drawer is.

3 Years Later · C35
5 days ago

WindinHair: Ty for updating.
Wonder what the deal with the drawer is.

3 Years Later · C35
5 days ago

WindinHair: XP

3 Years Later · C35
5 days ago
hi!
just want to say that I'm offically in the inkstone/writer discord now View More

WWFire: Dayum man, thank you so much for putting your thought in this review, I really appreciate it! I will try my best to improve my future writings. It seems that I haven't fully grasp the "show" element yet, aish... I did get a lot of that in my writing class. If only you are in the inkstone discord, I would have asked a lot already...

Layers of Nightmare
1 week ago
To start off, I'm so sorry I just saw this now! Didn't get any notifications about it until I was browsing at the site again.

Anyway, I just want to say thank you for the compliments! I strive towards trying to write to the best of my ability and make it so that the story runs smoothly :3 Never gotten a comment about someone asking if they were on the wrong site so that definitely made my day.
Also yeah, I really need to get the capitalization thing under wraps. Not sure where I picked up the habit from but I'll make a better effort considering someone mentioned it.

And thank you for the concern about my updating and what not. Kinda amazing how webnovel is all about churning chapters on the fly and having readers scoop them up just as fast. I'll consider about RoyalRoad (never heard of it before) but in all honesty it's okay. Mainly just writing stories for fun and to entertain the occasional curious reader. But thank you for caring about whether my potential on here is fair and what not.

Anyways, thank you so much for reading and I hope I'll see you in future developments of my story! :3 View More

WWFire: I've come here after you give me a full essay of helpful suggestions. I must say that your writing is screaming quality: your wide range of vocabulary and the smooth flow of each sentence... I thought that I visited the wrong site for a second.

Do forgive me, because I have no comment for your overall writing style; you are better than me in this field. Though, I must point out that you might want to check several capitalization mistakes.

I see that you don't update frequently. This site may not be suitable for you, dear author, and your great quality. I'd like to say that this site is like a fast-food restaurant; frequent updates and quantity takes precedence over quality. I want to suggest you to try publishing in RoyalRoad instead, I'm sure that people there will appreciate your work further.

3 Years Later
1 week ago

WWFire: I've come here after you give me a full essay of helpful suggestions. I must say that your writing is screaming quality: your wide range of vocabulary and the smooth flow of each sentence... I thought that I visited the wrong site for a second.

Do forgive me, because I have no comment for your overall writing style; you are better than me in this field. Though, I must point out that you might want to check several capitalization mistakes.

I see that you don't update frequently. This site may not be suitable for you, dear author, and your great quality. I'd like to say that this site is like a fast-food restaurant; frequent updates and quantity takes precedence over quality. I want to suggest you to try publishing in RoyalRoad instead, I'm sure that people there will appreciate your work further.

3 Years Later
1 week ago
I was on the fence about the discord but I decided on joining it since you seemed like you actually want my help. When I get verified, just message me about any qs I guess :3
And don't feel bad about not understanding the whole "show not tell" element of writing. No one starts out as a good writer to begin with. Takes alot of time and practice to figure it out but having people to give you suggestions will help out alot. View More

WWFire: Dayum man, thank you so much for putting your thought in this review, I really appreciate it! I will try my best to improve my future writings. It seems that I haven't fully grasp the "show" element yet, aish... I did get a lot of that in my writing class. If only you are in the inkstone discord, I would have asked a lot already...

Layers of Nightmare
1 week ago

WWFire: Dayum man, thank you so much for putting your thought in this review, I really appreciate it! I will try my best to improve my future writings. It seems that I haven't fully grasp the "show" element yet, aish... I did get a lot of that in my writing class. If only you are in the inkstone discord, I would have asked a lot already...

Layers of Nightmare
1 week ago
don't be afraid to contact me if you want clarifications or if you want to hear more of what I thought btws View More

SharpJester: Hi, so I just found you story due to the post you made on the forum and decided to give it a go.
please note that I tend to give long reviews so I'll do the tl;dr on the bottom if you wanna skip to it

First and fore most, I would like to congratulate you. I think you might be the first book I've read on here that I actually wanted to read more on. I'm not really one for the whole system/ceo/game genre so this is the first that I've read that isn't like that (yet maybe).

Things I liked:
There is alot of things that are unique about this book. First off, the character designs/world designs. I adore how you played with your writing. This being how you wrote in the 'game' notifications as well as having the z̸alg͞ó ҉t̨exts in there. It's the first time I saw it in a book and man did I wish I thought of it myself.
I also adore the monster designs and how you described the whole start up and even the building was very descriptive. I'll admit, I thought of silent hill while reading those chapters.

Now in terms of things you should look into improving
One main thing is that there was many times when I was broken from immersion, which I find is something you don't want to do with your book. Details like how weirdly specific the weight/height of items are or irl references to even mid-text a/n notes will break your reader's immersion. You can change these by either giving justifications for these details or changing it to be less descriptive. And if you want to talk to your readers, do it in the comments and/or the actual author's notes.
Next, I find that alot of the story felt like "tell not show". Alot of the time it felt like we were just being told what's happening, like the character did x then went over and did y. Which is funny because at times you do have very descriptive writing! Don't be afraid to add more imagery to things. Go into how William is feeling at the time or what the atmosphere felt like due to the lighting of the room and what did /that/ feel like.

Tl;dr
your story is unique in terms of how you play with your typing and how you describe aspects of it (like world design/monster design). You need to work on maintaining immersion and "showing not telling" in your writing.

I generally enjoyed reading this so far so I might stick around a bit, see how it goes. Sorry for the text wall by the way. I wish you luck in your endeavors and keep up with your writing.

Layers of Nightmare
1 week ago
Reading Status: C8
Hi, so I just found you story due to the post you made on the forum and decided to give it a go.
please note that I tend to give long reviews so I'll do the tl;dr on the bottom if you wanna skip to it

First and fore most, I would like to congratulate you. I think you might be the first book I've read on here that I actually wanted to read more on. I'm not really one for the whole system/ceo/game genre so this is the first that I've read that isn't like that (yet maybe).

Things I liked:
There is alot of things that are unique about this book. First off, the character designs/world designs. I adore how you played with your writing. This being how you wrote in the 'game' notifications as well as having the z̸alg͞ó ҉t̨exts in there. It's the first time I saw it in a book and man did I wish I thought of it myself.
I also adore the monster designs and how you described the whole start up and even the building was very descriptive. I'll admit, I thought of silent hill while reading those chapters.

Now in terms of things you should look into improving
One main thing is that there was many times when I was broken from immersion, which I find is something you don't want to do with your book. Details like how weirdly specific the weight/height of items are or irl references to even mid-text a/n notes will break your reader's immersion. You can change these by either giving justifications for these details or changing it to be less descriptive. And if you want to talk to your readers, do it in the comments and/or the actual author's notes.
Next, I find that alot of the story felt like "tell not show". Alot of the time it felt like we were just being told what's happening, like the character did x then went over and did y. Which is funny because at times you do have very descriptive writing! Don't be afraid to add more imagery to things. Go into how William is feeling at the time or what the atmosphere felt like due to the lighting of the room and what did /that/ feel like.

Tl;dr
your story is unique in terms of how you play with your typing and how you describe aspects of it (like world design/monster design). You need to work on maintaining immersion and "showing not telling" in your writing.

I generally enjoyed reading this so far so I might stick around a bit, see how it goes. Sorry for the text wall by the way. I wish you luck in your endeavors and keep up with your writing. View More
Layers of Nightmare
1 week ago
Thank you! Glad to be back. Happy to see a familiar face pop up in the comments again :3 View More

WindinHair: Welcome back author!!!

3 Years Later · C33
1 week ago

WindinHair: Wow!
I can't blame her for being so on edge.
Very intense chapter.

3 Years Later · C33
1 week ago

WindinHair: Welcome back author!!!

3 Years Later · C33
1 week ago
sure, I'll mention it to people who might be interested in it. :3
thanks for reading View More

Brandongould1994: Hi this is Brandon gould if you have any Social Media Platforms could you tell people about my book Demonsong
Just asking I do like your book and you read the most of it so you can tell people more about

Input Log Dates · C207
1 month ago
Thank you for another review!
This story line still has a bit more to offer so don't worry about it ending soon.
I have other storylines planned after this so you'll find more world building from there (also from the side plotline of the author's notes *wink wink*)
as for your question, the 14 that are left are still in the building from that chapter so far.
Sorry if that seems complicated but it'll become clearer later on.

Thank you for following the development of this story! :3 View More

Brandongould1994: Hi this is Brandon gould
I just read your chapters 195 to the most current one and I like where your story is going.

I do have a question if there where 24 residents and 10 died
Where are the other 14 did they escape before the complex was overcome with the unknown virus,creature or whatever

I hope that you continue down this storyline it reminds me of Fallout 3 in at least in this chapter, if when they escape and you want to continue with post apocalyptic that might work
But these are suggestions
Keep up the good work

Input Log Dates
1 month ago
I'm glad that you're actually taking advice from the reviews and implementing it into the story! :3 Just remember the general rule of "show not tell" and your writing/story will become the more interesting for both old and new readers alike View More

Brandongould1994: Hey this is Brandon just letting you know I did take your advice from the review you gave me and put it to use in several of the earlier chapters. I will be doing the same to the rest of the chapters
Thanks

The Demonsong Epic By the Brandon Gould who wrote Chossen Heros of Tylingariea
1 month ago

Brandongould1994: this is brandon gould
Thank you for all of your advice , i very much appriote it. you have let me know things that i would not have thought of impalmenting
and thank you so much for reading so far into the book. i very much like that, if you have any more suggustion i am ok with comments and be sure to tell pepole about it, i am also copying off my first book i wrote the Chosen Heros of Tyilingariea with is still in the editing process but if you would like to read it and give feed back that would be great

The Demonsong Epic By the Brandon Gould who wrote Chossen Heros of Tylingariea
1 month ago

Brandongould1994: Hey this is Brandon just letting you know I did take your advice from the review you gave me and put it to use in several of the earlier chapters. I will be doing the same to the rest of the chapters
Thanks

The Demonsong Epic By the Brandon Gould who wrote Chossen Heros of Tylingariea
1 month ago

Brandongould1994: Hi this is Brandon gould
I just read your chapters 195 to the most current one and I like where your story is going.

I do have a question if there where 24 residents and 10 died
Where are the other 14 did they escape before the complex was overcome with the unknown virus,creature or whatever

I hope that you continue down this storyline it reminds me of Fallout 3 in at least in this chapter, if when they escape and you want to continue with post apocalyptic that might work
But these are suggestions
Keep up the good work

Input Log Dates
1 month ago
:3
thank you for reading! View More

the0m: haha he got told off

Input Log Dates · C205
1 month ago

the0m: haha he got told off

Input Log Dates · C205
1 month ago
Thank you for reading! View More

FightingCrow: Thx for the chapter

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1 month ago

FightingCrow: Thx for the chapter

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1 month ago

WindinHair: I'll be around and looking forward to reading further content.
I'm definitely interested in seeing where this goes.
Take your time and don't let it stress you.
Your doing great!

3 Years Later · C32
1 month ago
Reading Status: C100
This is part of a review swap.
Sorry for being very late, you do have a very long book. I decided to stop at least midway from when I started to read. Maybe around 218+ since you keep updating.
Also warning, this is long.

I'll start right off the bat saying that normally this genre is not exactly what I'd read. At least not for this site. So take what you will with a grain of salt.

In terms of what I liked about it, the world is actually very interesting when you get to it. I especially enjoyed the tidbits in the beginning of each chapter about what era it was or what city or what not. I also enjoyed the names of the land in general, it definitely makes it feel more fantasy like. I did have a slight intrigue with the different powers and it was a shame I couldn't read more of how exactly they work. Also, great job with the consistent updating with the book. I get new notifications every day since you upload it multiple times per day. Great for those who read the story in it's entirety.

There is the fact, however, that you should try to be more descriptive in your writing. Places where a dramatic shot can happen ended up with the even being stated as if it was some history book. I also found that there was a lot of things that had no context at all for being there. Especially when random tidbits of IRL life is thrown in, like when you introduced the main villain as being called (by some) as the slender man. Pieces like these throw the reader out of the immersion and, for a fantasy book, that's not what you want to happen. Especially early on where it could deter new readers.

There are a few other things I want to touch upon but I decided this review is long enough as it is. Bottom line is that a little bit of descriptive writing can go a long way with your book and this fantasy world is incredibly interesting when you're able to make sense of it.

Best of luck to you dear author. Keep writing! View More
The Demonsong Epic By the Brandon Gould who wrote Chossen Heros of Tylingariea
1 month ago
Thank you for reading! :3 View More

FightingCrow: Thx for the chapter

Input Log Dates · C204
2 months ago

FightingCrow: Thx for the chapter

Input Log Dates · C204
2 months ago
Thank you very much! :3
Thus concludes book 1.
I'll be taking a bit of a break to prep for book 2 and proof read book 1 so hopefully you wait until I come back. Thanks for being my active reader View More

WindinHair: Amazing!!!
Those last few paragraphs packed quite a punch, as usual.
Very profound...
Please keep up the good work and don't stop writing.

3 Years Later · C32
2 months ago
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