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NEET_Vermin

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2018-07-27 Joined Argentina

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- This Novel has a "Gacha-type System" as the main power, with which you gain skills, magic or consumables. This seemed completely unnecessary and redundant to me, knowing that in that world there already exists a similar concept with the Falna, a Divine Blessing that gives skills and Status, and the Excelia, the Experience gained by defeating Monsters and allows you to level up. · Writing Quality: First of all, it is a Chinese novel translated with MTL (Machine Translation) and without much, if not any, editing. With that said, you already know that topics and cliches will enter into these types of stories. The grammar is very basic, but it is understandable. · Stability of Updates: 1 daily chapter with 93 chapters released to date. There is not much to say about this, it is perfect but they are not very long since I read more or less 20 chapters in less than 1 hour. · Story Development: At the moment and in the 40th that I have read there is hardly any change from the original Canon; The MC (Main Character) levels up in the Dungeon, meets the same characters from the original, joins a Family and this last one was quite forced... The plot moves very slowly and if it changes in the future I will modify this part. · Character Design: The MC is the archetype of the Chinese protagonist. A reincarnated character who already knows about the events of Danmachi. He has a Gacha-type "System" as his main power, with which he gains skills, magic or consumables. He is arrogant but without reaching the point of vanity, is shameless who gropes the breasts of a girl who is helping him because he is injured, when he kills monsters becomes a psychopath for no apparent reason... Comparing him to Gilgamesh is like comparing a sand castle to Mount Tai. · World Background: Only Orario. From what I have read, the protagonist started in the iconic city of the original and there has not been any mention or development other than Orario or the Dungeon. It becomes repetitive.
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Replied to Ronin46
...Or become Lady Avalon, both work for me.

"Now I become envious and jealous of Cath Palug. Ritsuka Fujimaru, so I finally found who is the shadow, the killer. He is really good at taking care of trash. Unlike daydreaming justice heroes MC, I like Ritsuka even more now. If only that stubborn king is like him, it would have been very interesting. He is like an MC for a story. Well, anyway, I am going to watch his journey for eternity," said Merlin with a smile.

Shadow Monarch In Fate Grand Order

Shadow Monarch In Fate Grand Order

Anime & Comics · LoneWolfAuthor

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Because canonically the Heroes cannot investigate or arrest the villains without the police and can only defeat them. That's why the Vigilantes exist, who oppose that rule. Bureaucracy indeed.

"It's necessary. To demonstrate UA's crisis management protocols are sound... That's the thinking, apparently" Aizawa replied, before explaining some more, "Compared to past years, there'll be five times the police presence. Anyhow, our sports festival is... the greatest opportunity you'll get.

The Powerful Eye System in MHA

The Powerful Eye System in MHA

Anime & Comics · Darkened007

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