Shahn12

9mth

Posted

it's a great story with awesome grammar and lovable characters reading it to its conclusion brought me immense joy and I recommend to at least try it.

The Phoenix - A GOT Fan-Fiction

TV · GodOfFreedom

Shahn12

9mth

Commented

c , ' 🐦🐔💀💀🐦ac' C 70

ch 204 A Witch’s Journey (2007)

Shahn12

9mth

Posted

I normally don't write reviews but this piece of art deserves it. There is no unneeded harem there is deep knowledge about the actual lore and realistic character, world and story development. Interactions between characters feel real and alive. This story is in my top 3 fanfics I ever read and that in all the websites I read on. I hope and pray for more chapters, all in all thank you for this beautiful story. 👍👍👍

Shahn12

1yr

Replied to Unleashed_Echo

hey I'm not good in English so sorry if I sound rude in the next sentence. you don't calculate those numbers that way let's say you regen 0.01% per point and you have 100 points and you don't type in the calcuator 0.01% * 100 instead you use 0.01*100 because you don't want a percent of the hundred but you want to know the 100 multiplier of 0.01 and the % symbole is just that a symbol you don't want in you equation

Every point of his Regeneration stat provides 0.1% max health regeneration per second. Then having 140 points in Regeneration stats, Katsuki heals 0.14% of his maximum health per second.

Overgeared: Transmigrated as a Super Named NPC but also as a Player.

Others · Unleashed_Echo

Shahn12

1yr

Commented

hey quick question you Worte 0.1% per point and he has 140 point and 140*0.1 is 14 soo shoulnd he Regen 14% of max health per second?

Every point of his Regeneration stat provides 0.1% max health regeneration per second. Then having 140 points in Regeneration stats, Katsuki heals 0.14% of his maximum health per second.

Overgeared: Transmigrated as a Super Named NPC but also as a Player.

Others · Unleashed_Echo

Shahn12

2yr

Replied to Sreat

no i copied the link on my computer abd filled it in and a website poped up that wanted me to buy archives or something

https://archiveofourown.org/works/32207689/chapters/79811983

Shahn12

2yr

Commented

the link dosn´t work for me?

https://archiveofourown.org/works/32207689/chapters/79811983

Shahn12

2yr

Commented

hey thanks for chapter and your a great author

ch 93 Chapter 12 Part 4

A Tale of Blood and Steel (WH 40K SI)

Video Games · OtakuWeibo

Shahn12

2yr

Commented

nice chapter i can´t wait for more here are 2 stones I reserved for one of my storys that don't update daily :D

ch 0 9 Chapter 8

Shahn12

2yr

Posted

It really shows promise 10/10 would read more and the thing is I don't know who the goddess is whos powers he gets so every power is a nice surprise for me and that's nice too, i like the mc character and interactions cant say yet a lot for character development but i hope it will be as good as the other stuff, grammar is nice too so that's a thing and in the end just a nice review from me in hopes for more chapters

The Emperor of Light - A generic OP MC fanfiction

Anime & Comics · ItShallBeChloe

Shahn12

3yr

Commented

Is commenting on paragraphs with spelling mistakes helping anyhow and when yes will you fix them when we show you the mistakes? But if only story criticism is allowed it's fine too.

Thanks for reading! I am al ays happy over constructive criticism and reviews.

Man I finished Drifters! I loved that anime the Characters are soooo badass. Hirano kuta is so good at writing. And one of my fucking most embarrassing Weeb moments happend today in Homeschooling. Man we talked about a text in German were the Wife cheats on her Husband and me the weeb fuck I am burst out with fucking NTR genre and what does my teacher do! She fucking googled it and read it ou loud infront of the class. I mean it meant `NTR or also known as netorare is a commonly and twisted genre from japanese manga and porn works...'! I was soo fucked man atleast she took it with humor and I clarified I HATE NTR. Rant end on to the story!

One Piece: Surviving With Nen

Anime & Comics · WhyAmIStillHere

Shahn12

3yr

Commented

Thank you for the chapter (☞ﾟヮﾟ)☞☜(ﾟヮﾟ☜)

ch 0 5 My School

Space-Time Lord In MHA

Anime & Comics · HattoriDaichi

Shahn12

3yr

Posted

When I started to read this fanfiction I was kind of bummed how the author realized conversation flow and how he marked it but later in the story, he changed and improved it (it's still not perfect and lots of times there is too much of she said he said or equivalent, so my tip is to just start a conversation with she said to know who starts it between them and then just write he shouted or so when necessary ). The story is good and even if I think there is a lot of potential still there, I need to remember that it's only the beginning. The author still deserves a 5-star review. So in short in my opinion if the conversation flow is improved one of the biggest mistakes that in my opinion turns a lot of new readers away is fixed and I would love if you (the author) would go back to earlier chapters and overwork the old conversation flow to make make it easier for new readers to join and enjoy your work.

Another Tale: Osborn

Anime & Comics · TheXVoid

Shahn12

3yr

Replied to DragonkingKyo

mhm next time i make such a comment i consider it as it seems it can be confusing

One Piece: Red Ghost

Anime & Comics · Gang_Capone

Shahn12

3yr

Commented

as a german myself i can confirm that i hated my time learning french even if I only learned for half a year and didn't retain anything so I pity you a lot dude

ch 0 5 G-5 X more X Training

One Piece: Surviving With Nen

Anime & Comics · WhyAmIStillHere

Shahn12

3yr

Replied to DragonkingKyo

pls no

One Piece: Red Ghost

Anime & Comics · Gang_Capone

Shahn12

3yr

Replied to Gang_Capone

if you make an unbelivable harem plot i will report you for reader abuse

One Piece: Red Ghost

Anime & Comics · Gang_Capone

Shahn12

3yr

Posted

if you keep that quality up (and make no bad plot harem where every woman just wants to fuk the mc) then I guaranty that this fanfiction will be a hit I read the first time today und i will give you all 3 stones and will continue doing that for this quality

One Piece: Red Ghost

Anime & Comics · Gang_Capone

Shahn12

3yr

Commented

the classic blunder

Unfortunately, Styxx was born during a very trying time, the Ottomans ruled Greece, and whispers of war were spreading through the empire, but luckily their town was relatively peaceful, and kept to themselves. When Styxx turned four, tragedy struck the loving family of three. War had broken out and his family was forced to give almost all their cattle and wheat for the war effort. Styxx's father was not forced to join as he had once taken an arrow to the knee when he had served as a young man, hindering his ability to walk, and therefore fight.

Immortality in MHA

Anime & Comics · The_Big_B0ne_Mommy

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