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Swayzs: Eu estou realmente gostando dessa obra, a história esta muito boa, mas quero dar uma crítica construtiva sobre a gramática. Autor o seu português é bom mas muitas vezes você erra na acentuação e pontuação.
Sobre a acentuação, em palavras mais complexas, não tem problema em não saber sempre, mas muitas vezes eu vejo o acento faltando na palavra "é" ou "até", o "é" posse ser confundido com "e" e isso atrapalha a leitura.
Sobre a pontuação, o maior problema seria que algumas vezes você coloca um ponto de interrogação ou outro e continua na mesma frase só que com letra minuscula, tem que ficar ligado nisso.
E tem mais uma coisa que eu não entendi o porque você faz isso, que é quando você aleatóriamente escreve uma palavra com a primeira letra maiúscula no meio da frase, sendo que não são nomes próprios.
Bem, era isso, vou dar 5 estrelas para dar o help, mas fica ligado no que eu escrevi.

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Eu estou realmente gostando dessa obra, a história esta muito boa, mas quero dar uma crítica construtiva sobre a gramática. Autor o seu português é bom mas muitas vezes você erra na acentuação e pontuação.
Sobre a acentuação, em palavras mais complexas, não tem problema em não saber sempre, mas muitas vezes eu vejo o acento faltando na palavra "é" ou "até", o "é" posse ser confundido com "e" e isso atrapalha a leitura.
Sobre a pontuação, o maior problema seria que algumas vezes você coloca um ponto de interrogação ou outro e continua na mesma frase só que com letra minuscula, tem que ficar ligado nisso.
E tem mais uma coisa que eu não entendi o porque você faz isso, que é quando você aleatóriamente escreve uma palavra com a primeira letra maiúscula no meio da frase, sendo que não são nomes próprios.
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half_empty: Lol I doubt your laziness could ever match up to mine 😂 thanks for all your support number one fan! 😘😄

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The Hitting Zone is one of the few masterpieces on this site, so do not hesitate to read this novel. And my dear half_empty, if you're reading this and you're wondering why your top one fan has never done a review, it's because my laziness is out of this world.
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