GraySerpent

5mth

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Gold is a weak metal, soft. It doesn't seem like a very good martial art if it's called Goldfinger, it's like calling it Soft Finger.

ch 0 6 Late Night Attack

Becoming Immortal Through Getting Married

Eastern · Little Overlord From Bamboo City

GraySerpent

5mth

Commented

Eh, as soon as it got weebie I dipped.

ch 0 2 Chapter 2- Visitors

Multiverse Internet Cafe: The Game Maker

Video Games · LazyTanaka

GraySerpent

5mth

Replied to Player0Kun

Literally why I stopped reading this here.

ch 26 History doesn't add up

Bringing the game items to real world

Video Games · thelightedghost

GraySerpent

6mth

Replied to Slushy_Apollo

His power adheres to the laws of the universe. He can't regenerate from one cell. If he did, it would be a new person, because new neurons are empty and untrained- he'd be like an animal in the shape of a man for the first few years of life after regeneration- doesn't sound like the best kind of immortal to me. :|

ch 16 Why is there no reaction?

Bringing the game items to real world

Video Games · thelightedghost

GraySerpent

6mth

Replied to GraySerpent

I was lied to. Since when did GOW stand for God of War? It's ALWAYS stood for Gears of War in gaming culture. ALWAYS.

ch 0 1 1 – Reincarnated as Poseidon

Reincarnated as Poseidon in GOW

Video Games · Pop0

GraySerpent

6mth

Commented

It's going to be interesting to see what will happen if you put poseidon into gears of war.

ch 0 1 1 – Reincarnated as Poseidon

Reincarnated as Poseidon in GOW

Video Games · Pop0

GraySerpent

10mth

Commented

Translator translated spirit as demon.. interesting.

ch 0 9 Dad Wants to Buy Ten Thousand Pigs!

I Swear My Pool Don't Have A Python

Sci-fi · Pen And Dream

GraySerpent

10mth

Replied to GraySerpent

Also- author agrees that Boruto is canon and that Naruto has aliens. Boo. Any true naruto fan says it ends at the end of Shippuden and Kaguya isn't some alien but an anomalous woman who discovered Chakra and used it to become a powerful immortal until her sons locked her away for wanting to devour all chakra in the world. Boruto and most of the movies are non-canon to any sensibly minded fan of naruto.

ch 0 3 Destroy Curse Mark: Caged Bird

I’M IN NARUTO, SIGN IN ŌTSUTSUKI AT THE BEGINNING

Fantasy · XslopX

GraySerpent

10mth

Commented

This is the utmost junk-food novel in existence, it's pure hot trash.

ch 24 23: The Trial Commences: Hate Crime Against the Unicorns

Reincarnated as an OP Loli

Fantasy · YuujiEveryleaf

GraySerpent

11mth

Replied to Zbara_1577

Right, lame af, actually doesn't work in combat. People who think it does are anime weebs. Which author obviously is because he kept banging on about how mc went to japan to mastered every martial art because he's an uber chad.

ch 0 1 Prologue 1: Dying

Star Wars: The Holy Empire

Movies · Necromancer_God

GraySerpent

11mth

Commented

Okay- it's bugging me now. Bodily isn't a word you can use in this way. If you remove Bodily, every time you use it, the story makes more sense.

ch 87 The Chunin Exams - 13

Naruto: Systematic Shinobi

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0

GraySerpent

11mth

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Nor would he watch one piece. Naruto is a serious parallel world story. One Piece is just downright silly. Dude's made out of rubber because he ate a fruit and he's like that forever. Every character in One Piece is therefore just randomly acquired power vs Naruto where everyone trained hard for their powers.

ch 0 1 1 Kozuki Shiro

Naruto: The Template System

Anime & Comics · Navy_King

GraySerpent

11mth

Commented

oof, bad english :(

ch 0 1 1. Chance to have a New Life

The Shinobi of Straw Hats

Anime & Comics · PeekACoo

GraySerpent

11mth

Replied to 13abaYaga

Pointless, that just turns him into a Hozuki clan member.

ch 13 Home

Elder Scrolls: Naruto

Others · Myumara

GraySerpent

11mth

Commented

reborn as harry? Ugh, no thanks, I'm out.

ch 0 1 Chapter 1

Dark Lord Dumbledore

Book&Literature · Chado_Sama

GraySerpent

11mth

Commented

Sigh. What a fucking shame. Biokinetic ability, check. Anti-hero MC, check. Interesting backstory and reason for ROB existing, check. The let down and deal breaker is this has to be a fiction for a JP anime that's absolute dogshit.

ch 0 2 Chapter 2

Limits of the Flesh in DXD

Anime & Comics · Azazyel

GraySerpent

11mth

Commented

Shadow Clone itself is a literal cheat. It makes every jutsu OP. For example, Flying Raijin x Shadow Clones, you can teleport to any shadow clone, anywhere at any time and they can do the same - ofc the limiter is chakra amount for sustainability. Since none of the MC's moves use chakra, because they aren't from the Nin world- if he learned Shadow Clone instead of Flying Raijin, he'd be unstoppable- he could instead put all his chakra into shadow clones and then they could swarm the enemy instead. So now he'd have quantity AND quality.

ch 45 Chapter 45 Mission

Naruto: The Great Swordsman

Anime & Comics · Navy_King

GraySerpent

11mth

Commented

What a shame. If you'd just had the MC be reincarnated normally, this would've been fine. The MC has centuries worth of life experience- i.e., you're just making up a reason why the MC can magically deduce everything that's happening like some omniscient spectator.

ch 0 1 The cycle begins again

Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)

TV · Chill_ean_GUY

GraySerpent

11mth

Replied to Anonny_Anonymous

Additionally, just having orange hair doesn't automatically mean you're an uzumaki. Look at Yahiko, for example.

ch 0 1 Reborn(Most Heinous Act)

Koushin: Konoha's Dragonborn[Completed]

Anime & Comics · TheFanficGod

GraySerpent

11mth

Commented

VERY bad writing. Feels like a twelve year old wrote this. 'Special Ops Soldier' MCs are so cringe.

ch 0 2 Prologue (1)

Naruto : The Demon Swordsman

Anime & Comics · Charizard6

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