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See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire View More
Forty Millenniums of Cultivation · C1
1 week ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire View More
Forty Millenniums of Cultivation · C1
3 weeks ago
Thx for the chap 😃 View More
Limits · C314
4 weeks ago
Reading Status: C21
You deserve 5 🌟

I mean the quality is there from the beginning. The characters are interesting. The story is interesting too. I wasn't bored at all when I read it. In overall very good novel, would recommend. Keep up the good work, and don't stop. With more chapters, you will get more views and more reviews. It's a good story, so don't get discouraged. All the best 😃 View More
Second Chance Addison
4 weeks ago
Thanks for the chapter. Release when you can. View More
Our Lovestory · C30
1 month ago
I'll put on backburner and review it later. View More
After School Tuition Centre · C1
1 month ago
Reading Status: C2
Cliche after cliche. Although the quality is good, It's like you can guess what is going to happen next. This is nowhere near an original story, and the release rate is abysmal. I have no clue whether this is dropped or not.

But I sure know this is totally generic, copy-paste story. You can find 1000 of such things on this website. View More
Ruler of the Night
1 month ago
This is just copy paste of previous novels with the same concept. Two chapters and everything is the same, as it is in other novels. Why read it if it's not original? View More
Ruler of the Night · C2
1 month ago
Cliche young master... Yea. Hitting those overused things straight in the bullseye. View More
Ruler of the Night · C1
1 month ago
Overused beginning. I mean how many times did I see a guy or a gal being hit by a car or in an accident, then reincarnating into some other world? Surely you people can use a different concept than a car crash. View More
Ruler of the Night · C1
1 month ago
My suggestion is: don't go with the system. Just make him adapt naturaly. As for any bloodlines, I'd leave that for future chapters, not for beginning.

Where you reincarnare him is up to you. Optionally, you can abandon the whole reincarnation stuff, and start from the point where he would reincarnate, just without that concept. It will be less generic and more unique. View More

ExodusGaming555: Thanks for the review and comment. I'm rewriting this novel after I feel I've wasted this novel potential by using system. You're right about me using seems and that a tad too much.

Also, I'm making the character too op fast because he managed to kill a lv 17 bird when he was literally lv 2. Although I can a tribute it that the falcon growth was variant and headed more towards VIT + it was a juvenile and have no battle experience.

But still, I'm making him too op that sooner or later I will hit a writer block.

So I've asked for a suggestion to you in the comments one one of my chapter about where is the direction my novel should go.

1. He died and reincarnate as a monkey amongst the monkey tribe

2. He transmigated/summoned and have a monkey bloodline.

Thanks for any suggestion 😂👍👍

Overturning Fate (~A Journey of a Lifetime~)
1 month ago
As you like. View More

marjzach2012: But mind you, the mc is not senseless, she's just experiencing true to life hardships and challenges in life that in the next succeeding chapters she will become stronger than ever.And this is not just for 18 years old either. Coz in the real world, any female will experience more than those hardships anyone could have specially to those kind of women that's not that blessed with wealth but grew up from a poor family.

Can True Love be Found from Online Dating? · C10
1 month ago
Reading Status: C9
Where do I start? How about the broken English? I laughed when I read this. Not because the story is funny, but because the mistakes are funny.

I understand someone is not fluent in English. That's fine. But surely, this is the quality of google translation. It's so bad.

When I read this, it reminded me of a manhua I read in the past. It was called The Gamer. I don't know if author based his novel on that or not. Yea the updates are fine, the story could be interesting, if not for the generic stuff inside. Overused op stuff, and so on. Feels like copy-past of something else.

Brainless characters... Yea. Nothing else to add. View More
Survivor of Creation Trial
1 month ago
If I read it correctly, his excuse to his mother, is unbelievable. "Yea, I went with some old dude to his DWELLINGS". 100% not believable, his mother probably thinks now, her son got raped... Sad story. View More
Survivor of Creation Trial · C5
1 month ago
Maybe, if you can get through that broken English. View More

SmileyFace: My Instinct tell me this will be great story, please continue!!!

Survivor of Creation Trial · C1
1 month ago
I'd read more, but romance is not something that I read, especially with senseless mc. To me this is childish, I'm not 18 years old girl to like that type of stuff. No offense, but I gave an objective view on that, personally this is a 1 🌟 to me. View More

marjzach2012: Thanks for dropping by.But you might wanna reconsider. For this is only the beginning of thier love story. And you have not seen enough yet.If you continue to read more chapters you will find and understand the beauty of it.

Can True Love be Found from Online Dating? · C10
1 month ago
Reading Status: C9
Right. Not that many mistakes, and I can see you are editing stuff. This is good, but I still suggest that you pay attention to word "seems". You used it a lot in the beginning chapters.

As for the story? Yea I assume he is or will be OP. Not that I would give you bad review due to that, but it is overused. Especially the system stuff. I personally would prefer if he fared for himself without that system. Now he will have everything handed to him.

Story has potential, if the author makes it unique. Besides that, yea give it a try if you are into system stuff. View More
Overturning Fate (~A Journey of a Lifetime~)
1 month ago
Might be 1800, but most of that is notifications. View More
Overturning Fate (~A Journey of a Lifetime~) · C0
1 month ago
A lot of ding dongs. Usually the reason why I don't read system novels. You have chapters with info dumps, which to some can be enjoyable. But I'm no longer 16 😃 I'm not saying you should change or something. Just commenting. View More
Overturning Fate (~A Journey of a Lifetime~) · C0
1 month ago
It seems... 😃 you use that a lot. I'd suggest looking into that View More

ExodusGaming555: Comment for anything I could do to enhance this novel. Thank you🙂🙂

Overturning Fate (~A Journey of a Lifetime~) · C0
1 month ago
In that case, I will review it later, and read more. If as you say the quality is better, then I will change my score. View More

SharpJester: Thank you alot for the review!

I will admit the earlier chapters do have a lot of unnecessary mistakes, especially since I was trying to emulate what a glitched computer log looks like, but I assure you the 'glitches' are less prominent within the other volumes if you're willing to try. (each volume is it's own story after all)

regardless, I'll be sure to up the release schedule once I am less busy with both work and school.

once again, thank you for the honest review.

Input Log Dates
1 month ago
Right. So the lyrics should come after you introduce her. People will be confused, if you simply paste a song at the beginning. That is my opinion at least.

Edits. It needs some. Grammar for one (not a lot) but the flow of each sentence too. Besides, as I mentioned, the direction of your novel. It matters, because you have a clear goal to write towards. Whether it's long or short, having a goal is not a bad idea.

I don't really know what else to say. I mentioned everything I could think of, so the rest is up to you. View More

may1st: Can you go through it once more, i made some quick changes, also you are right about the slow update stuff, my readers are complaining already 😶

HEARTBREAK IS REAL · C1
1 month ago
Enter the crazy woman! Yyy well what can I say? The singing part was confusing, I only realized that she was singing, after she sang. Some kind of indication, that those are lyrics would be good.

More depth. As in, introduce the mc a bit more. I only learned her name towards the end. Also indicate that she is speaking with herself. Use some kind of signs like * or perhaps something else.

My suggestion, describe her. Stuff like her look, age and so on, then say something like "but Lauren had one secret. She was crazy about xxx idol. Not a typical fan crazy... The other crazy".

Something like that. People will then understand, why she is talking to herself. You also have two (or maybe more) directions you can take with this novel. First one, the usual. The rich guy notices her, they fall in love, blablabla. Or she becomes a stalker. Now, the 2nd option would be much more unique, unlike the generic rich guy -poor girl thing.

You can also go different direction. Like she dies and reincarnates. Which is overused as hell. Go with something original, your novel will stand out more that way. As for the title... Depends on what you want to write. I'd go for something not generic, or something that is ultra generic... I don't know, I'm not an author 😃

That is all I will say. Other than that, work on one novel at a time. Focus on 1 thing, and readers will come. If you write 2 or 3 stories... Your releases will suffer. Your edits too, less time to edit, means worse quality. Hope this helps you out. View More
HEARTBREAK IS REAL · C1
1 month ago
Reading Status: C22
Are you trying to write creepypasta? I like the idea, but the amount of mistakes in each log... Is painful. They are super short, and somehow the release rate suffers... Yea.

You have a 5 🌟 story potential here, if you edit everything, and release at least a "chapter" a day. Anyway good luck with it. View More
Input Log Dates
1 month ago
Reading Status: C10
Much to be desired. I'm not going to make this long. The mc although a teacher and 30, acts like a spoiled brat. Seriously, so much ridicolous stuff happens, that I couldn't continue.

I don't know if this is a good story or not. The quality is not bad, and a few edits would improve it further. You get loads of releases. But I'm not the guy to ask anything else here. Personally, I dropped it after that cheating thing. View More
Can True Love be Found from Online Dating?
1 month ago
So she is basically cheating. Yea. I've seen enough. View More
Can True Love be Found from Online Dating? · C10
1 month ago
Yyy yea. I mean I never met such a desperate woman. This will not be happy ending I assume? View More
Can True Love be Found from Online Dating? · C6
1 month ago
Yea, but actually agreeing to a 5 grader's remark about her boobs, is fiction. No teacher would let that slide. The kid would be in big troubles. View More

marjzach2012: Teachers can't smack a kid nowadays... You will be sued coz of "Child Abuse Law".

Can True Love be Found from Online Dating? · C4
1 month ago
Reading Status: C8
The story has potential, but the quality... I saw some people saying it's actually good... It's not. I had to spend considerable amount of time, figuring some things out. Another reviewer pointed out the tenses, but I will add even more. The sentences are mangled sometimes, that they just don't make sense.

It can be edited, but looking at the release rate, I wouldn't hold my breath. If author takes this (and yaoyueyi I believe) review seriously, and improves. Yep, it could work out. Just read yaoyueyi's review, and you will get the gist of some of the problems. I think her score though, is a bit too encouraging. The other scores? Review swaps... Which I don't understand the purpose of. View More
Eastern Odyssey
1 month ago
Reading Status: C25
Let me start by saying, that I read it from 17th chapter, just like author asked. Truthfully, not a bad story, but there is some plot armour involved. I personally would prefer a more ******** version, but that is personally.

Quality is there, all chapters I read I understood. I didn't have to wonder about meaning whatsoever. A few mistakes, but again 5 🌟 for quality.

Release rate though. I understand that people are busy. But this site asks me to rate that, so I do. Character design is not bad, but then again, too many coincidences and many "good" characters appearing.

World building is 5 🌟 I have nothing bad to say here. And then there is the story. If developed well, I'd say it will be a good novel to read. Keep up the good work, and work hard. You can make it to 1m views no problem. View More
Duality
1 month ago
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